December 24, 200718 yr Author Oh that shark is quite nice :) Really liking how this is turning out Thanks! :D Umm I gotta change the colour of the sky..and add stars and a moon, what else? Thanks everyone
December 24, 200718 yr Oh that shark is quite nice :) Really liking how this is turning out Thanks! :D Umm I gotta change the colour of the sky..and add stars and a moon, what else? Thanks everyone I agree with Red. Maybe put like a small scene, like ants climbing down the side onto a little boat in the water? lol Keep it up! ~S - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;)
December 24, 200718 yr Author Oh that shark is quite nice :) Really liking how this is turning out Thanks! :D Umm I gotta change the colour of the sky..and add stars and a moon, what else? Thanks everyone I agree with Red. Maybe put like a small scene, like ants climbing down the side onto a little boat in the water? lol Keep it up! ~S Yeah not a bad idea :) I keep failing at his face :( Proud 6 year veteran You been playing for six years? :S
December 24, 200718 yr Yup. Started December 14th 2001. I suck at hands... I can some what do faces =/ lol - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;)
December 24, 200718 yr Author Yup. Started December 14th 2001. I suck at hands... I can some what do faces =/ lol Hah same here, god this face is really bugging me :(
December 25, 200718 yr Author This is with text, but the sky is nowhere near finished. Plus they'll be a Santa hat sitting next to my character.
December 25, 200718 yr looks really good man! I like the festive shark - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;)
December 25, 200718 yr looks really good man! I like the festive shark You like the text? Well imo, it dosnt match the whole idea very well =/ like a shark and the elegant text... Thats just me though. Try something more... bold.. - 60,023rd to 99 Firemaking on April 29th, 2012 -- 15,152nd to 99 agility on August 21st, 2011 -- 30,569th to 99 Prayer on June 26th, 2011 -- 22,646th to 99 Hunter on Jan 9th, 2011 -1993 Miata; sold - 2001 E46 330i; "totaled" - 2001 E46 325iT; Bags and wheels ;)
December 25, 200718 yr Lookin' good so far, but some more shading and it'll look great (I like shading if you hadn't noticed) Add me ingame: Lnterest. I am back.
December 25, 200718 yr Author Well imo, it dosnt match the whole idea very well =/ like a shark and the elegant text... Yeah fair enough, I see where you're coming from. Just used that text for contrast. Dunno, probably looks Sh*t. Lookin' good so far, but some more shading and it'll look great (I like shading if you hadn't noticed) Unfortunately i'm crap at shading : But I can certainly try, on the shark more you mean?
December 25, 200718 yr to fill in all the space, i think you should have a lot of birds and animals running away to emphasize the rather large shark in the water. few pointers.. -sharky needs some fins -the dude needs another leg, perhaps not as straight as the other one, looks a bit...odd -draw another arm in there, and change the position of the one that you already are using -unless he's floating on an island, don't cover it up with water -add more to the background, it looks too flat -the *splash* looks a bit more like lice flying off of mr sharky -add a face if you're not already going to. -last thing, if this were real, that fishing pole would fall into the water, imo stick it in the ground! oh, and merry christmas ;D Linework credit goes to someone else who's name escapes me...
December 25, 200718 yr Author Finally some useful criticism. Thanks alot, i'll work on it...Probably not tomorrow but the day after. Thanks alot! Merry Christmas.
December 25, 200718 yr Looks great. No crits from me, because I couldn't do that if my life depeneded on it. Merry Christmas [bleep] the law, they can eat my dick that's word to Pimp
December 25, 200718 yr Author Looks great. No crits from me, because I couldn't do that if my life depeneded on it. Merry Christmas Thanks so much! :D Merry Christmas to you!
December 25, 200718 yr Good character style, there is not much you need to improve on it. Your shark is very 3D, so perhaps work on your background being a bit more 3D as well. Maybe make your character surprised, or with a simple "?" over his head like "oh, is that a fish trying to get my attention..?" Definitely work on the water, it needs to be very wavy and splashy since the shark is moving it a lot. Make the sky less empty, add clouds, sun, rain maybe. I like your grass effect on the stuff on it, add some dark dashes to make it seem less like a rug. Nice text on the last one. P.S.: There is much that Serious Cat could learn from Festive Shark. Pixel sigs by me.Pixel Art
December 25, 200718 yr Author Good character style, there is not much you need to improve on it. Your shark is very 3D, so perhaps work on your background being a bit more 3D as well. Maybe make your character surprised, or with a simple "?" over his head like "oh, is that a fish trying to get my attention..?" Definitely work on the water, it needs to be very wavy and splashy since the shark is moving it a lot. Make the sky less empty, add clouds, sun, rain maybe. I like your grass effect on the stuff on it, add some dark dashes to make it seem less like a rug. Nice text on the last one. P.S.: There is much that Serious Cat could learn from Festive Shark. Haha :D Thanks so much for posting Xman, really helpful stuff. I'm sort of half editing it / half getting ready for Xmas dinner. Happy Christmas :)
December 25, 200718 yr Pretty good, though there's too much space. I would fill it by adding some texture to the water or something. And Merry Christmas. :)
December 25, 200718 yr Author Pretty good, though there's too much space. I would fill it by adding some texture to the water or something. And Merry Christmas. :) Yeah, i'm going to try and edit it abit tonight :) Thanks :D
December 26, 200718 yr woah that kicks [wagon] :shock: thats soo cool maybe shade the water and the air in the air make it more light on top and darker the more you go down. and with the water dont let the air be seen trough the water but so far it kicks [wagon]:) How does 20 minutes turn into 2.5 hours? Was your math perhaps magical math?
December 26, 200718 yr Author woah that kicks [wagon] :shock: thats soo cool maybe shade the water and the air in the air make it more light on top and darker the more you go down. and with the water dont let the air be seen trough the water but so far it kicks [wagon]:) :anxious: THANK YOU :XD: Made my rather grim day. 364 days until Christmas guys! :shock:
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