>.< not sure if you tried, but drawing on computer is much harder than irl. that's what remote man said, and he's right, draw it on paper first, it gives you a general idea of what goes were the form of the lines and colors + shading, also most people who rate, have tried drawing on a paint program or something close to it. for your first picture i would give you a 5/10, maximum for your second picture i would give it a 6/10, maybe....