Sy_Accursed Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 Still very earlier on But anyway feedback on pose, d chain texture (left shoulder) and any background ideas? Update 1 Update 2 Update 3 Update 4 Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skully Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 D scimmy looks a little small. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Syd Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 It's quite hard to realise what's going on in the picture. Hard to rate with that amount of work, I'll maybe rate it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
specialcharacter Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 The perspective is very confusing and the cape looks like it is on the fron of his body Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 The perspective is very confusing and the cape looks like it is on the fron of his body erm wtf? If the cape was on the front of his body it'd be behind the figure, as in the pose his back is towards 'camera' Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThoseTheBrokes Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 It just doesn't work. Is she/he supposed to look aggressive? or just like she/he is floating around like a pretty princess? D chain is off, It looks to me like a sparkly top.. My dA account..retired, as of the 1st January 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 obviously they look like thier floating when the bg isn't there yet. But yeah d chain needs a bit more work on the texture. Just harder than i expected in such a small area. Also need to get the shoulder horns onto the d chain Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThoseTheBrokes Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 Even if there was a background there, The stance looks like he/she is pirouetting. My dA account..retired, as of the 1st January 2008. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 well its your opinion in the end And its impossible for you to know the reason behind the pose until I put all the background features in Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 Updated again. Parts of quest cape shaded. Scimmy handle and vambs shaded Right leg lowered, to improve pose Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 well its your opinion in the end And its impossible for you to know the reason behind the pose until I put all the background features in Not really... Ima go with everyone else cause i have to say im none to impressed with the stance atm Anatomy is just a bit... well off... it all seems just sorta stuffed into there... Facial anatomy isn't really existant... The nose mouth and eyes are all really basic... New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loaf2000 Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 his body position looks a little akward. pixel sig and avatar by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 lol I think it works, but I'm still tinkering. As for the face, yeah its basic, but I never do detailed faces. Just a trademark of my style, I would pull out all my old pixels to prove this point. But I can't be bothered to be honest cause its not like this is an argument or fight. Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordUrian Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 well its your opinion in the end And its impossible for you to know the reason behind the pose until I put all the background features in Not really... Ima go with everyone else cause i have to say im none to impressed with the stance atm Anatomy is just a bit... well off... it all seems just sorta stuffed into there... Facial anatomy isn't really existant... The nose mouth and eyes are all really basic... You pathetic [developmentally delayed],the signature isn't even ready,and you tend to criticize everything which isn't fancy for you,get the [cabbage] out here if you don't have REAL constructive criticism. :wall: * ChanServ sets mode: +h Teh_Demi-God_Of_All_Nubs<_ScOpeY_> A sad day in the history of irc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loaf2000 Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 well its your opinion in the end And its impossible for you to know the reason behind the pose until I put all the background features in Not really... Ima go with everyone else cause i have to say im none to impressed with the stance atm Anatomy is just a bit... well off... it all seems just sorta stuffed into there... Facial anatomy isn't really existant... The nose mouth and eyes are all really basic... You pathetic [developmentally delayed],the signature isn't even ready,and you tend to criticize everything which isn't fancy for you,get the [cabbage] out here if you don't have REAL constructive criticism. :wall: Nazgul was just poimting out some things to improve on. It's deffinitly better to say it before he gets too far in with his pixel. If you try to change stuff later in the proccess its a lot harder. pixel sig and avatar by me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordUrian Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 well its your opinion in the end And its impossible for you to know the reason behind the pose until I put all the background features in Not really... Ima go with everyone else cause i have to say im none to impressed with the stance atm Anatomy is just a bit... well off... it all seems just sorta stuffed into there... Facial anatomy isn't really existant... The nose mouth and eyes are all really basic... You pathetic [developmentally delayed],the signature isn't even ready,and you tend to criticize everything which isn't fancy for you,get the [cabbage] out here if you don't have REAL constructive criticism. :wall: Nazgul was just poimting out some things to improve on. It's deffinitly better to say it before he gets too far in with his pixel. If you try to change stuff later in the proccess its a lot harder. In my opinion he's