Lumbridge- it's long past.

[powerent]

Become a dwarf. Eat metal, NOT WAFFLES OR PANCAKES!

[Bluejayfan94]

Dwarfs are too small though

 

I LIKE BEING BIG

[PURESMITHER]

More, more, more, more (*several million).

 

 

 

Amazing story - and you've stopped!

 

 

 

 

 

Noooooooooooooo!

[powerent]

Be whatever size you want, JUST SOMEONE PUT MORE OF THE STORY ONTO HERE!!!!!!! Darkforaster, please make a response if you're going to add onto the story. We all want it back! I'm BEGGING you...sorry about the sections in all-caps.

[Bluejayfan94]

Be whatever size you want, JUST SOMEONE PUT MORE OF THE STORY ONTO HERE!!!!!!! Darkforaster, please make a response if you're going to add onto the story. We all want it back! I'm BEGGING you...sorry about the sections in all-caps.

 

 

 

YES WE BEG YOU!!!!

 

lol

[darkforaster]

Be whatever size you want, JUST SOMEONE PUT MORE OF THE STORY ONTO HERE!!!!!!! Darkforaster, please make a response if you're going to add onto the story. We all want it back! I'm BEGGING you...sorry about the sections in all-caps.

 

 

 

YES WE BEG YOU!!!!

 

lol

 

 

 

Sorry guys, writers block.

 

 

 

But, now that it's summer, I'll have more time to think. So the story will be finished Soon

[darkforaster]

~ Chapter 11, Omnipotent warfare - part 5 ~

 

 

 

After the last of the lava had emerged from the broken earth, Guthix reversed his spell under his breath and his arms rose up from beneath the ground. Zamarak was near now, so this seemed to be more of an effort than it should have been. His voice sounded strained to the group of humans. Now an audience to the battle.

 

 

 

Then, out of nowhere. There was a loud crashing sound from the direction of the battlefield. That can't be good. A voice inside Charles's head said. He was crouched over midna. bandaging her wounds. She had lost too much blood and was lying unconscious on the floor beneath them. He looked up.

 

 

 

Again, the dwarfs were erupting into chaos. You could hear there muttering from Edgeville. What was that?One voice called. Another earthquake... I think said another. Charles ignored thier curses and mumbles and resumed watching the fight.

 

 

 

Zamorak had landed upon the island with a tremendous drop. he had accellerated when he had saw the maze forming. The extra weight upon the island caused it to topple like a see-saw. Zamorak at one end, Guthix on the other. Both, however, were hanging on to the rock for thier lives. The island had balanced at verticle angle. One half of it was buried in lava. The other half, was the stop the deaths of two gods.

 

 

 

Things looked bleak though, as it was tipping so that the island would have flipped over completely. Causing both gods to drown and melt in the lava. "No!" Guthix cried. "I am not destined to die!" As soon as these words passed his lips he leaped from the rock. Heading straight for the lava.

 

 

 

But inches from where the molten rock laid, Guthix recovered and flew away. Zamarak, who was closest to the ground, couldn't do this movement. As he would surely be consumed by the heated, bubbling cauldron of lava before he could recover balance.

 

 

 

Guthix landed nearby. He did nothing. Waiting for the promised screams of his brother, but instead he was recieved to praise. "Bravo! Guthix!" Said the voice behind him. Charles saw anger spread across Guthix's face. He clearly thought he'd be dead. "I suppose you knew that would happen all along. You are clever Guthix. Much more intelligent than this ignorant old fool." This, seemed to please Guthix and a triumphant grin grew apone his mutant face.

 

 

 

Guthix laughed. "You choose to insult yourself and bless me? Something is wrong, Zamorak. You would normally choose your last words with care. You should mock me. You are about to die. What kind of finale of your life is this?" He chuckled again and shaked his head in disbelief.

 

 

 

"These are not my last words, Guthix."

 

 

 

~ end of chapter 11 ~

[Bluejayfan94]

Be whatever size you want, JUST SOMEONE PUT MORE OF THE STORY ONTO HERE!!!!!!! Darkforaster, please make a response if you're going to add onto the story. We all want it back! I'm BEGGING you...sorry about the sections in all-caps.

 

 

 

YES WE BEG YOU!!!!

 

lol

 

 

 

Sorry guys, writers block.

