sephiroth_king

Lol! Dude, because of this, you could probably get a real high score! Well, I'm heading off to vacation, but I'll change the name and put you pending review stats, and if your lucky your review will be posted today. Cheers. Sephiroth_King P.S. Lol, keep up the good work!

Good thing you posted now, or else I wouldn't have been able to review you. :D Okay people, I'm going on a relaxing vacation to write my story and let my mind roam in serenity. So when Xewleehr comes back, he'll be taking over the reviews and such. bluejayfan, your review shall be posted soon, maybe before I go, but that's a MAYBE. Anyway, let's check out your story.

Dark. Look how far you have come. At the beginning, you wrote with strange names, sheepboy from the RS game. Now you are here, everyone bragging you on! This story is excellent and deserves a great review, and c/c. If you want to. :wink: However, to apply, post at my library thread--I wish I could bend the rules for you and just write one--but really, this deserves the best review possible. =D> Whenever and if you want one. :D

Here ya go buddy! Oh wait... To explain how this works. I evaluate based on: -Flow of the story -grammer and spelling -explaining the parts of a story -and if is long, the length-flow relationship (If it's short-short chapter, disregard this). ALL EVALUATED OUT OF 60! I will post this legend/key in the main page soon---Anyway, enjoy your review! That's right, welcome to the section of legends of the noble knight section in our library! Our first story added. Well, good so far, add some more chapter 2's and I'll get to another review! Have a great day! Keep at it! P.S. Check later for rate, which is where we evaluate where you are thus far, don't worry, you'll see what I mean. The section is called "Ratings on your story!" So be sure to check in!

Well bluejayfan94, if you want I can review the first couple of chapters of your story...But unfortunatley, you need to post the request that you want the review. :cry: But do that later and I'll give it my all for a review. :D

Very good beginning. However, I cannot help you completely with c/cing, (Correcting and editing) because I run a review thread which does so. If you would like a review, just go to Sephy and Xewleer's review thread located in this library not too far down. There I will happily give a review and c/c. (It just opened not too long ago, so we are currently looking for some stories to review). Anyway, nice beginning, and continue. :D BTW, you seem new to this library. May I interest you in some of the stories here? (If you aren't new, disregard if you feel compelled to do so) Virus, by Mario_Sunny. The Desiral Project, by archimage_a. Runescape, above and beyond, my my reviewing comrad, Xewleer Lumbridge, it's long past, by darkforaster. And Why not mine? The_Advent or the dirge of caduceus, by me :lol: Enjoy!

I kinda wish sometimes they would make a remake of Ocarina of time, like taking the landscapes they used in TP and put it into Ocarina, so it's not a small land like in the N64 version. Then they should entitle it RE: Ocarina of Tme and release it for Wii and Gamecube. I would love to see that. But truly classics never beat next gen :P However it would be cool. ^^Tp was a great game, TP took me 32 hrs, too. And I still play it. =P~ ^^

It is named within the library "Reviewing the best or worst, Sephy and Xew's review thread!" I think it's a couple of spaces down. But don't post your story, just a request for a review, then I will rate you and post the review there. :D

Welcome to the forum, inverted1 8-) Hope you like it in tip.it so far. Your story was good for a beginning! But I don't give reviews to a story or c/c it anymore. I'm waiting for people to ask for some reviews in my review thread. So if you want a nice reviews, just ask for one in my post. Same day, I'll get your review in. \ Well, since your new...Why not check out some awesome stories here? Examples. The Desiral Project, by archimage_a. Runescape, above and beyond, by Xewleer (Runs review thread with me). Lumbridge, it's long past. By darkforaster. And why not The Dirge of Caduceus, by sephiroth_king (Me :lol: ). Four excellent stories, if I do say so myself. All of them will give good examples of writing, runescape or not (Mine and archimage_a's aren't, howver the other Xew's and dark's are). Well happy reading, and good job! /\/\/\Sephiroth_King/\/\/\

Well, to begin. If youv'e used your pokeradar, there is always rustling in the bushes. Let's say you are hunting bagon, like me. You kill it. But don't fret! As soon as you KO it, the pokeradar automatically makes more rustle. To chain link, you have to go to the farthest shaking bush, but also must be the same shaking...Let's say bagon shkaes the bush violently, and you can see white panting things eminating from the bush. It's a must that you go to the farthest one THAT HAS the eminating white patterns. So you run into another one. Then keep doing it, and soon a beautiful chain is going on. Rumors have been 40 battles = a shiny. Good luck, despite me not believing this rumor.

