King_Rage Posted May 2, 2005 Share Posted May 2, 2005 It is a work in progress, but before I move on I want to see where people think I can improve and what not. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hiddel Posted May 2, 2005 Share Posted May 2, 2005 shade the rest like you did the legs. you should almost never put the focus in the center of and image(kills composition). and your characters pose is very stiff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
terley Posted May 2, 2005 Share Posted May 2, 2005 Hey before I go to bed :D ... its the arms that makes it look weird atm, and you might wanna add more definition into the body (Chest and stomach) .. Maybe a bigger shield. Hope you finish the shading sucessfully. ~Terley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King_Rage Posted May 2, 2005 Author Share Posted May 2, 2005 Yea I'm gonna finish the shading, thanks for the suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
susta99 Posted May 2, 2005 Share Posted May 2, 2005 I like the backround, maybe put a few bones and skulls somewhere there in the back? Just an idea. Anyway, the shield is WAY too small, and what type of sword is that? Also the head is a little disproportionate (too big). And as hiddel said, you should put the guy a little more on the side (maybe the left side and put your name and stats on the right) Hope this helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King_Rage Posted May 2, 2005 Author Share Posted May 2, 2005 I like the backround, maybe put a few bones and skulls somewhere there in the back? Just an idea. Anyway, the shield is WAY too small, and what type of sword is that? Also the head is a little disproportionate (too big). And as hiddel said, you should put the guy a little more on the side (maybe the left side and put your name and stats on the right) Hope this helps It's a crystal dagger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjb21 Posted May 2, 2005 Share Posted May 2, 2005 the shield is way too small! 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jabraulter Posted May 2, 2005 Share Posted May 2, 2005 maybe im just picky, but the legs look funny........it looks to me like you're wearing a rune plate leotard. the dragon leggs should be like pants. right now they look more like tights since tehre is no point where they go around your waist, if you know what i mean....... but otherwise, great job. the shading on the legs is great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King_Rage Posted May 2, 2005 Author Share Posted May 2, 2005 maybe im just picky, but the legs look funny........it looks to me like you're wearing a rune plate leotard. the dragon leggs should be like pants. right now they look more like tights since tehre is no point where they go around your waist, if you know what i mean....... but otherwise, great job. the shading on the legs is great. I know what you mean, I'll try and see if the shading helps that at all :P I'll finish shading tonight and repost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Auicroa Posted May 2, 2005 Share Posted May 2, 2005 the face scares me the most... >: | .............................................. ^rawr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cheeseplate Posted May 3, 2005 Share Posted May 3, 2005 I like the backround, maybe put a few bones and skulls somewhere there in the back? Just an idea. Anyway, the shield is WAY too small, and what type of sword is that? Also the head is a little disproportionate (too big). And as hiddel said, you should put the guy a little more on the side (maybe the left side and put your name and stats on the right) Hope this helps It's a crystal dagger In that case make it a little shorter and thinner and give it a little bit of a blue tinge.(sp?) In other words give it a bit of a blue colour because atm it looks more like a steel sword Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axeraider70 Posted May 3, 2005 Share Posted May 3, 2005 Shield is too small, you got lazy and didnt do the same shading as legs, but... the guys pose is unreal... axeraider70.deviantART.com Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lowgravity Posted May 3, 2005 Share Posted May 3, 2005 Legs start too high up.. Move them down.. Lowgravity, I want to be just like you. But...I never will be as 1337 as you. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
maxiemumu Posted May 3, 2005 Share Posted May 3, 2005 Better than your other drawing i must say. There is no point to where the...plate legs meet...is he a unic? that's the point i'm trying to make anyways :lol: Make shield bigger, and good job on the face! Better than the bloodshot eyes of the past. Shade all of it, make the legs bigger, and shade the bg a lil and you'll have a very good sig. Only 27.. RIP Kurt Cobain, Jim Morrison, Jimi Hendrix, and Janice Joplin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pjb21 Posted May 3, 2005 Share Posted May 3, 2005 the legs should have a top to them. cos your trousers arent just things to cover your legs...... they also have another section. the same applys with plate legs. 100% my own work, i make my own brushes: set 1 set 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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