 

 

 

But, now that it's summer, I'll have more time to think. So the story will be finished Soon

 

 

 

YAY!! new part!!!

 

 

 

And just for the record, I was in B.C. for a week and still haven't lost my writers block. Hopefully I will lose it soon.

[lya_helix]

this is an awsome story, i stayed up for half the night reading it, now i think im gonn fall... *snore loudly*... *wake up 5 hours later* huh? oh right, AWSOME STORY! cant wait for the next part, if you dont make one, i will... *snore* *wakes up* huh? oh right, SEND AN ARMY OF RABID PANCAKES AND WAFFLES AT YOU! mmmmmm... pancakes and waffles

[powerent]

You put end of chapter 5, it should be end of chapter 11. You might want to edit that.

[Bluejayfan94]

this is an awsome story, i stayed up for half the night reading it, now i think im gonn fall... *snore loudly*... *wake up 5 hours later* huh? oh right, AWSOME STORY! cant wait for the next part, if you dont make one, i will... *snore* *wakes up* huh? oh right, SEND AN ARMY OF RABID PANCAKES AND WAFFLES AT YOU! mmmmmm... pancakes and waffles

 

 

 

PANCAKES AND WAFFLES ARE MY THING!!! :twisted: :twisted:

 

 

 

I EAT THEM :mrgreen: :mrgreen:

[darkforaster]

~ Chapter 12, Triple Seal - part 1 ~

 

 

 

Guthix burst out laughing. His laughs echoed through the mountains, disrupting the wildlife. Chaos for the animals there. Birds flew south at a rapid pace, startled by the sounds. On the ground, however, bears were slowly approaching Guthix from different directions. Prepared to fight to the death for thier territory.

 

 

 

Charles was neither frightened, not angry by this new turn of events. He was standing smiling. Watching Guthix mock Zamarak endlessly with taunts and laughs. Watching as Guthix paraded round Zamarak merrily. He was the only one who knew what Zamarak was talking about.

 

 

 

Then, Guthix silenced and waited for the end. Watching, now. Taking pleasure in his victory, and to the death of the god he had previously worshipped. Then, Zamarak fell. Towards the lava, towards his doom. Cascading feet first through the air. Flapping his wings to slow himself down. But it was too late to begin flying. He was just delaying the inevitable.

 

 

 

As he fell closer to the lava, the wider the grin on Guthix's face became. There was a soft splashing sound as hemade contact with the lava. Guthix's smile vanished. For Zamarak was still living, he was standing on the surface of the molten rock, perfectly balanced atop it's surface.

 

 

 

He let out a roar of pain as the hot liquid burnt through his flesh. He began flying and stopped midair beside the maze of lava. He then dashed towards the rock and crashed into it's side. It became level again, and Zamarak turned and faced Guthix once more. "I told you." He said smugly. "Rule number one, Guthix. Never mock your older brothers. Now, you must face the consequences."

 

 

 

"But before I punish you, brother." The beastly god continued. "I must reveal to you a spectator, also of godly power. Who has been watching us the entire time and has remained unnoticed until now." Zamarak chuckled. "Guthix, would you like to meet your other brother? Come out now..."

 

 

 

"Saradomin"

[powerent]

Ohmanohmanohman! The suspense! Middle school started today for me, which is off-topic, but that doesn't mean the story doesn't rock. Even if a bit shorter than other chapters and parts of them, it still is an amazing story that you should keep working on, and only you can decide when to end. I will be sad when you do finish, but the final result will remain amazing. I have one smiley for you: :thumbsup: Keep up the great work!

[Bluejayfan94]

Yes, Keep up the great work. This story ROCKS!! :thumbsup: I bet if you get a review from Sephy or Xweelhr you'll get an overscore and go to the kings section : :

[darkforaster]

~ Chapter 12, triple seal - part 2

 

 

 

"What?" cried Guthix. "Where could he be hiding?" Guthix turned and began frantically searching for him. Destroying bouldars. Crushing trees. Until Zamorak gave out a long sigh and raised his hand. He shook his hand and muttered a spell under his breath. The landscape he was pointing to shimmered slightly. Like a pong. Until a tall figure appeared, his illusion lost.

