Sk8erguy39 Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 This is a picture i did on MS Paint, the quaility got a little ruined because photobucket changed it in2 a jpg. but i think it's ok. Tell me wat u think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dsavi Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Umm, this has already been posted here. Not sure what should be done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDawn Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Alright then sk8, i'll close the other thread seeing as it's your picture, though i told you that photobucket was being a pain in the [wagon]. I also suck at using it so meh. That's why you're on the TZDF blackdawn. Even your balls can tear zombies to shreds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sam Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Nice, but the linework needs to be cleaner. You also need to work on perspective aswell. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Try uploading it on ImageShack. Anyway, the linework seems quite sloppy in places (the walls should be more straight, the tree seems very unrealistic, etc.), and those white bits make it look quite messy. I'd try to work on anatomy too, I understand you were going for a cartoony style, but it's still important. The guy in monk's robes, for example, really looks quite strange. Overall, not bad, but there are some little things that bring the picture down. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nytestryke24 Posted December 31, 2008 Share Posted December 31, 2008 Hehe, heya! Didn't realise you have an Account here :P (it's obviously new though ;)) [hide=Stats][109 combat with Summoning ;)][/hide] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Unoalexi Posted January 1, 2009 Share Posted January 1, 2009 You gots perspective issues, anatomy issues, shading issues ect. ect. References are you friends! Use them! Just a quick Google search often yields you what you want. Though this is all useless if you don't know how to see. Judging by your style, it appears that you don't really know how to look at an object correctly. Pick an object. Study it for several minutes, noting things like the angles of it's lines, the length of each part as it relates to other parts of the object, the number of lines it has. Don't just look at the object's shape-look at the empty space around it as well, and note the qualities of this. Then, draw what you see, but don't think about what you're drawing-think instead about the lines that make it up, and their relationship to each other. Drawing stuff upside-down helps as well. Here be dragons ^ Dragon of the Day Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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