Hey hey, people. Don't be so harsh. I say 4/10 for your first one. Next time make it at the most 300X150. You attempted shading, looks ok, could use some more contrast. Your characters are looking like they've just been through a famine. Try and stay away from pre-shapes (the clouds? in the sky). And also limit the blood. A little bit is okay, but I think that's a bit too much. Try and add some detail to the area. Get your location right. There are no greaters near the rune rocks and there is no grass there. The cape looks like rags. Your line work pretty good. Just practice a bit more and look at other peoples to see how they did things (shading etc) but don't copy/rip.