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So, yes... Trying this thing again...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

It's a Greycoat. They're the secret police in the largest city of my D&D campaign setting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Comments and constructive criticism, please? Hit the link if you need to see a larger version.

I really like it, what program did you use?

I really like it, what program did you use?

 

 

 

Just Photoshop.

very very nice. Looks incredible

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

9.5/10 (the guys face looks a bit skinny)

Bumpity?

Maybe try using a higher opacity? Right now it looks like th eopacity is really low, which makes it look pretty messy. Using a higher opacity and low flow gives it a cleaner look, I think. But maybe that's just a personal preference :-k

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In addition, I think the coat could use a bit more drastic shading. Maybe more highlights on the top, like on his shoulders.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Other than that, it looks pretty good though. The lineart looks nice and I like the colours.

The colors look really good on this. His left arm looks a little off..I think it is the particular pattern in the fabric that is not working, especially where the bicep attaches to the forearm.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I don't know as I have an issue with the opacity. This just has a more rough feel to it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Good work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Incidentally, are there a lot of firearms that small in D&D? Or are you just using the sytem within a different era?

mmm you've made one similar to this before right? either way I like it :mrgreen:

MUCH better than the first

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

it seems with practice you could really get a grip on this

Incidentally, are there a lot of firearms that small in D&D? Or are you just using the sytem within a different era?

 

 

 

I'm using a homebrew campaign setting.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And yes, I'll try something different about the colours next time. Right now I'm overlaying the colours on a layer of black and white shading.

Are you overlaying with

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

a. A brush?

 

 

 

b. fills with blend modes?

 

 

 

c. Colorize feature of levels (if I remember the PS terminology properly, I don't use PS)?

I'm overlaying with standard brushes. The way I do it now, I actually have four or so layers of shading and colour: one for the black and white, one for a "base", one for highlights and another for the background.