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Well, Fienrir, Hylean and Co. are after the source of the problems, Roald is still alive and there is still the army trying to get into falador, and Ardougne... those are open... also, Vallence is missing, could the Twilit realm be involved in that Aquan? (he is Faladorian right?) And who knows, maybe the armies are attacking the elves too...

(lets get back to normal please! and Thank You Real Teminator, It is very honorable to apologize, even if you didn't do it, shows you have a feeling of responsibility to family!) In the darkness of that sunless world, few things lived, even the darkness, somehow, was dead, indeed it was. When warriors of Zamorack die, especially Majharrat, they turn into twilit versions of themselves, and when killed, form rings which attach themselves to their killers. The generals of Zamorack, had been killed, except for Zower, no one knew truly what he was.. but if the killer dies before killing the twilit form... A being of power becomes a shadow, and in shadow. It becomes... powerful... Adventures In Twilit and Sunless found at wreckage of Val'iden (spelling is wrong)

I think this is a very well written, for the plotline... grammar could do with some sprucing up, and spelling, I.E. Fiest- >Feast but very good ending, that body trick needs to be written down some where... (oh, wait, it is woops :oops: ) Ignore your ... cousin? Those who degrade other's work without cause are not worthy to critique any except themselves, however, this opens them up to the criticisms of others. By the way... what your doing (apologizing for him) shows true honor, Nothing like your cousin, remember, change your passwords (that's not the real lesson- that is for you to perceive from what I said, not what I tell you)

not bad, not bad at all, It seemed more of a riddle poem than actual poem (I like riddle poetry I do)

Name: Gil Colin Graham Race: human (rumored to have a little elf in him, on his mothers grandma side.) Gender: male Age: 32 Equipment: ranger armor, usually drag hide, has a snakekin bandanna Weapon(s): assortment of thrown weapons (has some rune thrown axes), poison, duel daggers A note on the dagger, they are longer, when he has to, he fights with them in the middle gap between fingers, the blade only begins to cut an inch or two above the place where he grips it. He fights with quick, decisive stabs, knowing he can't stand up to warriors like Fienrir (or Hylean) for long one-on-one. Is your character peaceful, a warlord, or neutral?: neutral, but not like Guthix, is a mercenary, but has enough power to be a warlord. Other Characteristics/Hobbies (So I know what to base around your character): He loved a girl, but she died, thats why he became a mercenary, he is withdrawn, quiet, but has a lot of pride, hates to wrong females. hobby- collecting rare blades, doing rubiks cube puzzles. Believes in fate, but not anything like Karma, He swears "by the writers!" Is a narcoleptic so he falls sleep at random times and looks like hes dead He enjoys a good ale, but only has one per meal, doesn't drink any other time. Wants to get enough money to settle down and live the good life. prefers machinist to naturalists, (has no problem massacring druids) This has been edited note this!Edited! Edited! remember!

I really like it! I never thought you would be a sixteen year old (sorry I jsut felt it was) And I think you've got some talent waiting to be unlocked! ALso, i dont play rs all the time I'm actually considered a good looking guy by the girls so... And I'm top in the class!

Very cool! but the ending with Guthix and Zamorack (well.. not Zamorack) kinda didn't settle well with me. I feel the need for Corruption!

Disregard! (thank you mods!)

I need an underbanner that matches my sig please. I don't know the size for underbanners... but could it be orange flames in it with a black border. The words in it are "Clanless, the only clan for only one person." thank you!

true enough, I tried to make the Illegal Danish clan (yes taken from WOW) and it went to page... 20 in... 30 seconds, and only 20 people read it! and 5 of them were me! Plus I think that anyone who posts on a forum is the same level as a n00b!

meh, not bad, though I didn't quite understand the sudden stunning female possible love interest introduced for no good reason... oh well... You could have left her out and not hurt that chapter at all... but its the author's decision... so I won't comment on it any more... 5/10 so far... Will be expecting something better! You can do it!

