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Excellent work Zack, as always, and thank you very much! :D

What that's it? (Sarcasm :P ) (Except for Zelda :lol: ) This game looks awesome, can't wait to pop it into my Wii...Then I'll be nagged by all my friends with stupid questions to see if they can come over and play it. Then, they'll cry, and after feeling sympathetic for them, I'll say "Haha!" and hang the phone up. :P Just kidding. Na...they'll probably come over and we'll fight in multiplayer, on which they will get brutally massacred by me. :-w

Damn good movie. My favorite character from this movie is Luna Lovegood--good 'ol loony! No seriously though. She is THE Luna Lovegood. Creepy, happy--the luna I pictured. :D Daniel Radcliffe was actually GOOD, as in he actually was a good actor. Emma watson and rupert are always as they've been, except Rupert was very funny. Go Ron! My favorite scene from that movie was when Fudge goes "He's back!" at the very end, after Voldemort does his disappearing act. Everyone in the theatre cracked up from that point, I couldn't even stop laughing for an hour. :lol: Another funny scene (Or I though it was funny) was when Dudley and his friends came out of nowhere wearing random wigger clothes...

Very good guide, that helps a lot for playing. Cannot wait for you to finish. =D>

Chapter 4: Lotus What did this girl mean...Why do I feel like I know that vision? Ren thought of what he had seen. The sky. The peace. The happiness he felt...However, his thoughts were negated. He beckoned Lux over, wrapped the girl in a blanket to keep her warm on the trip. "You ready?" Lux scratched her hoof on the ground, and Ren tugged her reigns forward. Like Ren wanted her to, she ran slow. Unedain was in the distance, and the most visible part of the entire scenario was the castle, standing strong and mighty. _____________________________________________________________ Death. Humankind fears it. We fear the thought of dying. We fear the thought of going to a place of eternal bliss or eternal darkness. We fear the thought of joining those who are dead. No, these are what we fear...But we truly fear the essence of death itself...Those who are dead. Those who were engulfed by darkness, who's soul left their bodies. Warriors seldom fear death. They were raised to think death is the ultimate honor. Their names would be carved into history by their own spilled blood...Inside, they tell themselves they haven't a fear of darkness. But they do. Yes...Inside their hearts, which they were told to ignore, which they were told they have no emotions. They were told this so they can leave another behind if he is groaning in pain...And cannot make it. They were told this to negate any thoughts of sorrow when they had slain a man. But these emotions that became null and void within them remain there. When they die, the honor they had thought they would receive...It doesn't matter to them. They have to face those who they ignored when they suffered...Those they raped, those they ignored when cries of help eminated from the darkest reaches of hopelessness. They regret their lives. And no warrior, let alone any man, should endure that pain. Children are different. They are happy, optomistic, they are the light of the world. They fear darkness, but...They don't know what death is. They ask their mothers, yet not even a grown adult, who knows what death is, can describe what it's like. What happens. So she tells him nothing, and leaves him to rest. Many people a scared of death, to the point where the essence of Veregnagal has tampered with their minds. They knows what death is, and they're afraid...Not even his light can help them. This is who the Noiiz are born. They consume any man's soul, and take over. They await the moment where doubt is within them, where darkness is within them, where Veregnagal can enter the mind and tear it to shreds...They are weak. This is why soldiers are taught not to fear death or darkness...So they cannot be tampered with. But without emotions, how can one live? The answer is clear, and it is what every man has, which cannot be taken from them: Hope. When a child has hope, does he allow a demon to enter his soul and tamper with it? No. When a man in war sees dead, at every side of his afflicted and bruised body, does he not have hope? When a person is fighting to stay alive, when they are at the brink of death...Do they succum to the devils of darkness? When a person surrenders and allows themselves to become a Noiiz, are they weakened? Yes...When you lose hope, you damn your soul to the shadows of infinite within the deathly darkness of hell. Children are the light...Because no matter what you tell them, they will forget, and their hearts are stronger than any of ours. They fear dark, but they fall asleep and forget...They may fear death, but they forget...The light protects them, and eliminates the essence of evil. Children cannot be taken over by evil. But death seeks not those who are young or old... It seeks those who have fear and doubt...And therefore, it seeks anything weak. Anything. And the balance...The warriors who fight. The people, who fear. The