Necromancer_Magic Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 Hey! I retired from "The Gallery" after many people hated my work #-o But after reading This great tutorial - (by DementedHero)... So im taking up pixeling, i Have NEVER Pixeled in my LIFE Anyway, Back on topic! What i really need is some PRACTISE ! ... Makes perfect ! So - First in best dressed situation. I will only be doing 1 at a time. The first person to request (not to complicated) pixel, i will do, Then (if you are so kind) to rate it as i am going or my finished product. Rules: - You May criticise - Constructively - No Hijacking - No Excessive Spam - Do not Flame me/Other members who are trying to help - Mainly TIF Rules... When critiquing, remember: * To highlight both the good and the bad about the piece. Comments without actual points of how to make the piece better are near-useless for the purposes of this forum. Pixelation is not a Gallery Showcase forum. It strives on helping people get better. Even if something seems faultless, look closer. There's always at least minor nitpicks to offer. In contrast, a post full of critique and not a single word on the merits of the piece, while would be very useful to an artist, might also upset him or demotivate him. Therefore please remember to say what you like about a piece as well. * To be articulate. When possible, go into detail explaining the reasoning behind your observation. It's one thing to say 'that arm looks broken, lol' and another to explain how the underlying muscle structure would work and why it gives you the impression it's broken, and finally, which would be probable means of fixing it. Optimally, the latter is what we're going for. * To Edit! There's only so much words can say to get your point across, sometimes you have to edit the piece. In Pixelation, when you post a piece of artwork, you are agreeing to have your work potentially edited. Malicious edits or useless edits are frowned upon and discouraged, respectively, but otherwise, consider it a honor somebody else put the time to try to show how your piece could be better. Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varda Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 A dragon! In blue/black, with some blue flames, and a sky background. Full body, no need for so advanced. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromancer_Magic Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 A dragon! In blue/black, with some blue flames, and a sky background. Full body, no need for so advanced. :D anything else? Thats er... alittle plain ? My edit: Place: Wilderness It has snowed recently. Dragon is fighing someone, breathed fire and melted snow... i'll do some linework - its easier to explain Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
r_q_h Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 A dragon! In blue/black, with some blue flames, and a sky background. Full body, no need for so advanced. :D anything else? Thats er... alittle plain ? My edit: Place: Wilderness It has snowed recently. Dragon is fighing someone, breathed fire and melted snow... i'll do some linework - its easier to explain you cant ask not to be flamed if you do that, your bound to be flamed if you dont just do what there asking and say "its a bit plain i will edit it a ton and completely go out of your idea", if the person wants the dragon wih sky background then thats want they want, they dont want you saying its too plain and editing it. Apparently I am 24 yrs old, live in Cali have a fertility problem with a guy name Ken. :shock: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromancer_Magic Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 A dragon! In blue/black, with some blue flames, and a sky background. Full body, no need for so advanced. :D anything else? Thats er... alittle plain ? My edit: Place: Wilderness It has snowed recently. Dragon is fighing someone, breathed fire and melted snow... i'll do some linework - its easier to explain you cant ask not to be flamed if you do that, your bound to be flamed if you dont just do what there asking and say "its a bit plain i will edit it a ton and completely go out of your idea", if the person wants the dragon wih sky background then thats want they want, they dont want you saying its too plain and editing it. But, its just a dragon... I just need to make it interesting... on second thoughts... i'll just do the orignal idea, its practise Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B_50_2 Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 Some dude with a whip and gilded. Beating up a man with rune on. Yeah it's plain :) You make da rest 8-) If anyone remembers me... PM ME. having nostaligia issues D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromancer_Magic Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 Here's my line work: So far C/C ? Be honest.... BTW i just hurried the neck I have to add: -Horns -Ears -detail - rotation view... i think the side is a little flat Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dharockslayer Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 What I find funny is the sample signs, three is enough? anyhow, the neck looks awefull. And why 2pix lines? ifnot