Well, often I've wondered about shiny Pokemon. I researched if you can get them, and sure enough, yes. But it's hard, like a 1/5400 chance? Or was it 1/8700? :-k ....Either way, it's hard. With a sigh, I turned by DS off and forgot about them. Hearing some rumors stating "Fight 40 battles with the same Pokemon, and your next catch is automatically a shiny!" or "The chances of shinies are increased with every chain link," I decided to see if the theory were true. The Pokemon to chain? Bagon. Sure enough, only 25 battles past...And I couldn't believe my eyes...A shiny Bagon. The first theory was discredited to me, as I captured it, now it's my Salamence today. But then, after a 40 battle chain test out, I've another shiny Bagon, so the first theory was in place yet again. But truly there is no proof; so my last theory was only determination, luck and drive can you achieve a shiny. However, I choose not to accept this hypothesis until I hear you methods of capturing a shiny (If you did). Indeed...I wanna know what shinies you've captured! My shinies? Well, lately I've been obsessed with shinies, so now I have a shiny Torchic (hatched---restart rate---300 times), Eevee (Hatched---restart rate---350 times), Lucario (Hatched, then evolved from baby--restart rate 400 times), Salamence, Pichu (Hatched---Restart rate--200 times), and my starter, Empoleon, whom I chose not to make a shiny until I feel like it. But those are the only shinies I've recieved. Yes, a restart rate total of 1250 times... I'm very curios of what you have. So share. 8-)

