V2 from your comments

 

 

 

 

 

 

C/C for that please? I'm really pleased with the outcome, hope you like it also!

I like it all, with the exception of that text. :uhh:

 

 

 

Looks really nice. ^_^ Just change that text. :-w

 

 

 

9/10

 

:shame:

 

Maybe darken it a bit?

Oo i like it, the text position + font is great but its a bit blury IMO.

 

Great work though 9/10

I like it all, with the exception of that text. :uhh:

 

 

 

Looks really nice. ^_^ Just change that text. :-w

 

 

 

9/10

 

 

 

Agreed

 

 

 

THough, this isnt your best, i like it!! \ :thumbsup: =D>

Terrible font.

 

 

 

Also, take Soa's suggestion.

It kinda of looks like those scenes in movies where someone is holding another persons face under water and it shows a shot of the persons face under water :-s .

 

 

 

And the blue and white speckles look like colgate toothpaste. :-s

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

But I still like it. :-s

v2 from your comments

 

 

 

still needs work on the font i think

still needs work on the font i think

 

 

 

Same. I was thinking about you posting it without a name in this thread so others can pick a good font, but that could result in ripping :-k

well yea, i suck at text and i wouldn't like people to rip it so...

 

 

 

can you just say something about the tag without the text?

I personally like the text, but not in the location. Maybe top or bottom left corner.

Naa the text is good as it is. (V2)

 

Really good work keep it up!

 

and open up another shop

 

:pray:

Naa the text is good as it is. (V2)

 

Really good work keep it up!

 

and open up another shop

 

:pray:

 

 

 

check the gallery index for how to order :P

V2 is alot better tbh.

 

 

 

But imo the way the text is on both is kind of annoying with it being hard to read.

Version 2 looks better, but the text still doesn't suit. :( As if it blends too much into the rest of the signature. :|

The text is not meant to be the focus point on it.

The text is not meant to be the focus point on it.

 

 

 

Remove it anyway/rearrange it. ( :P ).

 

 

 

It ruins both designs to be honest. :-w

So your only comment for the whole image is to fix the text?

So your only comment for the whole image is to fix the text?

 

 

 

Pretty much. I already said in the first post that the rest of it looks awesome. I just find the text to be a let-down. :-w