issy2 Posted July 10, 2006 Share Posted July 10, 2006 Edited Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Babybyers Posted July 11, 2006 Share Posted July 11, 2006 Very good, descriptive, short and sweet. I could see this all happening in my head as you spoke. Great write you got there ~~Byers The Carter III"I can get your brains for a bargain, like I bought it from Target.Hiphop is my supermarket, shoppin' cart full of fake hiphop artists." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kelem_ryu Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 omg! if you really soak it up, it could make you cry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
issy2 Posted July 13, 2006 Author Share Posted July 13, 2006 Woo! Is that a compliment? :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kelem_ryu Posted July 13, 2006 Share Posted July 13, 2006 not if you meant the story to be funny =P just read your other (longer) story. you really don't need to worry about others appreciating your storys. just keep writing and you'll get appreciation anyway i'm sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
InkofDeath Posted July 16, 2006 Share Posted July 16, 2006 this story has great detail and a very great ability to make the reader think that the write is alot bigger then it actually is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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