August 10, 200718 yr Bg mostly done, still gotta finish the foreground. (That means the falcon, the girl and the rocky edge) Comment/suggestions welcome Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die
August 10, 200718 yr Love the background, it will be good once you have put in the detail for the actual characters, but I think the rocky edge looks a tad odd at the moment, just how smooth it is I guess. Other then the night sky is one of the best I've seen :D 99 / 99 Mining 89 / 99 Smithing 87 / 90 Strength SKILL TOTAL: 1836 / 2000
August 10, 200718 yr Looks great, I love the moon. My only C/C would be that the girl's left hand and foot look a bit weird, but that will probably be fixed when you shade her. Overall, nice pixel, I would like to see the finished version. :) pixel avvy by me deviantART
August 10, 200718 yr Very nice, 7/10. You've got talent. Abit work needed on the women and the falcon but you already know that. Overall very nice. =D>
August 11, 200718 yr The Moon :shock: Thats really... DETAILED and really really good. I like it so far, it will be awesome when its done :D - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;)
August 11, 200718 yr Great moon, as mentioned above. Excellent texturing on the moon, also. I'd like to see the update when you get to it. ^^ Just a few crits: - Don't really like the [bleep]y bits (a blue that's a tad lighter than the ring of dark blue around the moon) on the outside of the moon, especially where it's so noticable on the right side. It looks like you were going for the 'glow' effect, but it looks very odd. :| - Trees are a little rounded as well, especially the one on the middle-right. Maybe make them less rounded and a teensy bit more [bleep]y? - Won't crit on the foreground, but the linework looks good - someone before mentioned the left hand, but hopefully you'll fix that up. At the moment it looks like she's got webbed fingers. :o Overall, a refreshing change from the current quality of pixels posted here. :) Thank you very much for posting this. Do it justice and make the foreground great. :D Pixel Artist - Former Player Mod - Former Tip.It ModNot taking sig requests - sorry!
August 11, 200718 yr Author Thanks for the crits. About the blue around the moon, I tried lots of different ways to create a glow effect, and thats the best Ive came up with. Maybe reducing the contrast will help. Thanks To:reddawn509, Hoopster211, JacobRyan, navyplaya, bigsword33, Ferahgo28, speedofsound, Goldwolflord, unknowz, GonAndGary and born2die
August 12, 200718 yr It's looking good, only thing I don't like is the trees are bit weird. They are too pointy and sharp in edges. After you fix that it will look good. :)
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