Okay guys.

 

You probably don't know me, I'm an amatuer artist, if you really want to call me that.

 

Cut through the crap, heres my art. A lot of it is junk, I know it doesn't look right, so lets be nice.

 

 

 

Sorry, it's really, really messy. Please bear with me.

 

 

 

oh, and if you really wanna critique me, look at the stuff at the bottem, thats the best, the crappier is at the top.

 

 

 

http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/9234/scan0001cf4.jpg

 

 

 

http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/975/scan0002kg2.jpg

 

 

 

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6510/scan0003nv4.jpg

 

 

 

http://img228.imageshack.us/img228/7968/scan0004ht9.jpg

 

 

 

http://img324.imageshack.us/img324/2733/scan0005zb6.jpg

 

 

 

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/8614/scan0006cn4.jpg

 

 

 

http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=scan0002kg2copyne3.jpg

 

 

 

COMIC 1

 

http://img83.imageshack.us/img83/6687/comicnumber1xw7.jpg

 

 

 

http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/993/smallerbadasslx3.jpg

 

 

 

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/7630/supermothaflippingloawerquatliyygs3.jpg

 

 

 

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/346/forthateriodudeextrasupershadingtrenchcoatercopyjm9.png

 

 

 

http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/346/forthateriodudeextrasupershadingtrenchcoatercopyjm9.png

 

 

 

http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/6510/scan0003nv4.jpg

 

 

 

http://img106.imageshack.us/img106/8520/itsryanlolwe2.jpg

 

- Ryan ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ

 

 

 

http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/166/illamawv3.png

 

- iLlama

 

 

 

http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/3704/practicingheadsta9.jpg

 

- Practicing With Heads

 

 

 

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8144/prettyokaydealhu3.jpg

 

- More Practicing With Heads, warning, crappy anatomy.

 

 

 

http://img63.imageshack.us/img63/3985/sammeestillwrokingonthoughwv4.jpg

 

- My friend SamÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s head, WIP IÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢d assume

 

 

 

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/1185/smallerbigguypersonfo7.jpg

 

A Llamorse

mmk....

 

 

 

copy the second to last one or thierd to last one to ms paint, and try pixeling it in, using that as your linework :)

not everyone does pixel art eckered.

 

 

 

very nice actually Jack, your cartoons are very well created, they have a lot of style and originality. I'd love to see your work CG'd, it'd add so much more to them.

so? i was just giving him advice on what i would do if i had a scanner >.

everyone isnt you either.

I do like your style, although if you arn't going for a cartoon look then from what you already have you can quite easily acheive a realistic look that will improve with practice.

 

 

 

Remeber the following :

 

 

 

A human body (neck to base of feet) is aprox 6.5 heads (rough measurement)

 

 

 

Try some extra shading to add detail, if your not good at brush pressure simple scribble a bit, it will imply shading and can actually look very effective.

 

 

 

Keep your hand relaxed while drawing, i've seen many people improve DRASTICLY from simply relaxing their hand, dont focus so much of making it perfect, its the slight imperfections that makes drawings look more realistic.

 

 

 

Nice drawings, keep up the good work and keep posting as you draw so your progress can be watched.

 

 

 

Black flat