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5th Pixel Rate and suggestions please:)


Spec-Hunter

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add more detail to the mountains, not just a few lines, and add more shading to the character

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i don't know what to put on the mountains, and it would be a miniscule work, because the mountains are so far away

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but thanks for the suggestions:)

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The background/foreground needs more shading.

 

 

 

The character needs more shading, and not-so-heavy shadowing.

 

 

 

More blending of colours could be used.

 

 

 

What are the 2 random blue objects? (the large one, and small one).

 

 

 

Don't use the paint bucket tool to colour objects.

 

 

 

Add some perspective.

 

 

 

Don't colour/gradient your mountains like that, it looks really bad.

 

 

 

Spend more time shading and blending.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^There's some CC for ya ;)

 

 

 

Otherwise, it's quite nice...

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add more detail to the mountains, not just a few lines, and add more shading to the character

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i don't know what to put on the mountains, and it would be a miniscule work, because the mountains are so far away

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but thanks for the suggestions:)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

isnt pixeling ALL miniscule?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but its nice :)

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add more detail to the mountains, not just a few lines, and add more shading to the character

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i don't know what to put on the mountains, and it would be a miniscule work, because the mountains are so far away

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but thanks for the suggestions:)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

isnt pixeling ALL miniscule?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but its nice :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i mean like.. that trees are dots on the mountain:P

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lol i dont say it need to be trees :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

but those mountains are just like... mine :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

not really :P mine look like pointy Female things :P and your mountains are more like male thingies:P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ymms did you blend and shaded your sig in gg?

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ok ...

 

 

 

1, detail, your mountain look like theyve had chocolate sauce, you shount make it brown, make its like a ligth grey,

 

 

 

2, there is virtually no shading, colouring half the guy a darker colour isnt really shading

 

 

 

3 wats with the miscellaneus black rocks?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and what are there wizard robe bottoms just stading there?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2nd sig

 

 

 

1, the bg is ok one again shading they just look like green blobs..

 

 

 

the girl has weird folds in her clothes, its pretty random, there should be like a trend/pattern instrad of random scribbles

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

once again, the person is the only thing u attempted shading..

 

 

 

Nice font tho!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5/10,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.:'':.Cool Banana

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ok ...

 

 

 

1, detail, your mountain look like theyve had chocolate sauce, you shount make it brown, make its like a ligth grey,

 

 

 

2, there is virtually no shading, colouring half the guy a darker colour isnt really shading

 

 

 

3 wats with the miscellaneus black rocks?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and what are there wizard robe bottoms just stading there?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

2nd sig

 

 

 

1, the bg is ok one again shading they just look like green blobs..

 

 

 

the girl has weird folds in her clothes, its pretty random, there should be like a trend/pattern instrad of random scribbles

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

once again, the person is the only thing u attempted shading..

 

 

 

Nice font tho!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

5/10,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

.:'':.Cool Banana

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

second sig was there to show my proggression with pixel art :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the black rocks aren't ligted by the sun so they are completly in the shadow ,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and for the shading , i'm going to do the next sig's shading in GG

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