(... I have no comment) Hylean, Ranguvar and Alexia raced after where they assumed Fienrir would go, , tpreviouslyhey had assumed that it was only a rogue Zamorackian warlord, but the battle, and the sisters, Zoume and Zoute, proved it something else. Rushing blindly into the expanse before them, they ran to the Twilit gate. __________ In the world where the sun never shines, the sun once shone. It was a place of technology and knowledge, but technology had done something terrible to this terra-firma, and it no longer rotated, it lay still. The moon of that planet, unable to take the strain broke up... and some of its ruin came to that planet and smote the sunlit continents, making it forever unlivable. The sun still shone, but not on the people, they left, these great artisans and scientists and warriors, from their world, only to return, much changed from what they were before. The world, they used to live in was called Frenaskae. ---------------- The darkness clung yet again to those ancient skyscrapers, those ancient monoliths of old which had dominated the landscape and skyline so long. Zoume and Zoute, felt, if possible, at home here more than anywhere else. "Zower, oh Zower, Zacon failed, Father!" "Sister speaks the truth Father! Zacon failed and we could not find Fienrir!" A darker shadow than previously thought possible, but well known if you had lived in that world, rose up and ... caressed? The duo, they felt his embrace and allowed it to probe truth from them. It then summoned a being of great power of Shadow, Zalm. And sent him to the twilit master, and to keep an eye out for the Trio who, to all and every account was their second biggest threat.

don't be my grandma died a couple weeks ago, I know the drain, I understand to a point what it feels like... Take your time. Will pray for you

good luck with it man! But I doubt they will give anything definitive... or helpful, but I have been wrong before... Ever wonder why The WOM became a Saradomist...?

Hylean watched the raven fly away, then turned his mind to the task that was at hand. A wind had blown and a hole in the clouds had swept across the army, the sudden change of light stunned and knocked unconscious the entire army, except for Zacon! He seemed unfazed by the sudden light, and seemed all the stronger for it. He summoned black magic in the shape of a spear and waggled it impudently at them. Hylean ran up to him and using his runite sheathed legs, kicked him down, he got up. Alexia drew her bow to full stretch and fired it at him, sending him flying back. Ranguvar had launched herself up using a wind spell and summoned the power of earth, forming it then shooting it down as Earth wave. Hylean jumped up and placed the haft of the hally on her back and sent her flying down and "Fire wave!" a mere inch from Zacon's face! Jumping back, Zacon still tried to get up, which he did, Alexia was ready for him though, and he fell a hedgehog of Arrows. "Poor poor Zacon, Eh Zoume?" "True enough, Zoute, sister speaks truth." Two female figures appeared from nowhere, mocking Zacon. "A pity one of the targets, and the primary one too, got away..." "And you're to blame! Shall we sister? He is too hurt to fight!" "Yes sister!" Zacon struggled to get up, but failed, his chest started to heave, the only explanation was that he was laughing! He waved his arm and all his armies disappeared! The twin sisters summoned claws of shadow to their hands and killed Zacon, rather, he disintegrated into a mist. The Sisters disappeared and Hylean, Ranguvar and Alexia ran after Fienrir. (nice to see you back Zipper!

thats just weird, what if Aerack is doing something that is bad? like aligned to some one else while pretending to have meditation in the swamp?