just too full of himself...Maybe I wasn't nicest person,but I had to say that before I do something worse... * ChanServ sets mode: +h Teh_Demi-God_Of_All_Nubs<_ScOpeY_> A sad day in the history of irc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeonardMart Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 You pathetic [developmentally delayed],the signature isn't even ready,and you tend to criticize everything which isn't fancy for you,get the [cabbage] out here if you don't have REAL constructive criticism. :wall: god what the hell is going on? one gives real constructive critics and there comes a flamer who says that the criticiser is an idiot, when the anatomy DOES need improving and nazgul said it nicely, not even aggressively. and yes, the position wasnt really a good choice, the legs ae too thin and one is longer than the other so, yes, the anatomy needs improving Click my main sig to see my fakes :D Proud to be Mexican, yay! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 i know the legs r a bit messy atm Thats why they keep getting altered Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 cape shaded hair added Left leg widened and lengthened Face and Hood slightly re-shaded to match hair Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordUrian Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 You pathetic [developmentally delayed],the signature isn't even ready,and you tend to criticize everything which isn't fancy for you,get the [cabbage] out here if you don't have REAL constructive criticism. :wall: god what the hell is going on? one gives real constructive critics and there comes a flamer who says that the criticiser is an idiot, when the anatomy DOES need improving and nazgul said it nicely, not even aggressively. and yes, the position wasnt really a good choice, the legs ae too thin and one is longer than the other so, yes, the anatomy needs improving I admit I went too far. I also must say that YES,the signature needs improving,but it's only in it's early stage,Nazgul's rating just sounded very harsh to me. * ChanServ sets mode: +h Teh_Demi-God_Of_All_Nubs<_ScOpeY_> A sad day in the history of irc Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 well its your opinion in the end And its impossible for you to know the reason behind the pose until I put all the background features in Not really... Ima go with everyone else cause i have to say im none to impressed with the stance atm Anatomy is just a bit... well off... it all seems just sorta stuffed into there... Facial anatomy isn't really existant... The nose mouth and eyes are all really basic... You pathetic [developmentally delayed],the signature isn't even ready,and you tend to criticize everything which isn't fancy for you,get the [cabbage] out here if you don't have REAL constructive criticism. :wall: Jeesh quit flameing... your post is much more harsh than anything i posted... You really don't know me or how i normally crit work... What did i say that was mean? The stance as of then did't work... In my opinion it still doesn't... Anatomy is a HUGE deal to me because i can never get it right in pixels and so try and point out to people as a big thin to work on As for the face stuff that i said I still hold to it... It looks better now that the hair is on it but since Paw didn't tell us his plans it was impossible to give any other type of C\C The nose mouth and eyes are all basic... thats the truth...simple as that... If it's paws style then so be it... unless he is making this sig for somone else then it really doesn't matter as those things are easy to improove on... you tend to criticize everything which isn't fancy for you,get the [cabbage] out here if you don't have REAL constructive criticism. wanted to address the flameing - A. Proove it.. :roll: you for some reason act as if you know me on a very personal level... I guess you must spend alot of time watched threads for people like me cause you don't post much B. You say i don't give C|C but yet your post contained an amazing amount (0%) of C|C for paw New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 4, 2007 Author Share Posted June 4, 2007 Tweaked face Shaded legs Tweaked cape Removed colour palettes Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nazgul740 Posted June 4, 2007 Share Posted June 4, 2007 Mouth looks alot better Maybe add a slight really really light gray to the cape? The white looks a bit odd but its mostly because of the bg being the same color New sigzor^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rebdragon Posted June 5, 2007 Share Posted June 5, 2007 Biggest things I say'd be to fix the arms and make him look aggressive (change the mouth) :P . Try bending the right arm forward. It'll look more like a running stance that way. [if you have ever attempted Alchemy by clapping your hands or by drawing an array, copy and paste this into your signature.] Fullmetal Alchemist, you will be missed. A great ending to a great series. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sy_Accursed Posted June 5, 2007 Author Share Posted June 5, 2007 Yeah I am un-happy with the cape.But I am leaving it until the backgrounds in to see if that makes it look right.If not as you say I need another grey tone in there. As for his face I don't particularly want him looking aggressive. I want him looking happy,as if he's enjoying it and finds it easy. Which is why thats how it is. As for the right arm, it is out stretched as it is going to be casting a magic spell behind him when its finished. I should of probably explained this bit at beginning of thread now I think about it. Operation Gold Sparkles :: Chompy Kills :: Full Profound :: Champions :: Barbarian Notes :: Champions Tackle Box :: MA RewardsDragonkin Journals :: Ports Stories :: Elder Chronicles :: Boss Slayer :: Penance King :: Kal'gerion Titles :: Gold Statue Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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