children of light...The balance continues. _____________________________________________________________ The blood stained ground stank with the essence of pure evil. Corpses rested amongst the dirt ground, and the architecture around the area was obliterated and reduced to ash. Bloody knives and swords stuck out of the ground, some stabbed into bodies of soldiers, some into children and woman. Flames scourged the surrounding area, blackening the rubble of everything that was destroyed. The black smoke eminating from the fires smogged the heavens. A heavy mist engulfed the outside of the destroyed town. Only one figure moved amongst the death. His neck length silver hair was stained with blood. His chainmail was scarred, cracked down the middle, and stained with blood, and his platelegs were cracked as well. He cracked the neck of a nearby body, tearing it off from the corpse, and laughed. Blood poured from the severed head, and within his grasp, crushed the head completely. He threw the mutilated head on the ground, and wiped the blood on his sword. He gave a slight smirk to the destruction he singlehandedly caused, proud of what he had caused with the swing of his broadsword, which was shaped like a demon wing. He stepped closer to the dead of children, and a field of swords that he had smashed into the ground, cracking the earth with a simple flick of his wrist. Simply marvelous, thought he. The fool is lost within a conundrum that he himself has heard before...But cannot remember. He angers over what he forgot, dwelling within the confines of his own blasted mind...Yet, I feel a bit of hope inside of his heart...But even that hope cannot withstand against what he has lost. Poor fool. Within the smog, the man lifted his arm, and a raven landed on it; he stroked it's back, and pointed towards the East. Understanding what he commanded, the raven flew off; he then beakoned crows to ravage the meat off of the dead bodies, simply by raising his hand again. He pulled his sword out of the ground, thus tearing the stone from the ground. However, he did not withdraw the blade, for he felt a strong force stalking him. Watching his movement. Lotus...Lotus... "What calls my name? Is it an accursed Noiiz? Chasing me defeats the soul purpose of your birth from darkness, because you'll just be slain and sent into oblivion...Why do you chase me, damned beings, and why would you want me to be cast into submission? I shall not do your masters bidding..." Lotus glanced swiftly to his left and skillfully swung his blade, slashing a Noiiz into oblivion. He jumped, and swung his blade rapidly around him, defeating hundreds more around him. He then landed, making no scars nor smashing the ground beneath his feet; around him, however, the ground smashed up, killing thrice more Noiiz. "Filthy creatures. Be cast into shadow. I dispise you, and you despise me; I listen only to myself, and you choose to listen to a higher being. But why? Is it because you haven't a soul? Or is it because you have no purpose in life?" Lotus swung his blade in front of him, killing another. "Unlike your superiors, I see you are empty shelled. Quite sad, how you are born...Quite sad, how I send you now to eternal damnation...But I am fed up with fighting any of you; I choose to fight your commander. Reveal yourself, filthy Curiji!" Lotus jumped into the air, twirling in a barrel roll, and smashed the hilt of his massive blade into nothing; but nothing revealed a man, who hit and smashed the ground around him. The Curiji on the ground got up, and spat blood from his cloaked face; he lifted from his side a flail, and began to swing it over his head. Lotus shrugged and chuckled. "Useless." Lotus's enemy flung the flail's deadly [bleep]es at him, but he merely stood in his spot. When the [bleep]ed flail was within two inches of his face, he swiftly caught it, and with great force threw it back into the Curiji, who fell immediately. Lotus walked towards the body of the Curiji, and lifting his hand, forced the body to float upward, strangling the Curiji by tightening his grip. The flail had struck through his body, which created a big gaping hole and blood gushed out, like how a fountain spurts out water. The Curiji was holding up the chain of the flail, trying to prevent it from falling. Lotus arrived face to face with the man, who's breath quaked and was raspy with every breath he took. Lotus was satisfied; he smiled, and declared: "Miasmal infects Aegis with the greatest power of darkness. It is the most powerful Miasma, and your master has made my power increase by tenfold strength. He's a fool. And, for coming after me, he has lost nearly an entire legion of these foul beasts. Therefore, I pity him; I shall spare you, but give him this message: his power is useless against mine. I will destroy his entire legion if I must. With every pursuit after me he makes, his armies will be destroyed. I seek my own revelation, and I cooperate for no one." Lotus dropped the Curiji onto the ground, giving the injured and scarred body a scolding look. "Remember these words: The hunt has begun." Lotus vanished, leaving the obliterated city behind him.