Hylean clenched his fists, they would not do that to his friends! But that Zamorackian... general? He was powerful! but they would not do that to his friends! Alexia came up to him and leaned on his shoulder, providing silent comfort, they both knew what they had to do. Ranguvar joined them, she would come with them. Fienrir, bandaged and still bleeding, stood up. Hylean and his friends rushed over to help him get to a chair. Ranguvar coming forward and checking his wounds. "Were so sorry!" "What are you talking about? Nothing to be sorry about, though I would like to know what this is about." Hylean looked over to his two friends and they nodded. "Were from families of..." "What are you doing! Son! Shut your mouth!" The Seer of Camelot (Seers village) came into view. "I came here just in time apparently, I want you to come back with me! It is not the right place for you." "Like Zaros! I can live my own life, Seer, though I may be your heir, I don't have to be under your thumb! Alexia and Ranguvar are staying also!" The seer seemed disoriented by this, then he said, head bowed, "Do what you wish, your right, the sight was on me... And I still love you, in my own way... but I saw... I won't tell you! Good bye you ungrateful wretch!" The seer was himself again and teleported away. Hylean looked down... "Our fates are sealed! Ranguvar! Alexia, will you join me?" Fienrir looked up in surprise. "What are you saying? You're going after that guy? Even I couldn't withstand one of his attacks!" He began to struggle up but Ranguvar pushed him down. Hylean looked at him in surprise. "You can't expect us to take you, we have to fight them (yes, it is a them) without you because you are a target... I don't care how much testosterone you have, its nothing compared to the moonlit Majharrat!" Fienrir, still feeling the pain of the blast looked at him in surprise. Roald and Reldo came up to them. Reldo was most surprised. "What do you know of Majharrat? They who were gods?" Ranguvar spoke up for Hylean. "We three are majharrat, allied to Saradomin in ancestors past, we know owe allegiance (in name only, however) to Guthix. But we are not pure blood majharrat, our forefathers mingled with the more mortals, we now live perhaps 20 years past normal lifespans, no more. Alexia is of a different family, more purebred than ours. However, they (I mean Hylean and Alexia,) fell in love before this truth was revealed to us. That is why my father came like this, and why we must go without much support." ALexia, who had nodded to all that had been said put in this remark. "And majharrat who die in the twilit realm and beyond it become... reborn, more powerful, but ineffective in sunlight, at least that is what I was taught by Hylean's father. They return to their first realm. We must go to that first realm and end the threat there" Roald would not hear of it, neither would Fienrir, "My wound has healed enough for travel, and I will accompany you!" Ranguvar shook her head and punched him, "You just let us do it, I will come back!" A few others joined, a couple elves, a strange human and a few others, including Ed. A guard shouted down to them, "Here they come again!!! I hope you're all able to fight again because they are pulling out all the stops!" ----------- Zacon was surprised, he thought he would have killed at least one of them... but, it didn't matter, the superiors would not mind if a saradomist city was razed. Time for war. He walked out onto a rock in front of the walls north of Varrock. "To destroy! All hail Zamorack! Worship him through the chaos you sow! War!!!! Kill!!!! Leave only the fewest descendants needed to mourn the loss! All forward!!!!" His troops echoed him. "Victory or Death!!!!" It was nearly morning, but the sun could not truly shine a great cloud had blocked most of the rays, he would need not fear the sun. All hail Zamorack the destroyer! --------------------------- Hylean, Ranguvar and Alexia each put on their full battle gear, each completely ready for war! Hylean in his usual mismatch of armors, Alexia in the finest ranging armors, and Ranguvar in full splitbark. Zacon looked out at the trio on the wall parapet and smiled, he was ready for all three!

Two days?!? awww... no instant gratification... oh well. Hope your head ache gets better! Poor king Syrese, is this how you explain Roald as king?

I meant spelling sorry... throne! among other things... By the way, thats the sort of thing (red overcoat) that Zacon wears in the RPG

its so good!!!!! I knew Vincent would double cross him!!! (please dont forget the RPG) I like this story, very excellent, though you need to brush up the grammar sephiroth. Was that a Sephiroth allusion in there?

not too bad, was it a real dog? (dont forget to post on the role playing story! Please!)

awww... no story, Hoi! don't forget about the RPS (role playing story)! I will still hold my convictions about Vincent though...

you can't jump while running unless you do agility thingy/emtoe,

true about Arrav, does the WOM want the Shield? And Zaros, now we know, without a doubt (unless there is another terrible one) that the WOM knows about Zaros. My Idea of the WOM being a rogue Sara mage turning to Zaros looks better now! And what if the Oracle is in on his plot? and Aerack (sp?) and other people, obviosly it has something to do with Crandor (location map shows for quest) Thus involves that dragon. But its weird, how did all those monsters get there in the first place?

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