 

 

 

"You really have no magical talent do you?" The figure said in a calm and confident. "Not being able to sense magic such as mine. You are pathetic." He spat vicously and turned to Zamorak. "Is he really the 'detined brother' said to destroy both of us?" Zamorak kept silent and nodded.

 

 

 

"I'm disappointed in you, brother. I expected more from you against this being." He laughed gently. Suddenly optimistic. His smile seemed to comfort Charles. Who suddenly felt relaxed. It was as if he radiated peace. His looks, unlike Zamorak's and Guthix's, was human. Except extremely big and a few odd features.

 

 

 

His eyes were not pure blue, as Charles had predicted. Instead, he had pure white pupils. Plus, his skin was very pale. He looked as if he was going to throw up any second. It's colour was unbroken except by the clearly visible blue lines that plagued his face, going around all that was visible. They were the veins and arteries.

 

 

 

Nevertheless, he still had clearly human hands and feet. And a body which resembled one too. Allowing him to wear magical robes to protect himself, also a distinct colour of white and blue which matched his eyes. It appeared to be like no other kind of magicians armour.

 

 

 

He turned his staff around his hands, repeatedly. Before long, the end of the staff glowed with a dull throbbing light which grew gradually brighter. "Guthix, welcome into the family. I shall teach you of what us gods are capable of. I shall usemy very own secret spell on you." Saradomin smiled softly. "Saradomin strike!"

 

 

 

There was a bright flash of light, followed by a loud scream of pain. When the glow faded, Charles looked and saw Guthix lying on the floor. Writhing in agony. A look of surprise in his eyes. After a few seconds he lay unconscious on the floor. Not making any signs of waking up.

 

 

 

After an uncomfortable silence. Saradomin spoke. "Zamorak, he released you from the prison, I expect." He gestured at Guthix, still sleeping. "With the Zamorak necklace was it?" Zamorak did not respond. But Saradomin Seemed to understand his silence. "I see. You know something, brother?"

 

 

 

"I never missed you." He laughed spitefully. "All you did was cause trouble. I enjoyed the peace and quiet. But now, Your back to cause more chaos. Unfortunately for us all, I can't let that happen." He sighed with what sounded like pity. " I must seal you away once again. But this sort of magic requires me to sacrifice my own freedom. We shall be together, for eternity, brother."

 

 

 

Zamorak gasped and prepared for attack. "Flames of Zam-" But he was interrupted by Saradomin's spell. Unable to finish he gave in to destiny and allowed the end.

 

 

 

"Triple seal"

[darkforaster]

~ Chapter 12, triple seal - part 3 ~

 

 

 

Zamorak cried out in anger. He walked towards a tall yew tree and grabbed it. His firm was tight, as if he did not plan to let go. There was a look of fear in his eyes. As if he knew what was about to come. Frustrated of the spell. Which would seal him in the prison he was held before he was freed.

 

 

 

Saradomin, ignored Zamorak's roar and the end of his staff shined brightly once again. this time with a dark blue power. As if the spell was some sort of black magic. He then thrust his staff into the middle of the maze and stepped back.

 

 

 

Saradomin raised his arm and gestered at the light. It seperated into three seperate orbs of power which floated around the staff multiple times until one by one they shot out at the three gods. Saradomin and Guthix were first to be struck. Guthix stirred in his sleep and clutched at his stomach, where the magic made contact with his skin. Then he awoke and rose with difficulty.

 

 

 

His brother, however, was in a worse state. He was lying on the floor, blood flowing from his mouth and vomit lay beside his head. He too, then, rose. During the first attempt at standing he fell back down. But after the third try he was on his feet. Wiping away the substances that covered his face.

 

 

 

Zamorak was not so much of an easy target for the magic power. After dodging it for a few minutes he finally was struck. Unlike his brothers, thoguh, he remained just a bit shaken. As if he had to face such pains before. He grabbed the tree again, and braced for the next step.

 

 

 

The wind picked up suddenly. Blowing towards the trio, who merely ignored the wind. Saradomin slowly placed his hands together and glowed the same dark blue that the balls of magic did previously. the other two appeared alarmed by this and soon realised that they too, were glowing that colour.

 

 

 

After a few moments of silence, thier bodies became distorted and stretched. The staff then sunk into the ground, until all that was left was a hole which grew wider and wider. "What's happening?" Dervish said. Looking curiously at the scene which was happening before them.