more. one is more then enough. Interrested in joining the cabbagy madness? Click here to go to our forums, and say hi ^^lol one of the biggest pvp updates of the year, and tip it is discussing granite Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromancer_Magic Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 What I find funny is the sample signs, three is enough? anyhow, the neck looks awefull. And why 2pix lines? ifnot more. one is more then enough. I didnt like 1pxl lines.... they are too precise for me to work with.. I know.. i hurriedly added it on I've scrapped that one.... I dont like the angle on which the head was drawn Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WeeBoab Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 Here's my line work: So far C/C ? Be honest.... BTW i just hurried the neck I have to add: -Horns -Ears -detail - rotation view... i think the side is a little flat looks like uve used pen tool, or just the pencil tool on PS tbh. My photobucket Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromancer_Magic Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 Here's my line work: So far C/C ? Be honest.... BTW i just hurried the neck I have to add: -Horns -Ears -detail - rotation view... i think the side is a little flat looks like uve used pen tool, or just the pencil tool on PS tbh. Nah.. i used the brush tool.. i used the pencil tool on the teeth, but then i went over in brush Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varda Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 A dragon! In blue/black, with some blue flames, and a sky background. Full body, no need for so advanced. :D anything else? Thats er... alittle plain ? My edit: Place: Wilderness It has snowed recently. Dragon is fighing someone, breathed fire and melted snow... i'll do some linework - its easier to explain I don't mind what you do, I just want a blue/black dragon,with blue flames in some landscape. Edit: Full body, do whatever landscape you want, I liked your idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromancer_Magic Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 A dragon! In blue/black, with some blue flames, and a sky background. Full body, no need for so advanced. :D anything else? Thats er... alittle plain ? My edit: Place: Wilderness It has snowed recently. Dragon is fighing someone, breathed fire and melted snow... i'll do some linework - its easier to explain I don't mind what you do, I just want a blue/black dragon,with blue flames in some landscape. Edit: Full body, do whatever landscape you want, I liked your idea. What you think of the line work ? Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Varda Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 Looks ok so far, just need some polishing, looks more of a sketch to me. :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromancer_Magic Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 Looks ok so far, just need some polishing, looks more of a sketch to me. :wink: It is at the moment... I sketch...Then i convert to pixel Well... Im going to bed... I'll fix up the post and do some more in the morning... Dont forget... Any linework is appreciated Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eckered Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 Here's my line work: So far C/C ? Be honest.... BTW i just hurried the neck I have to add: -Horns -Ears -detail - rotation view... i think the side is a little flat when you do pixel art, you must create every aa by hand, which im going to assume you didnt. if you are using a brush or a pen tool, you have to check off the "no aa" button. i sugest you use a simpler program such as microsoft paint, and after you get a bit better, graphicsgale. in dementedheros tutorial, he uses layers. they are nice, but not usually nesacary. i sugest plain old paint tbh. looks like uve used pen tool, or just the pencil tool on PS tbh. wop wop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necromancer_Magic Posted December 27, 2006 Author Share Posted December 27, 2006 Here's my line work: So far C/C ? Be honest.... BTW i just hurried the neck I have to add: -Horns -Ears -detail - rotation view... i think the side is a little flat when you do pixel art, you must create every aa by hand, which im going to assume you didnt. if you are using a brush or a pen tool, you have to check off the "no aa" button. i sugest you use a simpler program such as microsoft paint, and after you get a bit better, graphicsgale. in dementedheros tutorial, he uses layers. they are nice, but not usually nesacary. i sugest plain old paint tbh. looks like uve used pen tool, or just the pencil tool on PS tbh. Whats "aa" ? well... i shall start again But to all... i wish happy holidays - im off to the beach for a week Joined Runescape: 23/01/02 |||. Retired from Runescape: 07/07/2007[hide=Quotes]Elfs creating a crystal Axe would be like GreenPeace creating a Nuclear Powered Harpoon for killing seals..."Level 1 sailing: ability to build a failboat.'[/hide]Drops: Ahrims Hood, Guthans set FULL (minus legs), dragon half shield, dragon legs/skirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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