its not that good but look how much im improved =)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thats was my 3rd pixel now look at my 4th

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im porvement eh =) rate the second 1 1/10

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

haha look the box is bleeding :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

you know that u should make him look like a person or somthing like add a torso.. dont just use a box... give him some curves

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

edit: oh and i just noticed that guy that killed him is using a "dragon long stick",

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

also try make that look like a sword and same with the guy in the background...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ok just so you get back on the right track this is what i meant with the whole sqaure man thing...

 

 

 

 

 

 

looks better dont it :) now you do but take your time and shade and make the silly things like the swords look good :)

First no nose.

 

 

 

Then no mouth.

 

 

 

What next? NO EYES??!!?! :shock:

First no nose.

 

 

 

Then no mouth.

 

 

 

What next? NO EYES??!!?!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Haha.. its a good little style. what I would say to improve it is to lower the horizon line

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

like in this little really bad quicky :oops:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

im ashamed. but im late for school an im rushin.

10/10 for using the gerbil avatar. Just kidding, I don't do ratings. But at least you're getting somewhere, sorta got the shading right, just keep practicing, and try not to use those shape tools too often. Freehand! Or the squiggly line tool. :D

First no nose.

 

 

 

Then no mouth.

 

 

 

What next? NO EYES??!!?! :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

:!:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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10/10 for using the gerbil avatar. Just kidding, I don't do ratings. But at least you're getting somewhere, sorta got the shading right, just keep practicing, and try not to use those shape tools too often. Freehand! Or the squiggly line tool. :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

^^ thats from pincess =))) ty

First no nose.

 

 

 

Then no mouth.

 

 

 

What next? NO EYES??!!?! :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

look at your avatar lol

 

First no nose.

 

 

 

Then no mouth.

 

 

 

What next? NO EYES??!!?! :shock:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

look at your avatar lol

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well atleast it got eyes... most important stuff :wink:

its better than the last one with the doll dribaling tomato sauce :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

some comments on it however. the guy holding two swords, he is holding them out at the side try doing that with 2 sticky like things. its not natural. try and make it more realistic there. as for the rest of, i forgot what it looks like lol. (to much attention distracted by the other posts)

thx for pointers pjb and your sig is to long its not going to work for long but i like the sig lol

You need to work on your shapes, that's all I have to say