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[Kuroi_Ame]

"Green"

 

 

 

 

v2

 

 

 

 

v3

 

 

 

 

 

 

First time with a render.

 

 

 

 

Black border:

 

 

 

 

Render:

 

http://img396.imageshack.us/img396/5334/deathangel4gk.png

 

 

 

 

 

Second time with render.

 

 

 

 

v2

 

 

 

 

Render:

 

http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-16042

 

 

 

Rate and c/c please.

[ThruItAll]

Don't really like the blur, V1 is best IMO.

[Kuroi_Ame]

"Green"

 

 

 

 

v2

 

 

 

 

v3

 

 

 

 

Rate and c/c please.

[ortiz9471]

I like V2, V1 is too much and V3 not enough.

 

 

 

Just warning you, I have no clue what I'm talking about, I'm just saying what I see.

[Kuroi_Ame]

Got rid of the green signature, it was very bad...Replaced it with a render'ed grunge.

[Nazgul740]

Ok well... it looks pretty terrible mate =;

 

 

 

First time with a render so i understand that its new to you but you really should look up some tutorials

 

 

 

Some things that would make it look a bit better

 

 

 

Blending in the render

 

 

 

having the left side match the colors on the left... (doesn't always have to be this way, but for this sig the colors are rather jarring)

 

 

 

Changing the text - Yes, it needs to be changed

 

 

 

Play around with lighting more... atm there isn't alot done with it besides a few parts that are white blocks... Lighting isn't that hard it just requires some thought

 

 

 

I couldn't tell what the render was when i first saw it... so that should get a few minutes of attention

 

 

 

Yeah, erm thats about it but it needs some work

 

 

 

-edit that is a pretty render though...

[Ozzy_Patrick]

To be honest I prefered the concept of the green one you posted, kind of retro. It just needed improving in my opinion. This sig seems a bit unoriginal and looks like many other sigs I see around.

 

 

 

Anyway a few things things that could be improved:

 

- The techy kind of shapes don't really go with the grungier feel of the sig.

 

- I couldn't tell what the render was until I saw the whole image [edit - didn't see Nazgul's post before I posted so it seems like it's not just me].

 

- That font is a bit unclear at that size.

 

- The background could use a little more depth in my opinion.

[Kuroi_Ame]

To be honest I prefered the concept of the green one you posted, kind of retro. It just needed improving in my opinion. This sig seems a bit unoriginal and looks like many other sigs I see around.

 

 

 

Anyway a few things things that could be improved:

 

- The techy kind of shapes don't really go with the grungier feel of the sig.

 

- I couldn't tell what the render was until I saw the whole image.

 

- That font is a bit unclear at that size.

 

- The background could use a little more depth in my opinion.

 

I liked the green one, too, but no one else did. Would you mind telling me what to improve on the green one? I'll repost it if you need to see it again, I'd really like to make it look better.

[Kuroi_Ame]

Second time with render.

 

 

 

 

v2

 

 

 

 

Render:

 

http://www.planetrenders.net/renders/displayimage.php?pos=-16042

 

 

 

Rate and c/c please.

[Ozzy_Patrick]

I liked the green one, too, but no one else did. Would you mind telling me what to improve on the green one? I'll repost it if you need to see it again, I'd really like to make it look better.

 

 

 

I have to say I've not got much of an idea on how to improve the green one. All I can see is that it needs more to it, just try experimenting with it if you want to carry on with it.

[loaf2000]

I didnt really like green or the first render , but i think the second render one is okay.

[Kuroi_Ame]

Thanks, but only 'okay?' Okay means not great, what can I improve on with it for next time? I don't see anything wrong with it, so I need you guys to see what I don't see. :x