Looking for some good c/c and also hoping to get some bids. Took me long time to make, like 5 hours to make. well anyway rate away/flame/bid and have fun :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

nice, but the figure is very linear try adding some curves! ;)

nice, but the figure is very linear try adding some curves! ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

lol i tried and when i accualy got something that resembled a human like thing i decided to just stick with it lol, there will always be a second sig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

your guy is very small and flat, so its hard to find the focus of the sig

your guy is very small and flat, so its hard to find the focus of the sig

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the focus of the sig is that i just made it up as i went lol, it was just for fun lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

nice, but the figure is very linear try adding some curves! ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i second that.

The shading is good but i'll second with the character problem

j/w..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Why does the sky get darker as you approach the SUN, a source of LIGHT?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That kinda threw me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All the shading seems to be off in a similar fashion. I happen to think that the side of an object closest to the sun would be the BRIGHTEST.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not trying to be critical, just having a bit of a depressing 18th bday.

 

nice, but the figure is very linear try adding some curves! ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i second that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

is there such a think as thirding it???

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

nice shading on rocks for 1st one :P

j/w..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Why does the sky get darker as you approach the SUN, a source of LIGHT?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That kinda threw me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All the shading seems to be off in a similar fashion. I happen to think that the side of an object closest to the sun would be the BRIGHTEST.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not trying to be critical, just having a bit of a depressing 18th bday.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dude your sig has sample on it, did you steal it? We don't like stealers here on Tip.It :o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways.. back on topic.. V nice background and shading, although I don't like the guy, he's not bad, but his feet are a lil messed up (Yeah, I know feet are hard, also the mask should be 1 pixel wider, will make it stand out more.) And what's he holding?

 

j/w..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Why does the sky get darker as you approach the SUN, a source of LIGHT?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That kinda threw me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All the shading seems to be off in a similar fashion. I happen to think that the side of an object closest to the sun would be the BRIGHTEST.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not trying to be critical, just having a bit of a depressing 18th bday.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dude your sig has sample on it, did you steal it? We don't like stealers here on Tip.It :o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways.. back on topic.. V nice background and shading, although I don't like the guy, he's not bad, but his feet are a lil messed up (Yeah, I know feet are hard, also the mask should be 1 pixel wider, will make it stand out more.) And what's he holding?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

umm...it says "images on the above rotation are for sale", so they are his own...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

anyway, i don't like this style of pixeling, the uber softness of them somehow takes away what i like about them, it's a different cartoony feeling. but it's ok, except for the man, keep it up

 

j/w..

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Why does the sky get darker as you approach the SUN, a source of LIGHT?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

That kinda threw me.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

All the shading seems to be off in a similar fashion. I happen to think that the side of an object closest to the sun would be the BRIGHTEST.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Not trying to be critical, just having a bit of a depressing 18th bday.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Dude your sig has sample on it, did you steal it? We don't like stealers here on Tip.It :o

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways.. back on topic.. V nice background and shading, although I don't like the guy, he's not bad, but his feet are a lil messed up (Yeah, I know feet are hard, also the mask should be 1 pixel wider, will make it stand out more.) And what's he holding?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What do you mean it says sample...? I've been slowly adding on to this with other posts... I wouldn't rip anyone elses work if my life depended on it. Also i agree and i think i will make the med 1 pixle wider. Also the thing in his hand was meant to be a knife but i rushed it. I have a better idea on how to make it now so i will update it later.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Also the reason the char is so messed up is because i'm not very good at drawing, but its the best i can do atm lol, still my first and you know what they say, with time comes experience.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit: i just updated the sun and the knife.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the good c/c

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

Jlr I was talking about UTSnyper about the sample.. Sorry if I didn't make that clear.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Helm looks better ( I thought it was a mask :oops: ) only thing now is the feet, I can show you what I would do with them if you like.

if you could help with the layout of char and feet that would be great, i'm horrible at trying to make characters.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

THanks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

JLR!! long time no see, great to see your still in the business, great sig btw, very nice shading, but try and add some curves :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope to see you on rs soon! 8)

JLR!! long time no see, great to see your still in the business, great sig btw, very nice shading, but try and add some curves :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hope to see you on rs soon! 8)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yeah ill be back soon :wink: just gotta earn some gp for some armour lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr

Another update on it, made it so it doesn't look like the guy got sacked anymore.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jlr