that was cool! cant wait for the sequel!

 

 

 

:lol: :lol: 5000 tin cans hehehe...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

oh btw do you have an EDITOR for this? its really screwed up, what with all the typos and grammar mistakes and all

 

 

 

thats the worst part

 

 

 

id be happy to edit for you hinthint

no they PROBERLY dont want some one else in, but u can always correct and re post. pointing out faults is no way to get a job

Yay! A positive reply from somebody who is looking forward to the sequel! :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks for the post, but we should be ok without another guy on the writing team (for now, at least) and you know the old proverb; 'Spelling mistakes are good'

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Ok, maybe it's not a REAL ancient proverb, but it'll have to do. Nice sig by the way :D

did u no some words are the same spelt backwards like did.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and some are not like tig.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Oh.....that was some sort of insult. I see.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hey, Smoke, what a gniyonna elttil yboon tawt.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Thanks Blipo.

Love the series, but when is the next one coming?

my comment i just realized was mean i meant:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

its a good story, but it has quite a few spelling/grammar mistakes

 

 

 

the sp/gra mistakes i dont like, but besides that i like it

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

if u need an editor, i can do that

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

srry

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

i like the beginning of the second part

the beginning story was short :?

I think you guys need to be charged for murder through laughter.

 

 

 

(thats a compliment)

 

 

 

I can't wait for the sequel. (loved zaramoks comment about thrantos' wardrobe)

A Tale Of Two Cities makes a lot more sense if you read this before hand i.e. the pain in my brain has now gone from reading this. Both very good storys made me actually lol, so now that abreviation has some factual basis :)

Wow, this is quite good. I'll probably drop by on fanfiction.net to review your stories. I like the style in which you write.

 

 

 

I can't think of any good constructive criticism right now, except for maybe to double space a bit in the longer ones so that the lazier people don't have to tolerate a giant wall of text.

I remember posting on this over 2 years ago. I now came back and accualy finished it. Will read the second one tomorrow.

 

Excellent job guys =D> =D>

 

 

 

PS: You owe me 10k!

That was ............... weird. Like a Monty Python episode based in RuneScape. I'll give you points for making me laugh my [wagon] off, though!