[hide=Story of the month and year contest info] Here here! I have selected three stories for the story of the month and year. Each story will either be voted by you, or if refused participation, Xewleehr, any [hopefully] employees, and I will. Then, it has to have a good reviewing score to get the title. Of course, one of these stories is mine, I'm the owner of the library, I choose! However, we need preliminaries, where 10 stories in the library will be chosen from you, or if refused participation, me. Then, only the top will survive, half will be cut, depending on the feedback you leave the story. Yes, in order for any vote to be valid, you must read the stories, leave feedback, and vote. More explained later. Then two will be cut, three left. These are the finals. Remember! I'm cutting a deal with you. Go to every story, read them, leave feedback in all of them, this will verify you read them [kinda]. I will also ask you a series of questions of what happened in the story so I know you aren't just leaving feedback and then voting on your story. Also, I anticipate people leaving false feedback, voting, then going to the story for the answers I ask you. Don't go with your first choice (Your auto favorite) unless it is your favorite. But there is always someone better, and thusly, don't choose the one you just read, read the others honestly, leave feedback, then your vote might be negated, depending on if you are true to it, or validated, depending if you are true to it as well. Remember these rules, you will soar.[/hide] [hide=Rules...Gotta have em.] Indeed. A bit of order won't kill anyone, I need these for balance (Obviously). There are two sets: For employee reviewers, or for the general tip.it library forum. So. [hide=Tipiters] So, you are a tipiter. Well, your rules are quite simple. Follow them and you get a cookie. Break them more than three times and I will refuse service to you. : 1) Patience!: Patience is a virtue, as we say. Uphold it, and we will get your review done. If you are impatient, we will refuse service to you. Llamster, keep that in mind. 2) The review policy: This policy will set up a new road that will give me and Xewleehr ease. I declare it this name because, since I have a life, and Xewleehr as well, we shall set up a date for your deadline. This means, we will set up a day where our reviews shall be posted and done, but they must, and if they aren't...I refuse to discuss that. We may also get to post it any day before the deadline date. For you three who are waiting, I will post them at the end of this post. 3) The ban/refusal Policy: Discussion is allowed here, only on stories. Flaming will not be permitted. Any form of bribery for your story to be done will land you in a ban. Any flaming we will refuse service. Last, 4) Finish Policy: When your review is done, Xewleehr or I shall pm you to tell you your review is done. If you don't like your review, that's your problem. These are yours to follow, my fellow tipiters.[/hide] [hide=Employees] Pay attention! You have one mission, and one mission only: Review asap, you have to exploit the weaknesses of a story, find mistakes, GET THE DEADLINE date. :wink: We evaluate based on the following: -Flow of the story (10/10) -grammer and spelling (20/20) -explaining the parts of a story (10/10) -and if is long, the length-flow relationship (If it's short-short chapter, disregard this) (20/20) [if short chapter, tha explaining parts of the story becomes ten more, and so does flow). ALL EVALUATED OUT OF 60! Abide by these rules and we'll get a long fantastically. :D[/hide][/hide] [hide=Urgent Notice Number One] URGENT NOTICE!!! For quite a while now, Xewleehr and I have been quite busy, unable to do any reviewing, partly because I need the help and partly because of me being busy. However, we need more reviewists, and if no one wants to be one, ah well :P But the help is needed badly, as too many people are compiling us with reviews, whereas Xewleehr is busy...With something, whereas I'm on, but would like the weight off of my shoulders once in a while. Sooooooo. We need exactly three reviewists, and I will have a system of assignments...Basically...I'm going to tell you what to review. :-w If you are an excepted reviewist, then I will tell you more later. Here's the last paragraph. Here, I explain no flaming is allowed with any of our employees, however, if you get the due date wrong... Here's an application for applying, short, sweet, to the point. PM when finished: Name: Date: Genre in writing (Sci-fi, fantasy, etc.?): Preffered reviewing Genre: You agree to follow the above rules of conduct, sepcifically designated for you, the reviewer?: Do you agree to follow the review rules? (Explained in rules section as well): Well guys, thanks, have a good day. :D [/hide] [hide=Urgent Notice Number two] Dear reader, I've made a few alterations to the library. No more voting polls, instead, we will all vote on the story of the month and year together. However, this requires plenty of reading in stories. I don't want you to vote for one you read, you must have read the above choices. Then, I will tally the votes up. But this requires participation, and if there is refusal, Xewleehr and I (And hopefully employees) will vote on one. That is all. Sephiroth_King[/hide] _____________________________________________________________ Legends of Glory Section [hide=Currently Active Stories and review stats]"In Here, Xewleer and Sephiroth_King will post the current stories' names', and put it's reviewed-or-not stats." Zeke says. Key Red=Not Reviewed Dark blue=Reviewed orange=Pending Review dark red=Reviewed, however Pending full story review ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¹ÃâThe adventureÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s of LurwinÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢ by Burnt_arven. *Currently Not Reviewed* The White Knights (Interactive story) by Frankie_Ya. *Currently Not Reviewed* Engravings, by subtle_rune. *Currently Not reviewed* Runescape Guidestories [Comical] by mrph3r. *Currently Pending review* The Legend of the Forum, by ForsakenMage. *Currently Not reviewed* Lumbridge- it's long past. By darkforaster. *Currently Not reviewed* The Contamination: A New Beginning, by Fists_of_ozzy. *Currently not reviewed* Runescape, Above and Beyond, by Xewleer. *Currently Pending review* The Dirge of Caduceus, by me, Sephiroth_King. *Currently Pending review* The Legend of The Virus - Rewrite, by DevilKiller. *Currently Not reviewed* The Desiral Project, by archimage_a. *Currently Pending review* (Homeo)stasis, by Free_Steel1. *Currently Not reviewed* Draggneth, Sword of All Dragons, by Bluejayfan94.*Reviewed, Pending full review* Virus, by mario_sunny. *Currently Not reviewed* ~The Chronicles of Fire Pt1~, Fireseeker10. *Currently not reviewed* The Tale of Kouldris the Reedemed: In the Beginning, by inverted1. *Currently Not reviewed* The Alchemist from the Other Side ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Ãâ New Aquroya (FMA Based) by ZidaneCT. *Currently Not reviewed* A Tragedy of the Keyblade War, by Xewleehr. *Reviewed* Aura Wars, by archimage_a. *Currently Pending Review*[/hide] [hide=Ratings Section]"This is the final destination point for your story. For within this spot in our library is where we store our greatest writers' stories, and their ratings. Go on ahead, the legend for the status of people is right here." Zeke says. Key: (-)=Every one is 1, 2, 3, etc. So disgrace would be 1.1, 1.2, 1.3...The score 10 (Legend) is the highest. Bold=Where you currently are, only in the titles themselves. Yellow=So you can see where your score is if it is in the dashes (Trust me, it will look like I accidently deleted it, you will see it). [hide=bluejayfan94s Reviewed Pieces] Draggneth, Sword of All Dragons Disgrace- - - - - - - - -Novice- - - - - - - - -Ace- - - - - - - - - Noble- - - - - - - - -Knight- - - - - - - - -Queen- - - - - - - - -King- - - - - - - - -Legend- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Caduceus Legend It's good thus far, so stop and read it sometime! Go to the Legends of the Noble Knights section in our select library for the link![/hide] [hide=Xewleehrs Reviewed Pieces] A Tragedy of the Keyblade War Disgrace- - - - - - - - -Novice- - - - - - - - -Ace- - - - - - - - - Noble- - - - - - - - -Knight- - - - - - - - -Queen- - - - - - - - -King- - - - - - - - -Legend- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Caduceus Legend When I first read this story, I was sad. But it's sooo good, and Xewleehr is making legend! Read it! Now! He ranks King in the select library section, and king is both Legend and King here. So, go to the glory section and go to Legends of King's for the link.[/hide] Caduceus Legend: Your greatness shatters legend, it shatters everything. Your greatness shines among all others, becoming the greatest of the greatest. This is to strive for; the best. Legend: Rewarded to the best. Anyone who achieves this is greatly honored and renowned forever, or just a couple of years. I'd definatly strive for it! King: Rewarded to the second best of the best writer in the library. Strive for it also! Queen: The third best, but a great honor! You are in the top three! Knight: A status whereas you are knighted for greatness. You are on your way to becoming the greatest. Noble: You are on your way--but brush up on your writing skills. Ace: Not a bad title; grammer needs work, and your spelling sometimes, too. Novice: You need a lot of work. Heed mine and Xewleers advice. Disgrace: Terrible. Writing 1337 talk and such is bad, doing RS battle sequencing makes it unrealistic, etc., and none of us like it. Off you go.[/hide] [hide=The Glory Section]"Here is where we shall keep our stories that shall be passed down from generation and on." Zeke proclaims sternly. "If you have a volume, contribute to it. We will be happy to take it in. But to add a volume, you must first pass the review; if it is below knight status, you are not permitted to add it to our soon-to-be vast collection of books." [hide=Caduceus Legends]No ratings, no books placed here yet. Sorry. :-w [/hide] [hide=Legends of Kings]A Tragedy of the Keyblade War, by Xewleehr. If you haven't read this, read it. It's, by far, one of his best pieces.[/hide] [hide=Tales of Queens]No ratings, no books placed here yet. Sorry. :-w [/hide] [hide=Legends of the Noble Knights] Draggneth, Sword of All Dragons, by bluejayfan94. Very good, so far. Can't give full review here until it's done![/hide][/hide]

