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Hey guys, on my website, i made my best online friend an admin. I sent a letter to him. This is the letter, and i wanted to know if i should add anything or take anything out. Here t is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nikos, I would love to promote you to a higher rank. I now promote you from;

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Legend, to,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ADMIN

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can now log into the admin group.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can now do anything you want to the website.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can now, be an admin .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Over the past 1 year that i have been playing runescape, you have always told me to follow my dreams and to never give up. I did follow my dreams. One of my dreams was to have our own website. And one of my dreams was to become the best in runescape. Although you have told me to try my hardest at things i want to do in life, i am sorry to say this but, I am quiting runescape. I know that you were the one nikos, who never gave up on finishing your dreams. You got 99 fletching not because you thought it woud be fun, or not because you were bored. You did it because you had the courage and strength to do that. You nikos, were the one person that i looked up to in runesape. You were my friend. And you always will be .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~~Jenova.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jenova is my acount name on my website and his name is Nikos. So, is it good? Please reply.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thank you.

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need 130k willows for 99 fm, or 3 mil to buy them "sniff"

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Drop the freakin' commas!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You overuse them so much and space out the message.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

After 1 sentence there is like 10 lines to the next one.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Plus, it is too wordy.

SWAG

 

Mayn U wanna be like me but U can't be me cuz U ain't got ma swagga on.

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:lol:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It is a bit overdone... Just shorten it up a bit. ^_^

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I made it a ton shorter!!!!!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here it is:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Nikos, I would love to promote you to a higher rank. I now promote you from;

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Legend, to,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ADMIN

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can now log into the admin group.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can now do anything you want to the website.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You can now, be an admin ^_^ .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Over the past 1 year that i have been playing runescape, you were my friend. And you always will be ^_^ .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~~Jenova.

d3m0nxer1ho3.jpg

Hate is a strong word<3:

clickme1jp0.gif

need 130k willows for 99 fm, or 3 mil to buy them "sniff"

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better ::'

RIP Michaelangelopolous

u can control my tip it account, but youll never control how fine i am!

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I love N_odie and would never edit his posts! I love Rainy_Day too <3 And also Cowman_133. <33 Oh, and Laikrob is a going to hunt me down and kill me like a pest kangaroo if I reveal how awesome she is. I owe tripsis skittles. DarkDude feels like he's missing out. This is my siggy! - n_odie Rainy_Day MINE! - n_odie Rainy_Day And meol shouldn't feel left out. Oh, and Y_Guy is a noob awesome

 

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