Art Class Stuffssss

[LP]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41155022/

 

Crap.... *see above*

 

 

 

 

 

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/41155382/

 

*read description...

 

 

 

i could have done WAY better on both of them but time restraints in school prevented so...

 

 

 

Crits, heavy ones please... especially on the first one.

[xvillexvalox]

I really like the secound one, more my type of art. Only suggetion I can make is have someone cheat for you on your matting. :

[Nadril]

Good stuff man, I like :) .

[pryomancer]

I dont know if this is just the scanner doing this, but on the first one-

 

 

 

its too dark around the edges and too light around the dolls waist area

 

 

 

also i think the edges of the doll are too blurred in with the background, its quite hard to tell whats doll and what isnt

 

 

 

overall its pretty good i like it

[Fortress2000]

Quite nice, though the anatomy on the second one looks a little strange. He seems to be leanding to one side, whilst walking straight.... :-k

 

 

 

The first one.... too dark. Also, I can't really make out what it is... A person in the middle, then what? Strange, but nice.

 

 

 

 

 

Total..... :-k 8.5/10

[Nahdrav]

Whoops,double post.

[Nahdrav]

Nice sketches,i really like the perspective on the second one.

[LP]

I dont know if this is just the scanner doing this, but on the first one-

 

 

 

its too dark around the edges and too light around the dolls waist area

 

 

 

also i think the edges of the doll are too blurred in with the background, its quite hard to tell whats doll and what isnt

 

 

 

overall its pretty good i like it

 

 

 

Didnt scan

 

- took pic with a digital camera + flash, so what ur seeing, im guessing, i the flash reflecting off of the paper.

 

 

 

Also the blurring is either my cameras fault, or crop/resize fault...

 

in real life it its easily distinguised but my camera is quite old and ive been known to have shaky hands which may be the cause.

 

 

 

Also i re-sized it from a much larger size and i didnt sharpen it after doing so, so it may also have been blurred slightly from that.

 

 

 

Quite nice, though the anatomy on the second one looks a little strange. He seems to be leanding to one side, whilst walking straight.... :-k

 

 

 

The first one.... too dark. Also, I can't really make out what it is... A person in the middle, then what? Strange, but nice.

 

 

 

 

 

Total..... :-k 8.5/10

 

 

 

http://parsec-santa.com/art/images/vincent.jpg Original by Vincent Van Gogh. as you can see i tried to depict the same pose.

 

 

 

As for

 

"The first one.... too dark. Also, I can't really make out what it is... A person in the middle, then what? Strange, but nice."

 

 

 

It is a person in the middle, although i advise you to read the title of the work ;)

 

 

 

Thanks for the crits everyone.

[Kuroi_Ame]

Loving the second one. :D

 

 

 

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kuroi