Volture Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 This is the first pixel i actually make, its not done yet i still have to add the ranger and clouds... can you advise me on what to add or what to improve on? cus i know im really bad just dont rub it in... :roll: I made it at paint btw... you know the one that comes with xp :roll: :lol: Heres the newer version :roll: I changed alot of it... i didnt make all the shadings. I really must improve on pixels ill make more stuff like this, any more correction guys? or some c/c? I really must say it have changed alot thanks to you guys. And i still have to add a sun. CHANGED shading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 shading a sky his six pack not made of eggs the arrow tip looks like part of his face better grass blood looks rubbish theres a chunk outta his shoulder blade he doesnt have a groin no hips the ruby ammy looks like a dog collar his hands too small to hold an axe whats up with his fingers? is that ment to be grass? weres the sun? the med looks like a hair cut with bunny ears on top basically... 1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 12, 2004 Author Share Posted October 12, 2004 Thanks... :oops: told ya im really bad at this :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest DeathMinion Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 here here to being honest... :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 12, 2004 Author Share Posted October 12, 2004 shading a sky his six pack not made of eggs the arrow tip looks like part of his face better grass blood looks rubbish theres a chunk outta his shoulder blade he doesnt have a groin no hips the ruby ammy looks like a dog collar his hands too small to hold an axe whats up with his fingers? is that ment to be grass? weres the sun? the med looks like a hair cut with bunny ears on top basically... 1/10 can't shade sky, im stupid. well it dosent look like eggs to me :|, yea thats true ill change it, this is the best i can do... ill might try, how do you want blood to look like :roll:, yea thats also true ill change that, no he dosent :lol:, yea i'd say that too, i doubt that, forgot to paint em. you wrote that down twice, no sun yet... well if it looks like a hair cut with bunny ears on top how come you knew its a med :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 12, 2004 Author Share Posted October 12, 2004 well smelly your quite right... this is an awful sig :| Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mcqueen Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 Just a few things that need to be worked on. Also dont forget shading! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 12, 2004 Author Share Posted October 12, 2004 Thanks but i know [cabbage] about shading... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=82865&start=0 somewhere between the bottom and the middle of the first post theres a few examples on shadingways might help Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted October 12, 2004 Share Posted October 12, 2004 http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=82865&start=0 somewhere between the bottom and the middle of the first post theres a few examples on shadingways might help i love the way you did the background it blends in like on that could you make a more detailed tutorial on those kinda background that would help me alot (ms paint) if you cant be bothered hehe nice style anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 http://forum.tip.it/viewtopic.php?t=82865&start=0 somewhere between the bottom and the middle of the first post theres a few examples on shadingways might help i love the way you did the background it blends in like on that could you make a more detailed tutorial on those kinda background that would help me alot (ms paint) if you cant be bothered hehe nice style anyway Ill work on it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 Well ill better add some shading and change the med and the axe and the shield, and prolly make the arms come out from the shoulders... ill remove the blood and ill put the arrow in the air not on h is face... ill also might add a ranger or texture... and change the amulet abit... i have some work to do :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 Wow i just figured out im really bad at shading. :lol: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arthu Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Wow i just figured out im really bad at shading. :lol: You know how you get better? Try again. Train until you success. 99+ all 23rd March 2012 - 2496 total 13th June 2012.9000+ dragon drops! Including draconic visage, d chains, d spears, d2h, d claws, d meds, d legs, d skirts... d bones, d hides :)?I want jagex to put resource dungeons and dungeoneering skill doors to dungeoneering floors so I can dungeon and get dungeoneering xp while I dg so I don't have to dg to get dg exp, but I can dg while I dg :)? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 heh thats true :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toad Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 start with say a really dark blue for the sky make the shading a tiny bit lighter then a tiny bit more and it will look alot better than big jumps in shades Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 im fluffing it up for you right now adding shading etc etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 Thanks, i can use it as an example and make more sigs... and hopefully get better :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 I changed the shading abit, do i start with darker to lighter or lighter to darker? :?: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 heres the changes i made you sometimes didnt have outlines at some points but then did on other points.. dont do that either no outlines or outlines, and if you do no outlines make it a darker tone than the color inside it? if you get what i mean? if you zoom on it you'll see how i shaded it, i adjusted some of the colors, i didnt shade some stuff or detailed some stuff (feet and ground) as you can see sky start with a light tone then move up to darker, its hardly notice-able but if you look at the real sky, (sort of bend) you see that its done this way IRL skyes to and i made the next shorter and less triangle like i added some things that are just my style like the shoulder pads , hope if you zoom on it with MS Paint you'll see some stuff how and youll get allot better :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 Wow, your really good. what program did you use to shade it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Quer_Skulll Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 Wow, your really good. what program did you use to shade it? Ms Paint Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vladmoney Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 still prety bad, needs a lot more work. Fix the legs, the whole background is bad, the bax, etc. Visit my DeviantArt Page at http://vladmoney.deviantart.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blazer Posted October 13, 2004 Share Posted October 13, 2004 You could still put more colours in the sky inbetween the ones already there. Atm it looks a bit blocky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volture Posted October 13, 2004 Author Share Posted October 13, 2004 What should i add? except a sun... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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