Don't worry, Xewleehr tends to say that a lot. Okay, we indeed review unfinished stories...I'll get to them right now...Curse sylvan learning center and work! I've been busy all day.

Perfect. Excellent. Need I say more? I see on sig three I forgot the name of the story :oops: If you don't mind, I'd like Absolution on the Primary text of sig three. Sorry bout that. :oops:

Okay, all. Expect your reviews by TOMORROW morning, my time around 9-11 o' clock. :D Cheers, Sephiroth_King

Nope, emo is short for emotional, and if you want to add it, emotion problems. Again, do you have her number? Does she have your? Listen to some christian rock or something, or maybe uplifting rock music. BUT NEVER EVER EVER EVER play rock love music...That'll screw everything up. No wonder I would get so emotional when I played rock love music when I was depressed. Although some Maroon 5 stuff kinda helps me, some Freedom Call (power metal - except all songs are uplifting), Breaking Benjamin, some Good Charlotte (don't listen to Break Apart Her Heart or My Bloody Valentine! It'll [bleep] you up!), Creed, Green Day (some songs lift me up). Don't listen to All-American Rejects, except maybe Move Along (most of their songs are kind of sad). Creed and Green Day are the bands that uplift you to the mx if you listen to their deep songs, Creed's Higher and My Sacrifice are my favorite songs by far, also Weathered is deep and With Arms wide open. :P Green Day isn't too much my favorite at all, Wake me up when September ends is pretty good. :P But yeah, rock can/can't help when you are feeling down, especially if you love someone and are far apart. It depends on who you are.

Tonight I'll add more, since I'm going to see Harry Potter...Now in my time, and evening I'll add a couple I hope, or even more, and tomorrow A lot but it's annoying that I've been busy all day. :x

Good point, but J.K.Rowling said that she may do it because it will hopefully end the merchandise. My best bet is Harry will die, and maybe Hagrid, 'cause if you think about it...Dumbeldore was isolated a lot more than any other book she had in the last book, and Hagrid is barely mentioned. That's the way I look at it. And since Hagrid brought Harry to Hogwarts, why not have some stupid sacrifice scene where he takes the blow for Harry from and avada cadavra? :lol: But 2 characters shall die, and she said on an interview that she was depressed enough to chug a bottle of champaigne. :-w

Nope, emo is short for emotional, and if you want to add it, emotion problems. Again, do you have her number? Does she have your? Listen to some christian rock or something, or maybe uplifting rock music. BUT NEVER EVER EVER EVER play rock love music...That'll screw everything up.

1.House rules. 2.Hells kitchen 3.24 I hate 24 and Hell's kitchen, but I'd prefer Hells kitchen over 24... :-w

Sure Is this your latest story? I don't see it posted, but yes I'll put it in review pending status and Xewleehr will review it. :D

Emo's cut. If you resorted to that, then you are emo. :lol: No seriously. You're human; hanging out with someone you care about gives you a sort of bond that you don't want to break apart. And since you can't drive...Well, do you have her number? Anyways. Emo is people who swing to different moods in an overkill sorta way; like, they can be extremely happy one day, but EXTREMELY, not you are sunshine rainbows and lolipops happy, but more than that. Or they can be extremely said, so they cut; their sadness isn't normal, it's a sadness that is painful to them, and cutting releases a chemical which relieves pain. Thusly, for what you are saying, you aren't emo, moreover human. If you were emo(tional) (Yes, emo is short for that) to this extent to which I explained, then you may be. But what you say is the opposite so far.