i could have sworn it came in yellow, when you were forced to use one... Ya, but in the old ones, you couldn't hold items... :-k

UGH! I'm so sorry bout that--disregard, but expect this edited later, okay? :thumbsup: : :wink:

The obsession to pikachu actually came since gold and silver, when the light ball became. :D I have an awesome pichu, have a lot of training to do before he's pikachu (It's poffin time! Since they only evolve into pikachu through happiness). Oh, and you welcome for the help.

No, not because it's cute, for one, I actually bred a pichu a couple of minutes ago, and I don't plan on evolving it, since I already have a riachu. This current pichu has volt tackle now \ . Because of me already having a pikachu, I don't want to evolve it (That...and I can't find anymore thunderstones, gonna go underground tonight). Anyway, pikachu...It's quick, and powerful like raichu, just not AS powerful. And it's always nice to stay with the pre-evo's imo, don't know why, but I always liked pikachu for...Pikachu really. :D BTW, I tend not to worry about ground types often at all, they have all fallen to my feet every battle, so ya. :wink: EDIT! Completely forgot the whole reason! EDIT!: Just remembered the real reason... :oops: Ahem. People tend not to evolve their pikachu because of the light ball. Only allowed to be held by a pikachu, it doubles his special attack, even higher than raichu's! This is why when you breed a pikachu holding this item, the special attack volt tackle goes with it. And this is also why trainers tend not to evolve them (Me included). Hope this clears things up! :

Nice, that pokemon would rule Interesting...I'll have to check that out... Anyway, finding the legendaries as weak, I've come to my senses. And I'll never forget it. My newest party: Empoleon (Level 80) Blaziken (Level 80) Pikachu (Level 70) Espeon (Level 71) Salamence (Level 75) Lucario (Lrvrl 70) That's my party. I think it's ten thousand times better. And of course, stronger. :D Tell me what you think. :

Oops, sorry 'bout that :oops: Was a little enraged... Naruto will always get a 9/10! Go demon! And you above me will get 9/10 too. I feel generous. :P

Believe it or not Raichu IS faster, the only reason why Lt. Surge's Raichu was slower was because he evolved Pikachu too early. 9/10 Great knight. Good point. But I have other reason why I like pikachu. *Cough* he's yellow*Cough*. O:) Anyway. 8/10 cause naruto owns.

Believe it or not Raichu IS faster, the only reason why Lt. Surge's Raichu was slower was because he evolved Pikachu too early. 9/10 Great knight. Good point. But I have other rson why I like pikachu. *Cough* he's yellow*Cough*. O:) Anyway. 8/10 for the random guy above me.

Naruto is not new nor will it ever be. Your avatar is very rude, like blazikenmaster said. It may not be a direct statement, but t's still terrible. That's something I'd expect and emo-guy to say. -1/10 because you don't know what naruto is. And for having a rude [wagon] sig. :shame:

I recognize the ed, edd 'n eddy avvy, but I dunno if you're the same person...Just to be safe...1/10.

Go team magma! 9/10 just because of the random creepy team magma guy! =D>

I'm a big fan of pok̮̩̉̉mon, but I disagree, Raichu is much better. Back on topic: sephiroth king once This rocks 9/10. Thanks. Blaziken (Your sig) rules! 9/10! But you rule, too. I dunno...Pikachu is pretty fast...Hmmm............ Personally, if it had "chu" in it it pwns.

Meh. Seen it. 8/10 Anyway. :P