Cloaked_Shadow Posted July 15, 2004 Author Share Posted July 15, 2004 cool ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloaked_Shadow Posted August 7, 2004 Author Share Posted August 7, 2004 um, any1 else interested in reading? ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Gon Posted August 7, 2004 Share Posted August 7, 2004 nice story dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloaked_Shadow Posted August 7, 2004 Author Share Posted August 7, 2004 thx. u read the stry twice? ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Orunge Posted August 8, 2004 Share Posted August 8, 2004 great story!! Cant w8 i wanna know how it ends! I read the WHOLE thing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloaked_Shadow Posted August 9, 2004 Author Share Posted August 9, 2004 thank u! i'll post some other chapters. i havent been writing much cuz i was on vacation. ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloaked_Shadow Posted August 10, 2004 Author Share Posted August 10, 2004 The Guardians Smoky shapes appeared, one like a horse with armor and a helmet with a horn. An other like an eagle with a helmet and leg greaves ending in sharpened talons. Another one was like a snake, with metallic wings, and armor on its underbelly. There was one that was like a bull, with armored horns, and armor draped upon itÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s back. Another smoky shape was a warrior, fully armored. The other was a dragon, with multiple heads. They all galloped or flew through the air. The armor was glimmering silver, in contrast to their smoky skin. Their skin moved like smoke, always rising. Their red eyes glinted in the distance, but within seconds, they had reached the campsite. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅThe great silver guardiansÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâæÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâà ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloaked_Shadow Posted September 17, 2004 Author Share Posted September 17, 2004 errr bump. again..... ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ste_mc_efc Posted September 27, 2004 Share Posted September 27, 2004 yeh i luv it i red all of it one problem tho make the sections smaller the story dusnt have to change just say half ur posts that way i dont have to read 4 eva lol but seriously more ppl will read it if its smaller Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ste_mc_efc Posted September 28, 2004 Share Posted September 28, 2004 did u get the town names from varok, faldor etc yeh lianne if u actually read the story u mite have spotted his age which was 14 (14 is still a child in my opininon ) i am 13 not much of 14 and i dont think in big words and i am in top sets (not bragging) i think it ses he is 14 neway i cba re reading it no offence it is good but still i wudnt re read it straight away plus i am not bothere aba grammar p.s i mite sound like im defending him but its a good story dont skit it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloaked_Shadow Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 lol im 12. i turned 12 in august, i just thought if i put 12, it would be weird cuz he can do all this cool stuff. i can do flips by the way :P ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k0pkaas Posted May 13, 2007 Share Posted May 13, 2007 Wow what a great story! Glad I found it... Sad to see it not get finished, but anyways hope everyone else enjoys it. Bump. I got 99 problems but a noob ain't one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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