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no no...it's not the *cough* inappropriate word...or anything to do with it. Anyone want a clue?

no no...it's not the *cough* inappropriate word...or anything to do with it. Anyone want a clue?

no no...it's not the *cough* inappropriate word...or anything to do with it. Anyone want a clue?

no no...it's not the *cough* inappropriate word...or anything to do with it. Anyone want a clue?

Meesa I reread the story, with it's edits, and I really like it now. Well done, it's great. YES!!! Yes yes yes do a sequel! That would rock!

I think, as a story, it's pretty amazing. A few minor spelling mistakes, and a little of it is unrealistic...but I would rate it 9/10. In case you don't know, that's 90% ... which, for me, a very hgh rating. Well done, keep it up. My suggestion is to stop using ? as '. For instance, you say Aydrian?s instead of Aydrain's. This REALLY ruined it for me. Urin-urine whipin g-whipping mentonning- mentionning :lol: :wink:

The beginning's a lil' cliche... but i LOVE!!! the last line. Amazing! 10/10 for the last verse 7/10 for the rest.

Probably around....maybe 150k tops. I bought some planks from sawmill guy, probably about 200, then quite a bit of cloth... I spent 1k on buying it... 30k on 2 workshops 4k on parlours 20k on some bedrooms 5k on two gardens kitchen and 2 dining rooms... I don't know how much that is altogether...but I'm just about to spend around 30k on normal logs... edit; Now level 29 :lol:

urm... when you say "addicting" do you mean Addictive? If you do...I would DEFINITELY say Yesterday, Beatles and I cant come down by Embrace... Anyone heard 'em?

ARE YOU KIDDING ME!? I HEARD CHEAP TRICK 13 TIMES LAST WEEK, COUNTED! REO SPEEDWAGON NEVER STOPS PLAYING, FLEETWOOD MAC...Well....you have a point on that one.Ehh. Is there something wrong with you? Is there something wrong with you? :roll: You probably live in different parts of the world or listen to different radio stations. I would say... John Lennon (not a band but i don't care...he is amazing, anyone who has heard his songs will know what I mean) Embrace

Hi, I'm issy. Recently I've been very puzzled by the little....things at the side of posts. Under my name (issy) it says "Chicken Feather." Now what the heck does that mean?

I don't believe in it...but sometimes it still freaks me out! Did you know that the Fire of London, which destroyed more than 90 churches and 5000 houses, occured on the 6th of the 6th in 1666? TRUE!

hi guys. Does anyone out there play chess? Sorry but this is a 2 player game unless you get into teams! Only if you know how to play chess-mail (chess by postal service) which take years. Literally! Hopefully on the forums it'll be quicker than that! A Quick Explanation- Choose red/black. On most modern chess sets, black is black/brown and red is white/silver/glass. White Team starts. For instance they might post : Left Knight 4F On the board, the White player's left Knight would be moved to Square 4f. And so on! Who wants to play?! PS. I have a real chessboard. On it I will move the pieces accordingly. NOTE: Please remember the following rules which are often forgotten in modern chess games. 1. The King cannot be captured. 2. The only piece that can be recovered is the Queen, but only if a pawn reaches the other side of the board. 3. A pawn can move two places on it's first go, but only 1 on all the next. 4. A Pawn cannot move backwards, only forwards. 5. A Prawn (I honestly used to call 'em that) has only one exception to not moving forwards. That's when the Pawn can take a piece forward-diagonally. 6. The Queen can move in any direction for any number of spaces WITHOUT jumping over any pieces. 7. No piece can jump over another except the Knight. Ok I'm the Black team! Who wants to be Red? (Red (commonly known as White) starts!)

Hi. Does anyone out there play chess? (yes ok, I'm an amatuer. Now please let's stop arguing about the rules.) Only if you know how to play chess-mail (chess by postal service) which take years. Literally! Hopefully on the forums it'll be quicker than that! Choose red/black. On most modern chess sets, black is black/brown and red is white/silver/glass. White/Red Team starts, post your movement. Black/Brown Team posts movement. Feel free to post corrections to rules, just constructively. Rules: 1. The King cannot be captured. 2. If you get a pawn to the end of the board, you may swap it for a captured queen, knight, rook, or bishop. 3. A pawn can move two places on it's first go, but only 1 on all the next. 4. A Pawn cannot move backwards, only forwards. 5. A Prawn (I honestly used to call 'em that) has only one exception to not moving forwards. That's when the Pawn can take a piece forward-diagonally. 6. The Queen can move in any direction for any number of spaces without jumping over any pieces. 7. No piece can jump over another except the Knight and rooks/kings during castling. I like black... Who wants to be red? 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 (X axis co-ordinate first, please) 1/ / / / / / / / 2/ / / / / / / / 3/ / / / / / / / 4/ / / / / / / / 5/ / / / / / / / 6/ / / / / / / / 7/ / / / / / / / 8/ / / / / / / / (Y axis, Second Co-or dinate In Move- ment) Post top number (X axis) movement first, then Y axis co-ordinate. [/b]

