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7/10 Its alright but the feet (to me) look....wierd #-o

 

 

 

Gj tho =D>

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The watermarks make it kind of hard to see some stuff but I'll have a go.

 

 

 

First off, anatomy. The noses on the faces don't bulge out like real noses, they're just lines. The one in full sara has messed up legs. The right leg (our left) is waaaaay longer than the left leg. This is not the 80's, big hair is out ::'. All joking aside, the heads seem a bit too large. The feet are ok but placed oddly. The woman on the right has her right foot (our left) placed what looks like almost sideways but the legs comes out of the body in a different direction. I believe that's a feat ony contortionists achieve :wink:. The woman on the right also looks like she's leaning back which would completely put her off balance in real life. Try making her appear more upright. The woman on the left is pretty good but her legs are disproprtionatly sized :?.

 

 

 

The items in the room are ok. The phat on the ground is complete junk and looks like a cardboard stand-up.

 

 

 

The floorboards go straight out fram the wall on the left making a sliver against the back wall, ruining the effect.

 

 

 

No windows is odd but not a fault.

 

 

 

The grains on the wood are great and I like the knots you've added.

 

 

 

Overall, your biggest problems are anatomy and shading. Give everything a bit more depth and fill out the sig a bit ad it'll look ok. I'd love to see how you improve. :thumbsup:

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the dragon skirt on teh wall looks flat.

 

the abysal demons head looks flat too.

 

the girl on the left has a busted (our)left foot.

 

the girl on the right needs biger bewbs, and the santa should come down and cover part of her forehead.

 

the top part (circle thing) on the ancient staff has 4 little rectangular things coming out in between the holow parts (on the outside of the circle)

 

 

 

kinda off topic. the one on the left made me think of paris hilton and my spanish teacher (inside joke)

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nice but the 1st lady looks like ghitti from your mothers clan anarchy sig and the background looks like 1 misterxmans and so does the abby

 

im not saying u ripper but i think if u did look at it a bit for some help then u should credit them

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