Maybe your A/C outlet itself doesn't work, that happens alot. Or power surges can do that as well. I personally might think it's your outlet plug, try plugging it into the bottom outlet (If you have a bottom/top outlet plug in) try plugging it into that, or if it's plugged into the bottom go vice-versa.

Okay, I'll do it--unless Xewleehr wants to do it...Na. I'll do it. Be right at it, okay?

HIIIIII ZACK! Well, I have three request for ya today. All banners, if you please. [hide=Banner 1] Graphic Type: (Sig, Avatar, Banner, & Underbanner(AKA Userbar)): Bnanner, please Colors: (Background, and primary and secondary text colors, if any): Background: Red, Primary: Black, secondary: Gray Primary Text: (If any, and please specify font and size.): SIN Secondary Text: (Optional): Part 1 of the Forgiveness trilogy Font:This is awesome! Renders/Images: (Please post the link and/or the image you want used.): Here you are. Post/PM: (Please specify if you would like the finished product to be PMed or posted here. ): Pm, please. RandomSig/Banner?: (See My Signature.): No thank you.[/hide] [hide=Banner 2] Graphic Type: (Sig, Avatar, Banner, & Underbanner(AKA Userbar)): Banner Colors: (Background, and primary and secondary text colors, if any): Background: blue, Primary: red, Secondary: green Primary Text: (If any, and please specify font and size.): FORSAKEN Secondary Text: (Optional): Part 2 of the Forgiveness trilogy Font:Again... Renders/Images: (Please post the link and/or the image you want used.): Yay! Post/PM: (Please specify if you would like the finished product to be PMed or posted here. ): PM please! RandomSig/Banner?: (See My Signature.): None.[/hide] [hide=Banner 3]Graphic Type: (Sig, Avatar, Banner, & Underbanner(AKA Userbar)): Banner Colors: (Background, and primary and secondary text colors, if any): Background: Purple, Primary: Yellow, secondary: Red Primary Text: (If any, and please specify font and size.) Secondary Text: (Optional): Part 3 of the Forgiveness trilogy Font:Again again... Renders/Images: (Please post the link and/or the image you want used.): Last one. Post/PM: (Please specify if you would like the finished product to be PMed or posted here. ): PM please. RandomSig/Banner?: (See My Signature.): NTY[/hide] Okay, on some personal notes...The font size should be pretty big (I mean the titles), all centered, and should be visible with a nice font color. :D However, the "Part...Trilogy (The secondary text) should be placed in the lower left corner, nice sized for visibility, I guess. Lastly, the pictures. I want them to be big on the banner, if you don't mind. Especially the last one! They are for my story I'm writing, and this is greatly appreciated. :D Thanks! Thanks! one-thousand times thanks! O:)

I'll be writing in terms of parts, since they aren't chapters. This makes it easier to grade/score. Here goes...

There are dEMO's in me??? GET THEM OUT!!! NOOOOOOO!!!!! (My friend and I created demo; it's really spelled dEMOn, the n is silent, but ok) Well, thanks, my stupid keyboard must stop sticking because, I don't want it to stick. I wanna spell things right dammit! Ok, that aside...I'll review the tragedy of the keyblade wars mmmmmmmkay? O:)

