reddawn509 Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 Right well I was bored and I wanted to try pixles agian....so I did, I think it has turned out quite nice up to this point, I jsut need someone who can show me the correct way to do the hand, I have tryed and tryed and It never looks right :cry: .....anywho here it is.. the hand is supposed to be like open palmed kinda like something just left it? the classic mage pose...i guess :? it is really hard to put in words o.0 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 The lips are too big. The whole look of the character reminds me of a Gypsy. Lawl. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted August 3, 2006 Author Share Posted August 3, 2006 The lips are too big. The whole look of the character reminds me of a Gypsy. Lawl. I noticed the lips too, im gonna downsize them a bit :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 Possibly a bit too red too. Amulet possibly a bit big? And waist too small? The shape of the body is too curvy. Even for a woman (Though I think it's a man - the lips kind of stray away from that though) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted August 3, 2006 Author Share Posted August 3, 2006 eh i meant him to be thin and yeah i see the curvy.....i cant get the right lip color..so I did the best I could, ill fix the curves..thanks..oh and I meant the ammy to be big, its jsut my thing...i guess Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 They should be skin coloured. The top lip should be quite dark, and the bottom light, except at the part where it dips in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted August 3, 2006 Author Share Posted August 3, 2006 eh I tryed to fix lips and..curves...better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kalbatorix Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 the lips got better but i still see the curves Seling 45548 Airs PM if u want to buy some! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GonAndGary Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 To me, the head/hood looks oversized compared to the body, or the body is too skinny for the head. either way you look at it. Thanks To: Everyone for the siggies, especially Kal for the Pixel.Currently Playing: FIFA 07, NFS: Carbon, Morrowind and Dungeon Siege II. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 Yeh, he's still way too skinny. Even if he did have a curved body like that (ew) then the robes would still drape and cover the curves. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted August 3, 2006 Author Share Posted August 3, 2006 ahh thats true....ok ill fix that..anyone have some insight on the hand which..not to be rude, was the whole point of this topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goldwolflord Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 ahh thats true....ok ill fix that..anyone have some insight on the hand which..not to be rude, was the whole point of this topic Well it wouldn't be much good having a near-perfect hand and a totally disproportional, wrongly shaped body now, would it? ;) As for the hand, just outstretch your own and take a look at it. If you can, take a picture too. It'll make it easier to draw and to explain if anyone walks in the room. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted August 3, 2006 Author Share Posted August 3, 2006 heh joo got a point there gold, and i did that and the hand looked totally messed up....its so much easier with pencil and paper....I guess ill take a pic...maybe that will help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
the_trinity_11 Posted August 3, 2006 Share Posted August 3, 2006 Gypsey look lol, i think so too... Maybe make lips a size down #-o And try turning robes a light shade of black maybe (ahrims style, i know i'd like it better, but i LOVE ahrims) PLAY this awesome game...Clicky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 BIG head small waist/body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
deloriagod Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 His amulet almost looks like a Flavor Flav clock :shock: Might want to make that smaller.. Internet Marketing For Newbies Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pureleader18 Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 FLAVA FLAV, YEEE BOI :oops: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
reddawn509 Posted August 4, 2006 Author Share Posted August 4, 2006 His amulet almost looks like a Flavor Flav clock :shock: Might want to make that smaller.. roflmao!....you made me laugh..but I'm still not changing it :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godslayer Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 Lets see. -He has these little boomerang upside down that dont look like a texture and I assume are folding attempts? Heres a thought for learning to make proper folds- Drape some curtains over a chair and draw it, or over a family member optimaly if you can get them to stand still -His hood goes all the way to his shoulders. The hood should go very slightly outside his neck, and his shoulders in turn should be a heads width apart from the neck. One of two things is wrong here- The body is too small, or the head is too big. Simple. And there is no middle ground here- theres one or the other, you need to make a descision, or this is never going to look good. -Hes far to skinny. I dont care if he was 'supposed to be skinny or not', your body can not physicaly, not -possibly- be that small in conjuntion with a head that large. His neck is the size of his abdomen. -His waist is too far up. If his head is going to be this big, and the sig size remains constant, his waste should not be present in the sig -Even if he were that skinny, robes are not meant to cling to the skin, and your shading certainly gives no idication that its clingy anyways. The shoulders would support the robes till they hit the pelvis, and the robes would basicaly fall off the shoulders giving him a pretty uniform width. Theres alot more that you can improve on pixelwise, but I'd rather see you stop pixeling and simply learn what a human looks like, but thats wishful thinking. You'll probably keep bumbling on human anatomy and correcting your errors piecemeal. Just remember that you could learn basics of anatomy that could help you in any and all mediums in a week or two. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beesafree Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 My feeble attempt, :D use it, lose it, or fix it up i don't mind http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mac_The_Rocker Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 I'm quite rubbish at shading, but here's your "touch of death" Some things are best left unexamined. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iv_Green_vI Posted August 4, 2006 Share Posted August 4, 2006 s really hard to put in words o.0 :o!??! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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