Hm, well i think its very well done, i like it I cant offer much advice because im not much of a photoshop master, only thing ill say is that for whatever reason the text"Death" Looks a wee bit pixely, like jaggy, know what i mean? maybe blur it a bit or somthing i donno:P
Yeah umm, dont post things that take 5 minutes and dont post 1st attemps, if YOU thik they suck then no one else wants too see them, so dont even bother, on the upside, everyone got a good eye burn from it so we are all happy.