KakashiX Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 This piece is very very similar to my other one, Falling Memories of Tomorrow. It was basically something I came up with while I was bored at school with nothing to do during class and so I made it. Anyways.. Comments and Crit Appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
01whitec2 Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 kool nice =p 100+ Combat :: 100+ Members :: 107 Combat Average-{Click sig to join Heroes of the Future}- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Trojangogeta Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 cool thats reall nice what prog did u do that in Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zdragonblader Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 nice planets and color combo :) lol i've used that bird brush for doves in the past as well ;p if u look close it looks like a parrot :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azvareth Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 Not meaning to sound like a complete [wagon] here, but the only part I like with this piece, is the sky. It has a sort of depth I like. What irks me the most is that you basically only used premade brushes - granted, I have done that as well, but I don't no longer. And I personally think it's a real turn-off. The clouds look way too formal/repetitive (correct word?). Like, you can really see that you used the same brush almost.. I would make them a lot more "filled" near the bottom-left, and then sort of fade them to the right part. Not liking the font very much either... Other than that, I'm liking the concept. I just think you could've executed it better. (my apologies for the dodgy post, I've just slept) // Azvi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KakashiX Posted January 19, 2005 Author Share Posted January 19, 2005 Not meaning to sound like a complete wagon here, but the only part I like with this piece, is the sky. It has a sort of depth I like. What irks me the most is that you basically only used premade brushes - granted, I have done that as well, but I don't no longer. And I personally think it's a real turn-off. The clouds look way too formal/repetitive (correct word?). Like, you can really see that you used the same brush almost.. I would make them a lot more "filled" near the bottom-left, and then sort of fade them to the right part. Not liking the font very much either... Other than that, I'm liking the concept. I just think you could've executed it better. (my apologies for the dodgy post, I've just slept) // Azvi. No worries :). I made my own brushes, not premade ones that are downloaded. I said the same in the other thread cause Keiphus said what you did also, and I completely understand what you guys mean :P. Font couldn't be helped with cause the cpus at school are pretty limited when it comes to that. I'll try to fix up the repetitiveness in the future. Thanks for the comments :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azvareth Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 If you made then brush, then kudos to you. Well done. Never really figured out how to do ones myself. // Azvi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SubDivi Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 The clouds have no depth, at all. Im not really a fan of artwork that has no apparent lightsource, either. Really, the only thing I find decent are the colors.. Keep trying, anyways. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Keiphus Posted January 19, 2005 Share Posted January 19, 2005 Hope you don't mind me being brutally honest.. Scrap it. Compared to the other one, this is just garbage. The doves are like stock PS stamps... I'd rather have seen you make your own. The clouds, although they are your own brushes, look like a tiled texture. Also, as sub said, there is no apparent lightsource; save the one suggested by the planets shadows... but it isnt conveyed through the whole scene. You seem to have a good grasp on colors and stuff, I think you have alot of potential but maybe you're just being lazy? Push the limits and do what you don't know how to do. Expirement, it's how you learn. Good luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Swifty Posted January 20, 2005 Share Posted January 20, 2005 The right side seems a bit empty, left side looks great but the planets and such on the right seem to distort the whole concept of the sky... i don't know just doesn't seem to fit... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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