3rd Sprite. CnC appreciated

 

 

 

V1

 

 

 

 

V2

 

well the text is very faint, and i cant read what is under boab, its too small

 

 

 

and the render somehow doesnt fit, i mean, you have a cool sophistcated BG and suddently a cartoony image, looks weird. the render is also a little bit hard to see

I could hardly see the thing, the creature thingy, or the text, but your render is nice..

the pokemon is pretty rubbish quality, doesn't fit that well, also the background looks like it should have the terminator standing there not a pokemon, doesn't really fit

the text under boab is meant to be unreadable. its there for looks - its a lot of jibberish.

I like it a lot. Nothing wrong with it, but the v1 is better. Text is fine, nothing special but ok. One problem is and that is the huge amount of effect. Maybe little less c4d's next time?

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I think its pretty good, but the left part has less depth then the rest.

I like it a lot. Nothing wrong with it, but the v1 is better. Text is fine, nothing special but ok. One problem is and that is the huge amount of effect. Maybe little less c4d's next time?

 

 

 

only 2 c4d's in it :P

I like it a lot. Nothing wrong with it, but the v1 is better. Text is fine, nothing special but ok. One problem is and that is the huge amount of effect. Maybe little less c4d's next time?

 

 

 

only 2 c4d's in it :P

 

 

 

You're kidding me right?

nope.

It's a bit hard to see, but nice though. :D

the text font and lighting dont match up poor choice on that

 

 

 

 

 

but other than that its decent