Chapter 3: Light Darkess. The enmity that cloaks light, consuming every last nook and cranny of visibility, destroying sight completely. Fear. The aspect of being afraid blends with darkness, both cooperating together with great power. Death. With the other two, this power ends life in the shroud of blindness, thus...Those whom fear the dark, who strive to be unafraid, fear death; thus, every man fears dark. No man can gallantly stand in darkness and say they adore it completely; for if they did, they are and open target to death. Thus fear is produced; yet fear causes death as well. With this system of power, darkness, fear and death work their power as so. This dark perfection, the fear causes end. The dark imperfection, where we die if we attempt to be unafraid. So the solution? The destiny of all is to strive for death. To end. Yet man have found ways to stop this system, given to them by Sol. A child in the night. His fear, his rejection towards darkness runs through his veins, his heart pumping wildly. No one knows what dwells in the night, the shrouds of darkness can end life in a flash. His thoughts, his horrid and gory thoughts, shroud him with lies...Maybe an undead spirit, or simply a monster, will scoop him up and devour him. With this fear, he believes, and he cannot sleep at night. Thus sleepless nights come along, and eventually the child can take it no longer, and, without thought, kills himself. Suicide. Death. He dies, sacrifices his soul, almost selling it to the devil, by quick death. No more pain. No more fear. But death. And this is what darkness strives for in the child's mind. Light. With it, the illumination, the relief...The child cannot fear darkness, simply because nothing can get him, as undead or monsters are afraid of the darkness. So goes the child to sleep; he drifts off into a deep sleep, thinking light will protect him...Leading to his doom. The light betrays the child; the flame, with it's great power, joins the ranks of darkness, as the hot wax on the candle, inflamed, falls onto the ground, burning the child into the depths of oblivion. Oblivion. The final part of the system that the system of death strives for; the soul will end, and fall into oblivion, the twilit hell of Veregnagal...Or the Oblivion of light, the Kingdom of Dawn, or so people have called it. All of this philosophy, this tale, this legend--Ren knew well, and thought of it quite often. He walks in darkness, seeking end--his Exodus, Unedain. Darkness ruled the lands when Ren exited the forest. This girl...I feel as if I know her...It's almost as if I...No, no... Ren negated his thoughts, and halted Lux. He could see the kingdom to the North, a kingdom that inhabited the Westernmost part of the land. This kingdom was one of the four that kept balance in Aegis, the name of the land itself. The kingdom of Exodus is where the inhabitance of Unedain, the kingdom Exodus's town, inhabit. Every path in the land always leads to Unedain, and because of being the closest to the edge of Aegis, the name Exodus was given to the kingdom, for the ocean is an exit from Aegis, and every path in Aegis goes to Exodus, creating infinite paths and exits. The sword and shield Ren carried with him were to be given to the king of Exodus, a Maester named Xan-Viz. The sword and shield were simple looking weapons, merely a round Spartan shield and a short Sickle blade, but both forged with Cerberus designs on them. With the shield and sword Ren also carried a Cerberus dagger and a golden symbol, also bearing the Cerberus in it's engraving. The Cerberus was a sign of Kingdom Exodus, a symbol of deliverance, power, and the sign of a warrior. Ren jumped off of Lux's saddle, leaving the horse to it's rest, and placed the girl on the ground. "Emmisehyda." Ren snapped his finger, and the area around him, stretching ten yards from his position, illuminated. This allowed time to grab kindle and rocks from his pack, where he surrounded a spot with rocks, and throwing the kindle within the stone circle. "Vena." Ren tapped the kindle, and flames burst from the kindle. Lastly, Ren snapped his fingers in the air, whispering: "Tynghacc," and thus darkness ruled the area again. The girl laid on the ground, unscathed from the past events. This was strange to Ren; when he found her, she was slashed and cut from the pulverizing Lux did to her. He thought the power of Lux would kill her, if not break every bone within her body, or even cause disabling. But she rested easy. Something isn't right... Ren entered the confines of his mind, but began clawing away from it, slowly, his soul broke away from his body, and clawed through her mind, searching for her own state of being. And thus Ren's humanly body fell to the ground, and the fire extinguished, the smoke rising in the darkness. _____________________________________________________________ Ren dwelt within pure light, the brightest light. The strength and immensity of the light was beyond his own, but it instantly dissipated, and he stood in-between a field. But sorrow as the only thing he met. Mercy was shown to no man, as the legions of armies littered the ground. Men. Women. A dispicable sight to see...A lifeless, heartless beings. And so Ren turned away. Behind him, there was darkness. No death, nor was there light. Both sides disturbed him greatly. No light to illuminate his way, thus he must suffer? But he would suffer worse walking in the path of the dead... Look beyond death, and you will see light... Ren backed up, in fear of the loud but gentle voice he heard. "Hello?" Look beyond darkness and see trust... "What do you mean? I do not understand..." Trust not your eyes...But trust your heart. Your eyes deceive you, they blind you to the truth. "My eyes do not deceive, for I see dead in one path and darkness in the other..." But that is with your heart...Ultimately, your eyes show you two paths...But with your heart...The truth will set you free... "But which path shall I choose..." They both lead to the same thing...Close your eyes and be still. Ren reluctantly closed his eyes, seeing nothing. What do you see? "Nothing...Wait..." Ren's heart began to race, and his fists clenched, sweat coming down his face...It seemed as if he was entering a new world. Slowly, the darkness he had seen when he closed his eyes faded away, and he saw light, the same pure light...But he did not close his eyes. He opened his arms, as it felt like he was soaring through the sky. He smiled. Slowly, he felt as though his feet met the grounds surface, and he opened his eyes. He stood in neither the darkness or the fields of the dead. He stood now in a graveyard, where the dead were, and where the darkness was, a golden sun. But he saw something more than the sun; in the sky, stars were with the sun. Ren hadn't seen a sight like this in his lifetime; but he could not help but stare at the sky where sparkling array of stars danced in the sky. He looked at the constellations, but could not figure out what they formed. You entered my mind in order to find me, and bring me back? "I did." Said Ren to the voice. This...What you see now is Aegis was when it was in it's golden age...Ren Ren was surprised. "You know my name...Do you know who I am?" The voice giggled, and softly said: The question should not be directed to me... "But to you." Ren quickly looked to his side. The voice had ended, but the girl stood next to him, a with simple grin upon her. "You say I should ask myself that?" Ren asked, dumbfounded. "Yes." The girl stepped closer to him, putting a hand on his shoulder. "We must leave now. Worry of none of this, for what you seek shall be answered soon enough..." She faded away. Ren stood in a dark void, and he could feel his soul being returned to his physical being. _____________________________________________________________ Ren opened his eyes, to see morning had already broke. But his eyes did not flinch, they stood open, for the light had not affected him.

