issy2

Clever guess, but no. Ok BIG FAT CLUE: Bottle is thin at the top, then widens out.

problem: You wouldn't need an iron bar, because in real life, iron quickly becomes iron oxide! (rust) So you should make it steel, not iron.

nvm

lol can someone explain...? I don't undertsand what to do after getting to that black page with the coloured writing .. :boohoo:

Lol this actually happened on my mage pure, Zamoraksimp...(wearing full mystic, lava staff...you can see the attraction can't you?) Varrock Square Guy: Hi are you a mage? (level 9) Me: Yeah *starts to walk towards east bank* Guy: Can I have some runes please? Me: No sorry, I worked for mine, so should you. Guy: Alright will you be my gf I got 3 mil? *switching to new tactics...yeah that's quite clever, I mean it's not at all see-through, right?* Me: Get lost *reported, heads to Al Kharid* Guy: Wait I'll give you 800k then you be my gf hottie? Me: *reported* get lost noob *conversation continues until I have reported him 13 times, I am in Taverly, and he has offered me 1 mil* lol I can't believe what kind of guy gets turned on by pixels...

You probably don't wanna hear this but I'm a right-hand extremist.

nvm

70-80? Count me in for at least 100.

.... Ever heard of ladders? And no, don't immdeiately decide who wins, I am the boss round here, and yes that is wrong.

Wow, that's just amazing. To be honest, I don't think you can really do anything to it. It's a fantastic poem, just one teeny-weeny suggestion; put a full stop at the end of last verse. Issy.

Sounds good! Thanks alot for that, I might have to borrow it from a library:)

No offence but who can judge thumbnails and pixels? They don't signify real beauty. But, anyway, it's quite a fun idea.

Yar, sounds good.... Anyone still here?

Amazing!! Really clever, liked the comedy! Keep it coming!

It's good. Just two things; Poems don't have to rhyme, if it means using the wrong word then don't rhyme! I don't understand how the love between them grew, I think maybe you might add another verse about their growing relationship? Edit; In verse one; 'He rode a white stalling through the town.' If you mean male horse, it's spelt stallion. Otherwise, yes it's very good. Maybe try to give the poem a stronger rhythm, to keep the reader reading? =D> :D

What happens when some poor fool dares to step outside the lines? What happens when rules are broken and a man stands up for himself? What happens when that poor soul glimpes a better life for himself? When he sees something beyond all all he's ever known? It's not impossible. When one man dare to break out of the skin he's been enfolded in all his life, and with knowledge in his blood, dangerous things can happen... One more day, one more night. The horizon offered a weary trek home and a restless sleep. Whips and shouting, then pain and complete exhaustion. And the whole cycle would start again. Black dust crumbles. It crumbles onto the page of life. It is nothing more than the shards of a tale, a great man's tale. But left is only the desacated scraps. It shifts in the air and settles on the fresh creamy page of a book. An open book. The pages rustle in the air, and ripple in the darkness... ~~ Well, personally I think that's quite a good start! Please DO continue it below! I'm not good for ideas..so here's what you can do. 1. Continue the story in completely your own style, keeping the same beginning. 2. Type out a plan of events which happen after this, and which I can continue in my own style. (i.e, supply me with ideas!) 3. Comment on the beginning. (or, even better, all three!) Good luck

You don't think I can do better? Sure. Oh, and by the way, I'm female ....lol.

Clue: It's nothing about reproduction, pregnancy, or babies. (or women, for that matter, lol) Hey, sorry about this but I'm just gonna check whether this tag thing works. www.google.com *shrugs* I don't get this tag-link thing... :-k

if ANYONE random who is doing this event wants to add me, please, please do! Right now I'm in Tutorial Island, so I can't talk, but I'll be out in about 10 minutes. I am... Tetftw 3256 and Tetftw 59

Say hello to Tetftw 3256 YAAAY!!! I'll be there. Great idea btw.

hey, that's SUCH a waste of accounts... but hey, it's a great idea! Count me in if you guys are still there. Also is this is GMT time? When is it in British summer time and date? If anyone coukld say that'd be helpful.

Good for you. I know you said you didn't want any sympathy, but I went through a similar scenario once, just less serious. Good luck with ya life.

no no...it's not the *cough* inappropriate word...or anything to do with it. Anyone want a clue?

no no...it's not the *cough* inappropriate word...or anything to do with it. Anyone want a clue?

no no...it's not the *cough* inappropriate word...or anything to do with it. Anyone want a clue?