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......*zooming sound* hellooo! And welcome to ~Riddles~ A Mind Challenge. DO NOT POST A RIDDLE UNLESS YOU HAVE SOLVED ONE. This is the game! I post a starting-riddle, and everyone else has to solve it.! Easy? Hmm...hopefully not. The winner of the riddle will be awarded one point. I will replace the riddle with a new one. RULES Do not post riddles UNLESS you have solved a riddle. Please don't assume an answer is correct without confirmation. Feel free to pm me, and ask questions in this thread about the riddles. Other than 'what's the answer?' Current Riddle(s): When posting answers, please specify riddle number! 1. If, having only one match, on a freezing winter day, you entered a room which contained a lamp, a kerosene heater, and a wood burning stove, which should you light first? 2. Cathy has six pairs of black gloves and six pairs of brown gloves in her drawer. In complete darkness, how many gloves must she take from the drawer in order to be sure to get a pair that match? Think carefully!! ~Unsolved Riddles~ ~Scoreboard~ 1. Sheepdean.......(3) 2. AfroThundeX......(1) grg06...............(1)

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Wow, yes, overall the Prologue, I thought, was very good. However, I agree; it does defy the history or Runescape, but as it's a story I don't think it matters. Some spelling mistakes, such as spelling Runescape with a minor r swollowed- swallowed inocent- innocent Saradoim- Saradomin Guthrix- Guthix However, you need to use more commas and less full stops. This makes it sound more professional to the reader. You could also use use connectives and semi colons. Good luck, so far I think it's quite good. I just want to know what happened when Elenor is three, because then you skipped to twenty years later and we never found out what happened! Zamoraksimp

Wow...that was...a surprise! Probably better than the original.

Truthful opinion? It's boring and very unrealistic. Puncuation and paragraphs are non-existent, and vocabulary is uninteresting. You need to explain more about what happened. For instance, when he 'kills 20 monks' you should explain HOW and WHY he did it. For instance, you should explain his anger, his frustration, his bad temper, whipping out his sword, or whirling spells on them in a flurry of rage...etc, you get the idea. Also use paragraphs or it's extremely hard to know what's going on. Paragraphs often make writing look professional and confident. Issy. Good luck with your writing.

Hi, I'm Issy. I'm new to these forums, lol, and don't really know what I'm doing but anyway... You need more puncuation; the sentences go on far too long without a breath for the reader. Try to use some of these: , to separate clauses, or separate additional information. ; a semi colon- a mix between a full stop and a colon. It's longer than the colon but shorter than the stop. It can be used where two separate sentences can be joined into one. () Brackets. To hold additional information and to indicate a pause in the sentences. For example: It was another day in my village; another ordinary day at Flancor, a minor village just south of Ardougne. (change of tense, unless you use a new pargraph) Some people say we are the smallest village in the entire world, (possible use of a connectivem ore interesting than but, for instance although, or however) although I'm not sure. We have more shops than Draynor, (new clause does not make sense. You need to use an additional connective) as well as houses and residents. I am the son of the general store owner, but as with every general store, we were known as the general store owner and the shop assistant. I was also trying to learn the smithing and mining trades, so I could make money for myself. But there was one thing I was always trying to do. To add to that, the beginning is extremely see-through and obvious. You really need to decide what kind of person you are aiming your story at, and create a beginning that would immediately interest them. Otherwise, it's quite good. And sorry if it came across a bit harsh! Issy.

Yo mamma's so fat that when she was yo-high she sat next to everyone in the class. Hah, that one always cracks me up...

Yeah, but my brother does that. It makes me feel claustophobic and uncomfortable, but he just gets angry...

When I use my mum's laptop that always happens, but on the PC it's really fast. I don't know what's wrong with the laptop but the screen goes white when I click on a world, lol.