Well just before tipit "crashed" I had a signature request by Ryder but as the forums was down after I made the first one I decided to make 2 more.

 

 

 

C/c or Tips would be awesome.

 

 

 

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I'm pretty happy how the colours turned out but I noticed (too late) that I didn't blend in the render in the background properly.

 

 

 

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I'm also pretty happy with the colours on this one but yet again I didn't blend it properly and the flow is somewhat "meh".

 

 

 

3.

 

Version 1

 

 

 

 

Version 2

 

 

 

 

Version 3

 

 

 

 

I'm happy with this one (Was thinking of using it myself :P), was thinking of adding a C4D but it was too hard, any tips ?

 

 

 

I just stated my opinion under these Signatures, I would love to hear yours.

work on flow and depth.

 

 

 

Seems kinda plain as well, add more to the BG, not bad :P

Ah, thanks, yes I'm working on the flow but I'm clueless on how to work on the depth? (Is that the blending of the render/bg?)

 

 

 

I tried adding C4Ds to the background but as it's so "bright" the C4Ds turn out "bad" if I put it like that, I'll work on it though.

 

 

 

Thanks a lot for your reply, it means a lot to me.

1: Not bad, but the blending is indeed quite a big issue. Also, it's a bit simple and lacks depth. This basically means that the sig looks very flat and 2-dimensional, whereas you're going for a more 3D-looking background. Try adding in some C4Ds/other things and blurring parts that are meant to look like they are further away.

 

 

 

2: Same as #1 really, but the render placement could also be better here.

 

 

 

3: V3 looks quite good, the blending is definitely much better here. Still, the comments about depth on the first one still go here. It could also use a simple border, just a one pixel white one would work best I think.

Thanks for "kickass" comment Jopie :D, I'll drain that advice as a sponge, I'll try to make my background darker next time so I can get in some C4Ds.

Hmm, the first 2 are fine, but the 3rd either you went over te render with your brush, or it's a horrible render cut. a way to fix this is make a new layer and paste the render over.

 

 

 

 

 

just testing out the new forum atm, i'm not really liking it :(

It's actually a distort that caused it, I did it to make the background better while getting the render to blend in a bit.

Hmm, the first 2 are fine, but the 3rd either you went over te render with your brush, or it's a horrible render cut. a way to fix this is make a new layer and paste the render over.

 

 

 

 

 

just testing out the new forum atm, i'm not really liking it :(

 

 

 

Oh no, please don't. Adding an untouched copy of the render on top of everything else will make it stand out way too much.

You're doing great julius.

 

 

 

Keep finding some tuts to add to your bag. I like the last one you did doing C4d's are very hard to find good placement, its just a matter of trial and error here mate.

 

 

 

Looking forward to your new ones

Thanks a lot Charls, cheered me up a bit *smiles*.