therealtermenator10 Posted February 4, 2007 Share Posted February 4, 2007 TT10? I like it. Thanks man for everything, the book for my book report has to be over 100 pages long... But hey, it's still an awesome story, thanks again for the help. I'm in your debt. LOL Now on to "The Corrupt." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mario_sunny Posted May 14, 2007 Share Posted May 14, 2007 Wow, amazing story. I've read the first five chapters and I'm already really into the story. Very nice, you really capture the reader. I was just posting now because I couldn't wait to post my positive feedback! :ohnoes: I'll try to finish it soon! :P By popular demand, this signature is back- however I currently do not have a blog up at the moment and if I did I wouldn't update it. Sorry, the sig links to nowhere :( . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sephiroth_king Posted May 14, 2007 Author Share Posted May 14, 2007 Wow, amazing story. I've read the first five chapters and I'm already really into the story. Very nice, you really capture the reader. I was just posting now because I couldn't wait to post my positive feedback! :ohnoes: I'll try to finish it soon! :P Thanks mario_sunny! I'm leaving feedback for your story asap because I love it. Enjoy. Hoping to get a new Signature (with matching avatar) soon. :D In the meantime...Steam username: )I'll rewrite it later (add me if you want) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
darkforaster Posted May 15, 2007 Share Posted May 15, 2007 What luster can the starts hold here? The sky here shoes no boundaries... I guess you mean What luster can the stars hold here? The sky here shows no boundaries. You might want to edit that bit. Plus you have various spelling mistakes. Including the word ancient, which seems to be repeatedly spelt wrong. I suggest reading through it, scamming for errors. It's what I did with my story. just to edit out the mistakes. Only got up to chapter 12. But I have to go now. I'll read the rest later. The negatives aside, I like the plot of the story. Not only that, but your description is incredibly realistic. As if i was there. Your characters have thier own seperate attitudes to one another. This makes the story A complete success. I'll read The_Corrupt later on, if i get the chance that is... Lumbridge and it's past. Read here to find out about it.if you have time to waste then click hereTake the Magic: The Gathering 'What Color Are You?' Quiz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k0pkaas Posted May 15, 2007 Share Posted May 15, 2007 Dude your post has at least 3 spelling mistakes I noticed in it... So really if your telling him to look back through his maybe you should look back through yours. I got 99 problems but a noob ain't one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sephiroth_king Posted May 15, 2007 Author Share Posted May 15, 2007 What luster can the starts hold here? The sky here shoes no boundaries... I guess you mean What luster can the stars hold here? The sky here shows no boundaries. You might want to edit that bit. Plus you have various spelling mistakes. Including the word ancient, which seems to be repeatedly spelt wrong. I suggest reading through it, scamming for errors. It's what I did with my story. juts to edit out the mistakes. Only got up to chapter 12. But I have to go now. I'll read the rest later. The negetives aside, I like the plot of the story. Not only that, but your description is incredibly realistic. As if i was there. Your characters have thier own seperate attitudes to one another. This makes the story A coplete success. I'll read The_Corrupt later on, if i get the chance that is... Thanks. But I am not looking back for spelling mistakes, for this story is not the real Advent. I kinda wanted to wait to tell everyone--After I make my stories, through the Omega, there will be remakes of these stories--NOT and I repeat NOT RS based. Not only that, the plot in each story will be increased, and the depth will be, too. The last of the increase will be double the chapters, The Advent (No hyphenation with these ones--That's also a differentiation--The ( _) simply meant RS based, without one is the regular story. Clever?) will be 40 chapters, the Corrupt will be 80, and th Omega 160! Hope you look forward to it! More story for the_Corrupt coming soon, guys. :D Hoping to get a new Signature (with matching avatar) soon. :D In the meantime...Steam username: )I'll rewrite it later (add me if you want) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k0pkaas Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 Chapters as in big long ones like this? :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: GIVE IT TO ME NOW!!! I got 99 problems but a noob ain't one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
junka666 Posted May 16, 2007 Share Posted May 16, 2007 Dude publish it when ur done! I it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sephiroth_king Posted May 16, 2007 Author Share Posted May 16, 2007 Dude publish it when ur done! I it Thank you, hope you are enjoying the current one. Now, to clarify this, the Advent ((with no hyphenation) and the corrupt and the omega are longer, in depth, and yes, the chapters will be three times as long as they are in the current version. And so everyone knows, I want to teach you the language from the stories, so I might not have to translate what they are saying. I'll post that (and a secret suprise) in the_Corrupt later. Hope you guys are happy I'm doing this and anxious. Hoping to get a new Signature (with matching avatar) soon. :D In the meantime...Steam username: )I'll rewrite it later (add me if you want) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
k0pkaas Posted May 17, 2007 Share Posted May 17, 2007 :shock: :shock: :shock: :shock: LOTS OF 3X AS LONG CHAPTERS!!! :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: I got 99 problems but a noob ain't one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dorington Posted May 17, 2007 Share Posted May 17, 2007 Wow good story so far. I will read it all! So far I've got to chapter 3. I'll give you more feed back when I've read it all :thumbsup: Barrows drops: Torags pl8, Torgas legs, Guthans chainskirt Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sephiroth_king Posted September 10, 2007 Author Share Posted September 10, 2007 Hiya all...I'm bumping this story 'cause it was popular for a long time ago, and still should carry on some sorta legacy...So enjoy. Hoping to get a new Signature (with matching avatar) soon. :D In the meantime...Steam username: )I'll rewrite it later (add me if you want) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LolzEditor Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 Wow, you're right...it is long. I've only read up to chapter two, and its already getting exciting! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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