cool

um, any1 else interested in reading?

nice story dude

thx. u read the stry twice?

great story!! Cant w8 i wanna know how it ends! I read the WHOLE thing!

thank u! i'll post some other chapters. i havent been writing much cuz i was on vacation.

The Guardians

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Smoky shapes appeared, one like a horse with armor and a helmet with a horn. An other like an eagle with a helmet and leg greaves ending in sharpened talons. Another one was like a snake, with metallic wings, and armor on its underbelly. There was one that was like a bull, with armored horns, and armor draped upon itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s back. Another smoky shape was a warrior, fully armored. The other was a dragon, with multiple heads. They all galloped or flew through the air. The armor was glimmering silver, in contrast to their smoky skin. Their skin moved like smoke, always rising. Their red eyes glinted in the distance, but within seconds, they had reached the campsite.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅThe great silver guardiansÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

errr bump. again.....

yeh i luv it i red all of it one problem tho make the sections smaller the story dusnt have to change just say half ur posts that way i dont have to read 4 eva lol but seriously more ppl will read it if its smaller

did u get the town names from varok, faldor etc

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

yeh lianne if u actually read the story u mite have spotted his age which was 14 (14 is still a child in my opininon ) i am 13 not much of 14 and i dont think in big words and i am in top sets (not bragging) i think it ses he is 14 neway i cba re reading it no offence it is good but still i wudnt re read it straight away plus i am not bothere aba grammar

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

p.s i mite sound like im defending him but its a good story dont skit it

lol im 12. i turned 12 in august, i just thought if i put 12, it would be weird cuz he can do all this cool stuff. i can do flips by the way :P

Wow what a great story! Glad I found it... Sad to see it not get finished, but anyways hope everyone else enjoys it. Bump.