TSK. From what I've heard it's about fighting in Iraq instead of WW2, where you and everyone else loved blowin' the Nazis head off...*Sigh*... No suggestions for your PS3...And you have 2 of the same thread... -.- Well, its not iraq, but its middle east. From what ive read of Game informer, the character you control is a semi-futuristic american soldier, fighting a russian warlord-of-sorts in oil-rich middle eastern countries. No, you do not fight insurgents. You fight a real army in an actual warzone. Not the pseudo-war being fought in Iraq. It's a lot like the CoD (whered u get the A in CAD from?) games of the past, except with a breath of originality. I mean, the ww2 genre is seriously dead from the constant reiterations of it. Erm, i suggest resistance, but i bet u already have it. Why not wait for soon to be released games? Like assasin's creed, lair, Guitar hero 3, FF13, MGS4, or some other blockbuster title? I dunno, I think it ruins CoD, I guess it'll be cool, but blowing the Nazis head off...I know plenty of people who'd like that better. And when he said CAD4, its CoD, did you think it was Call at Duty for a split-second or something??? :lol: But now that you mention it, get Assassins creed, I hate the PS3 but that game looks like it'll kick [wagon] easy. :D

TSK. From what I've heard it's about fighting in Iraq instead of WW2, where you and everyone else loved blowin' the Nazis head off...*Sigh*... No suggestions for your PS3...And you have 2 of the same thread... -.-

3/10, it's basic among basic in many sigs I've seen. Sorry. :shock: