4 New Sigs.... Good? -- Gallery by Pomar1

[pomar1]

Ok, as my last try wasnt so bad, i tryied again, rate them pls :D

 

 

 

 

 

 

--> Update

 

 

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[Beaumonde]

Can't make out what that is in the first one. Don't like the render you used in the second one. Can't read the text in the third one.

[rushrock]

First one: The black render combined with the dark brushes is a bad combination. It's blurry, it doesn't flow well, and the text is a bit awkward. The colors are pretty good though. 5/10

 

 

 

Second one: Pretty good, but the giant white spot on top doesn't look right, and it might look better if the render was clearer. Also, I literally can't read the text. 8/10

 

 

 

Third one: I like the colors, but I don't like everything else. The render is dis-proportioned, I literally can't read the text again, and it's blurry. 3/10

[pomar1]

At first one is King Mickey (Mickey Mouse, from Kingdom Hearts)

[rushrock]

^ I couldn't really tell, but that's probably the render's fault. :P

[pomar1]

http://www.ffrebirth.com/kingdom-hearts ... mickey.gif

 

 

 

http://the-mousehole.net/Data/images/KH ... ckeyLG.jpg

 

 

 

http://www.rpgfan.com/pics/kh2/ss-022.jpg

 

 

 

http://ps2.guias-trucos-juegos.com/wp-c ... ii-ps2.jpg

 

 

 

It should explain some more.

[Aussie_King]

First one - 7/10 - I really like the background in this one, it's very cool to look at, but I feel the render just ruined it. If you had tried blending it into the background it might have looked better. Text is ok.

 

 

 

Second one - 8/10 - The Background on this one is great! I really like it, but it's completely ruined by that aweful render.. You would have been better off with just the BG and no render, or you could have attempted blending it in.

 

 

 

Third one - I can't see it :S

[ThruItAll]

Being blunt here, but you definitely haven't improved, I like your others signatures before.

 

 

 

To start with, I'm gonna tell you whats wrong with them;

 

 

 

1st one: Render is very unclear, fractral won't blend with the render. Blurry, and the text is just...horrible. No border. At least the colors are used from the render.

 

 

 

2nd: Bad render to use in my opinion. Seems all you did, was fill the layer with the render then set it to overlay, Render isn't blended. Text is well,... better, but it's unreadable. Border is just messed up.

 

 

 

3rd: Worst of the 3 to be perfectly honest, Render looks skewed.. Theres a big pixelly like going through the bottom right. Flames is very unoriginal, and doesn't fit with that render.

 

 

 

Now I'll tell you how to improve them;

 

 

 

1. Use a different render, this one isn't interesting at all. Try making the render the focal? The first place I'd look is the text.

 

 

The red "x"s are the points of interest in the signature, whereas, the signature hasn't used any. But don't over do the focals, like using great big lens flares where they are. For text, Use a basic, font, they usually work better,

 

 

 

2. Blend the render in, use the eraser tool on a small, soft brush, and try to sort of; softly erase the edges of the render. It somewhat makes the render fit. Instead of fractral brushes, Try something else, like abstract ones. To make a little power from your render. Duplicate it, and take the one below it, and start smudging outward. The render should be one of the bottom layers in the signature.

 

 

 

3. The render is skewed, nothing to do about that. But try brushing instead of using the fire, and in the part of the render thats too long, try to erase those bits, subtlely.

 

 

 

To be honest, I would rate them:

 

4/10.

 

5/10.

 

2/10.

 

But remember, you don't get better just from ratings.

[pomar1]

Canyou guys tell me how to blend render??

[pomar1]

Newest update of Riku Signature:

 

 

 

--> Blended render

 

--> Delated giant white spot

 

--> Text is readable

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway i am still learning :P

[Neishc]

New one is the best because it has a clear render.

 

Good job on the last one.

[rushrock]

I see a lot of improvement on the last one. The render is clear, I'm liking the brushes, but the text isn't clear. At all, really. 7/10

[pomar1]

Hehe, thanks :D

[Gehackte]

ITs an improvement teh colors are generally speaking well chosen. Blend the render plz at the updated blue on the render isnt blended at all as you say. Tell me wich program u use and i will explain how to blend your render:). dont crop the render so it fits totally in the sig as in the fourth one of all including blue updated... and last thing dont put the render over the text thats what u did in the second,third and fourth sigs. the fifht the green 1 is really cool good improvement love to see more of your work in the future

[jiraiya19]

The second one is still not good, because the render colors don't match the background colors very well, and it stands out like a sore thumb. I'd suggest using darker colors for the backgrounds. Anyway, it's a large improvement :] keep it up.