 

 

 

"It looks as if the hole is drawing them in." Replied Charles. " No... it's drawing the magic into it." After a few muttering of confusion Charles continued. "The magic has merged with the three gods and is pulling them into the hole."

 

 

 

Guthix fell into the hoel as soon as Charles stopped speaking. His cries for help echoed throughout the wilderness and sent a shiver down Charles's spine. "It's the end. They all lose." He said calmly. And, sure enought, Zamorak's tree soon split and he tumbled into the deep dark void which lurked below.

 

 

 

Silence fell upon the group as they watched the final god vanish into the prison. Then, the hole repaired itself. "It's over" Charles said.

 

 

 

"Let's go home."

 

 

 

~ end of chapter 12 ~

[darkforaster]

~epilogue~

 

 

 

The gods battle had finished. All three had been sealed away. Left to fight forever. Charles went to see Duke Betwoc after the fight, there he was granted the title Duke of Lumbridge and had a palace built for himself. This granted Lumbridge much more polularity and it grew very quickly. With new arrivals visiting every day.

 

 

 

Dervish also benefited from the victory. He became a famous Silver knight capable of defeating an entire troop of barbarians in a single swoop of his sword. He married Rita a few years later, and led one of the most successful lives of anyone from Lumbridge's past.

 

 

 

Midna moved to Varrock and set up her own Archery store for beginners. She got lots of buisness and became rich quickly. Wildheart's buisness also prospered from the publicity and became the first person in all the lands to acquire 1 million gold.

 

 

 

Everyone was happy with thier new found fortunes. Some however, were not so lucky. Followers from Saradomin, Zamorak and Guthix continued to clash, like The three gods themselves. Trapped in a prison, fighting for all eternity. Never to be released...

 

 

 

But, never is a long time....

 

 

 

~ The end. ~

[Bluejayfan94]

WOW!

 

Good ending.

 

 

 

Is it over!?

 

Or are you making a sequel? :?

[powerent]

Amazing, from little after start to incredible finish! Good storyline, amazing suspense, pretty much all I could ask for. Write more stories, please! For the sake of this entire library, I beg you!

[darkforaster]

WOW!

 

Good ending.

 

 

 

Is it over!?

 

Or are you making a sequel? :?

 

 

 

I'm thinking about it. BUt it will be a while until I do.

 

 

 

I have an idea in mind.

[llamster]

Great story.

[Bluejayfan94]

WOW!

 

Good ending.

 

 

 

Is it over!?

 

Or are you making a sequel? :?

 

 

 

I'm thinking about it. BUt it will be a while until I do.

 

 

 

I have an idea in mind.

 

SWEET!! Can't wait to read it.

[darkforaster]

WOW!

 

Good ending.

 

 

 

Is it over!?

 

Or are you making a sequel? :?

 

 

 

I'm thinking about it. BUt it will be a while until I do.

 

 

 

I have an idea in mind.

 

SWEET!! Can't wait to read it.

 

 

 

I haven't even decided if I am going to write anither one. I said i'm thinking about it.

 

 

 

But I have a lot of things to do now.

[Bluejayfan94]

WOW!

 

Good ending.

 

 

 

Is it over!?

 

Or are you making a sequel? :?

 

 

 

I'm thinking about it. BUt it will be a while until I do.

 

 

 

I have an idea in mind.

 

SWEET!! Can't wait to read it.

 

 

 

I haven't even decided if I am going to write anither one. I said i'm thinking about it.

 

 

 

But I have a lot of things to do now.

 

AWWWWW!!!

 

Well, Ill just hope you do make the sequel :thumbsup: :pray:

[kam42705]

How about a prequel? Well...two of them actually... one for Varrock, and the other for Falador. Personally, this is one of the greatest stories (that have ended) on these boards. Your amazing writing style would do great for a history of the past of Varrock, specifically the wars it has had with Morytanian creatures, along with the blessing of the River Salve. The Asgarnian aspect may be tied to that of Camelot, with the White Knights founded by the Knights of the Round Table. After completing Falador, the ground would be set for Camelot, and afterwards, Ardougne. So, in essence, you could have a precise and concise history on the history of the land of Gielenor, and how each city's creation is entwined with another, while the first one was created by the Mahjarrat, or some other tribe...