Guest corro Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 rate/comment/buy :P *new version* any advice or constructive criticism would be great, any tips to improve the new version or if its better/worse let me know *better bg?* btw just adding random shiznit to the bg as i dont have any ideas on what to put in. . . any ideas? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djscoobsta Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 good 4 / 10 try adding somethign to background like stars ... it looks empty :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
unknownmasterofnothing Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 This is actually a kinda nice try. Guys a little fat. Hat, shirt could be less wide. Angle on the turn table needs to be lower. Dunno what the top right corner is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
djscoobsta Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 This is actually a kinda nice try. Guys a little fat. Hat, shirt could be less wide. Angle on the turn table needs to be lower. Dunno what the top right corner is. i agree and make the hat point up more and have some EVIL eyes under it :twisted: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Jeppoz Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 Not bad for an early try...however if there's something to point out i'd start with the guy. The console has a strong "3d" impostation while the poor guy looks very flat. More shading should be made and a full frontal view isn't what better matches the prospetcive setting u used. Plus his anatomy is pretty messed up...expecialy the arms. The head is 2 big and having the cap covering it saved you time but personaly isn't the top choice imo. The bg might need some work on disco theme...Nice cube logo even if...alone in the bg is pretty odd. Keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 cool man, i like em...8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 new guy has to wide of a head, and looks like he has clevege (if you know what i mean). Those are just some little things, its cool really. GJ on it. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
misterxman Posted September 8, 2004 Share Posted September 8, 2004 Very nice, but you forgot to shade/color the table between the cables (white spots). Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest corro Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 ty xman, didnt notice that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
laxation Posted September 9, 2004 Share Posted September 9, 2004 very nice original style =) keep it up and maybe one day people will be paying 1.5mil+ for it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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