st_laflahae Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 I know it isnt that good, but here it is... What do you think? C/c only plz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chounin Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 i can't really comment on terragens because I'm not good at them so the only comment I'll make is that the water doesn't look too realistic. I don't know how to comment on the rother stuff because I can't differentiate between what is good and what is bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Victim Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 Dunno why but I really like that, the sun in the middle is cool, and the place gives a good atmosphere, only thing that needs work is the water, and maybe the texture of the stone things. Really good job for first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord_Maras Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 Thats pretty freakin sweet. The water looks like a giant bowl of oatmeal so just sprinkle some brown sugar on it and it would be sweet. Maybe put 'ole Nessy swimming around in it. http://www.rampid.org Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J_Rod_The_Ti Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 The water looks like thick soup and theres kind of no surface mapping. Also I'm sure Nad's gonna tell you, get worldmachine. He told me about it last night and it really does wonders. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
smallboy68 Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 i dont know why but that reminds me of glastonbury........ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jak722 Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 that was water?! i thought it was a glacier or something. it looks cool though, and i like the sun too. 8/10 The Enrichment Center reminds you that the weighted companion cube will never threaten to stab you and, in fact, cannot speak. In the event that the weighted companion cube does speak, the Enrichment Center urges you to disregard its advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NACHO Posted December 30, 2004 Share Posted December 30, 2004 quit raping the censor system Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest aesiri Posted January 1, 2005 Share Posted January 1, 2005 not bad for a first render. keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted January 1, 2005 Share Posted January 1, 2005 wow..... umm... Heres some help... and this peice needs ALOT of it. 1) It looks like its a model kind of thing, like a toy. You can clearly see the plain flat land off in the distance and it has no depth whatsoever. 2)It also has NO texture whatsoever. 3) The water, like others said, it blatently bad. Even just the normal default water usualy works fine. 4) THe ray effece you give isn't bad, but the atmosphere is a very smiple one, and is lacking alot. 5) The way the mountains form is also very unrealistic. the big point there is just odd, and that with the fact of no depth leaves this to be a VERY unrealistic landscape render. Overall, everything needs to be worked on. Give it actual depth, i recomend downloading http://www.world-machine.com , and actualy give it a surface map. Check up on the terragen main page, they have a tutorail about it, and i STRONGLY recomend reading it, will make you understand instead of just clickin random colors for textures :) Rofl, just read through posts, and J_Rod is right, i'm telling you to get it :lol: :lol: ahaha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J272 Posted January 1, 2005 Share Posted January 1, 2005 All you gotta do is put snow around it, and suddenly, its a FROZEN river! Hmm, otherwise, it reminds me very much of the frozen lake/river in King Arthur.... J272 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robodude288 Posted January 2, 2005 Share Posted January 2, 2005 wow..... umm... Heres some help... and this peice needs ALOT of it. 1) It looks like its a model kind of thing, like a toy. You can clearly see the plain flat land off in the distance and it has no depth whatsoever. 2)It also has NO texture whatsoever. 3) The water, like others said, it blatently bad. Even just the normal default water usualy works fine. 4) THe ray effece you give isn't bad, but the atmosphere is a very smiple one, and is lacking alot. 5) The way the mountains form is also very unrealistic. the big point there is just odd, and that with the fact of no depth leaves this to be a VERY unrealistic landscape render. Overall, everything needs to be worked on. Give it actual depth, i recomend downloading http://www.world-machine.com , and actualy give it a surface map. Check up on the terragen main page, they have a tutorail about it, and i STRONGLY recomend reading it, will make you understand instead of just clickin random colors for textures :) Rofl, just read through posts, and J_Rod is right, i'm telling you to get it :lol: :lol: ahaha. i agree but world machine didnt work for me when i tried to useit a while back the install file was crupt it might work for you one thng that no one has said is that its a good start why dont you all be nice :D keep trying you will get it sooner or later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted January 2, 2005 Share Posted January 2, 2005 wow..... umm... Heres some help... and this peice needs ALOT of it. 1) It looks like its a model kind of thing, like a toy. You can clearly see the plain flat land off in the distance and it has no depth whatsoever. 2)It also has NO texture whatsoever. 3) The water, like others said, it blatently bad. Even just the normal default water usualy works fine. 4) THe ray effece you give isn't bad, but the atmosphere is a very smiple one, and is lacking alot. 5) The way the mountains form is also very unrealistic. the big point there is just odd, and that with the fact of no depth leaves this to be a VERY unrealistic landscape render. Overall, everything needs to be worked on. Give it actual depth, i recomend downloading http://www.world-machine.com , and actualy give it a surface map. Check up on the terragen main page, they have a tutorail about it, and i STRONGLY recomend reading it, will make you understand instead of just clickin random colors for textures :) Rofl, just read through posts, and J_Rod is right, i'm telling you to get it :lol: :lol: ahaha. i agree but world machine didnt work for me when i tried to useit a while back the install file was crupt it might work for you one thng that no one has said is that its a good start why dont you all be nice :D keep trying you will get it sooner or later Not sure why it would be a corrupt file for you, i know its worked for me and others. And for a first it still needs alot of work. I've seen much better firsts :wink: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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