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do you mean my style? I had my grammar teacher proofread and she didn't find anything glaring... oh well. But I think every author needs a style for grammar, a finger print for all works that changes with age while remaining the same. I wrote this for vu's literary universe and I did that as a play on free fan subs for animes. and for some reason, I cant put in indentation, but ill try again, sorry for your eyes[/u]

could someone tell me how to link to something in my sig to another topic in the tip.it forums?

Tale of the LoverÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s Ghosts Ben Wheeler I was wandering through Arcadia in my younger years, and being an inexperienced traveler, got caught in the rain. I ran to the near by inn and dried off because there was no slowing of the rain, it stayed and had dinner. An old man came up and began to tell stories, what stories! Mostly of war and glory and battles that marks our recent history. One story, however, I chose to mark down, it went something like this. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅIt was the war between Shabbotholm and Arcadia, I was a lieutenant. The army, eager for new blood in the ranks, had promoted a young man as captain over my group. I believe it was during the time when Arcadia was fighting at the borders of Shabotholm. That young Captain! He would tell us often of a girl he used to know and love; she was the daughter of ShabbotholmÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s ambassador to Arcadia. Then living in a town near Frostmourne, They, being sword fighters, good ones too, grew up near each other and fell in love. He used to tell us often of her beauty and sword-play. She was, of course, deported with her family; she had relatives and ancestors who were high up in ShabbolholmÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s army. She did return his love greatly. Now it so happened that the army she was in and the young CaptainÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s squad (with ArcadiaÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s army, of course) met in battle on the border, the Battle of Sorrows Refuge, stopping only for nightfall. I saw that between them that they would meet in battle, for neither would bear it if someone else killed the other. On the day after the first the young lady (a lieutenant) was standing in front of the army, the young captain went out, a brief calm and they rushed together. By the time their blades touched both armies rushed with a roar as if all the thunder of the world had focused itself in that one point. I and the young captainÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s platoon fought to keep his back from an unlucky hit from the opposing army. Eventually, for some unknown reason, the armies fell back, except for me and a few others, from both armies, who had unconsciously created a circle around the combatants. Then the battle really began. It was fought by skill and not by speed or strength. He swung his sword with a great cleave across the air, that the force of it left the blade and was sent toward her. I was behind her; she bent down behind her sword. Placing both hands behind it, she stopped the cut from reaching her. I felt the air wave that accompanied the slash; it drove me back several feet! Behind me I heard shields being dented and cloven as it continued. She, having stuck her sword in the ground, brought it up, batting a large rock toward the young captain. He slashed it back and she dodged. They charged and went at it, seeking, probing, feinting and searching, now one gets pushed back, then the other! Such a fight I will never see again, and I have seen many things, sacks, massacres, long marches and fields of gore (how I wish to forget!) but never anything like that. The armies began to fight again when the combatants both had a sword at the otherÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢s neck. Now I saw something on the armor of the young captain, wetness on his helm. They jumped back. They stood there, the captain hell to his knees and cast off his helm, he was crying. ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ãâ¦Ã¢â¬ÅI canÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬Ã¢ââ¬Å¾Ã¢t fight you anymore!ÃÆââââ¬Å¡Ã¬ÃâÃ

exactly! and thank you KC Hughes for opening this line of thought! Zaros was banished to the abyss, but what if the Zamorack mages accidentally released him, as in when they first tried to open up the Abyss for their runecrafting!

Very nice, I'm relatively new to the Varrock library, but this is very fine poetry. =D>

agreed, and that just proves my theory on the symbol there in an attempt to stop/delay Zaros. Not to mention the gnomic wizard, all they need now is someone representing Zamorack (gnome=guthix)

I read that and came away feeling empty, no feelings or wonderment, no emotion,, except of slight discomfort because I ate an apple at the same time. My stomach hurts now. :x because I pity you. Edit: jk, I don't really pity you, just your story.

Oh! I'm very sorry! I was referring to that author, not you! I'm very sorry for the mistake! And I'll fix what you said! :oops:

Thank you! anyway, this has been stated before I dont think so... after all, remember, the WOM could not be old enought for that, humans can only go so far, I think that the WOm was a Saradomist (sara staff gold trimmed Sara armor etc.) but because he didnt get the money he wanted, began to look around. Because he knows (he is wise after all) that Zamorack is going to fail in the end, Guthix does not offer any monetary gain, and the Kharidian gods mostly involve death etc. Zaros could be his best bet. He was able to contact Zaros/Bob the cat and was given powers, provided he do things that involve research etc to bring him back to power. He used his powers to rob the bank. Currently he trying to get people/keeping people quiet in his conspiracy. example: Reldo- practically a library of knowledge by himself, what could he research given the materials? Zaros (bob) has seen the potential, that is why he invested a huge amount of power into him, but I bet he wants a results, thus the telescope looking to wizards tower. Runes, and huge amounts of them, are required for the various things that Zaros has planned. because zaros has a large amount of influence in the desert and his enemies should delay him/ annopy him or whatever, put up a kharidian symbol in hopes of delaying him. I also believe that Zaros hates Saradomin for being the brother of Zamorack, and not doing anything to stop him, as opposed to guthix, Guthix is to be assumed to be on par with Zaros or powerfuller, maybe.

name:Hylean age:23 (what I assume my char is) male or female:male weapon:hally/dagger when too close for hally race:human other info: wears a meddly of armors, rune legs, green drag body [bleep]y green vambs boots are splitbark and his cape is Ava's attractor (he has a long bow, but right now he is collecting arrows) has the gnomish googles (because the ladies love em) His personality is laid back and quiet, loves quiet adventuring and hunting. Loves to research. I think thats all needed

Yeah, also, please, please, please! capitalize the I's!

very very well written, I really liked it, the only thing I didnt like was fayelle, namely because of my grim view of human nature, but very good none the less.

I like it, very good!

most definately, after all, a king does not just disappear.

agreed :D and besides, the java script isnt being deleted!

amen I agree, but I got 47 by using ecto, so I dont mind much

AND GRANITE SPEAR!

:thumbsup: to his statement

or the attractor, very decent range bonus those things

I train newbs to be true players

well yes.... all been said before, but why does this conversation keeps on going to summoning, after all, what about the wise old man and zaros, I think we need to reopen this line of thought

not bad

Dude, you need 3 sentences for a paragraph... indentation etc. And what is the point with all these minuscule stories! graarrr! Sorry about that... anyway, what's the story behind this? Kinda curious!

well, I give this a 7/10 good job!