August 20, 200619 yr welll...i saw how many orders for pixel signatures there are so i decided to test my skill at it... so? pretty good for a first? :XD: i assume you know what to do.... if not here's a reminder: rate, hate or C/C also got any ideas for a background? i was thinking varrock sewers oh yeah....rip and i'll come after you with a patatoe EDIT: the rat is not done yet FYI (For Your Information) http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/
August 20, 200619 yr Your anatomy is awful... shadeing is good, but it looks a little soft... no real large shifts in light\dark the head is an oval and the hair is popping off of it.. the rat just looks plain wierd... ever seen a dog (i am assumeing a dog is about the size of a giant rat...) jump off on all four feet like that? ehhh no lacks polish but overall not bad for a first sig... you need to work on anatomy though New sigzor^^
August 20, 200619 yr I like the person personally, execpt his arms, they looks a bit funny. It'd look better with a background of course and the rat looks like a...umm i dunno what to call that but not a rat. Damage splot on the rat needs some work too :wink: PLAY this awesome game...Clicky
August 20, 200619 yr right elbow is a right angle :shame: the rat looks like a possum. Damage splot needs work. I like the shading and his hair du. What is that in his right pocket? A TURD?? Red Blade Hunters: 80+ | 70+ FA | 3+ Years
August 20, 200619 yr well for a first it nice nekst time try to keep these things i mind . -clean out your lines befor u start( if u don't know hwta this means, read one of the pixel stickies) -most people add aborder and tekst last -avoid the line tool, when i say this i look at the arms and legs -skin is bones with muscles, fat with skin around it try to make it look like that. because ur arms are sticks -the shading is pretty nice for a first, but way to soft. the rat is hardle shaded.and the contrast between 2 tifrent colors is verry low ... -study the anatomy of the human body and animals for that mather.. don't get me worng on this is good for a first but far for perfect ... I'm sure wile making more pixels or skill will improve....
August 20, 200619 yr What is that in his right pocket? A TURD?? i actually lol'ed at that... its the charicter and the rats outlines that need smoothing out, to sharp of angles and all that stuff wop wop
August 21, 200619 yr Author the anatomy isn't that bad...it is exspose to be cartoonish, cartoons don't have perfect anatomy... the rat, as i said, isn't done i have a bit to do... the hair is a litle weird but i wanted him to look surprised... hmmm line tool? i didn't use that at all...all pencil tool :XD: how fix the hit bubble? any ideas? thnx for the comments http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/
August 21, 200619 yr the anatomy isn't that bad...it is exspose to be cartoonish, cartoons don't have perfect anatomy... the rat, as i said, isn't done i have a bit to do... the hair is a litle weird but i wanted him to look surprised... hmmm line tool? i didn't use that at all...all pencil tool :XD: how fix the hit bubble? any ideas? thnx for the comments 1) The main thing in anatomy is his arm :| You want to try doing that in real life...? :lol: 2)The rat, doesn't really look like a rat, so personally i think you have more then a "bit to do" 3) I like the hair.... 4)Lol only used the pencil tool and not lign? Wow then that must've even took longer 5)Ummm....Trying doing a damage splot to a random monster and take a screenshot of it... then zoom in and see how it's done (maybe zoom into about 400%, i forget how MSpaint works for zooming :? , and then you could make yours SIMILIAR to that. :P Hope that helps you out : PLAY this awesome game...Clicky
August 21, 200619 yr Author lol runescape isn't working on my computer right now but..... i did a little tutorial on making fake damage screen shots a while back for blaze so i have a damage splot saved =p lol http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/
August 22, 200619 yr Author 1) The main thing in anatomy is his arm You want to try doing that in real life...? what arm right or left? left is easy and the right one ain't that hard either...you mean you can't do that? :? http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/
August 22, 200619 yr 1) The main thing in anatomy is his arm You want to try doing that in real life...? what arm right or left? left is easy and the right one ain't that hard either...you mean you can't do that? :? :shame: If you tell people to rate/hate you shouldn't lash out when they do. You shouldn't make his arms perfectly straight lines.
August 23, 200619 yr Ok... the rat looks a bit weird for starters... maybe change? Second, the background's white... are u addin anything? But overall... pretty good for a start. Love Pixels...
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