Im still working on it ive been working on it for a day or two and i never got around to posting about it anyways here it is so far:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i still have to:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~fix the hands []

 

 

 

~fix the trees []

 

 

 

~shade []

 

 

 

~fix prayer symbol []

 

 

 

~fix acient staff [X]

 

 

 

~get the anatomy right[]

 

 

 

~finish the fence [X]

 

 

 

~and fix his robes []

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

can anyone give me anymore suggestions?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~update: finished the fence

btw special thanks to dementedhero for his awesome pixel turtorial :D

well most of it is just basic colors with no shading, anatomy is .. way off, Shade! Change the outline ,to either 1 pixel black, or get id of it, and add a darker color then the thing its outling (white-light grey, grey-dark grey etc.)

 

 

 

Other that fixing what you said, well not really fixing but, actualy finishing, they are just like blobs right now, theres not much else to CC

 

 

 

Sorry if that seemed harsh, but i'm just giving CC

its ok and btw can you explain anatomy? and i was going to get rid of the outline just havent gotten to it yet #-o

Well. for example, I mean the shape of the person, his arms are just tubes right now, add some muscles, or shape. Hands, fingers etc.

 

 

 

Right sizes for parts of his body.

 

 

 

Right now his head is about the size of his torso.

 

 

 

Arms are different sizes, etc.

oh ok and i finished getting rid of the outlines look any better?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and im gonna add the fingers i tried once didnt go very well :lol:

if you like i can do a quick edit to help improve a bit (the picture)

 

 

 

EDIT: also i think you saved as a jpg, don't do it. Ever. save that as a png

if you like i can do a quick edit to help improve a bit (the picture)

 

 

 

EDIT: also i think you saved as a jpg, don't do it. Ever. save that as a png

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Yes, he saved it as a jpeg. I thought it was aa'ed at first but a closer examination showed it to simply be a small error when saving ;)

I don't advise using jpeg for doing pixels o.0

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It seems to be coming on ok but I wont really judge it until I see the final version.

That hurt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Alright, now for some criticism.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Shading: Non-Existant. Look for tutorials on that.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Colour: I feel there were a poor choice of colours.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Lightsource: Non Existant. Look for tutorials on putting one of these on and shading to cooperate with it.

This looks like a good idea for a sig... I think I'll remake it from the start and see how it turns out if thats ok with you, since it is your idea.

thats not a pixel.. :-k

thats not a pixel.. :-k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It will be when I'm through with it!!!! :lol:

Arrrrghhh...... (several loud and horrific screams unsue at the thought of a pixel saved as a jpg)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Bj i think it'd the beginning of a pixel he has attempted to block out the shapes in colour :wink: Goodluck with it, lets see some shading!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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