got bored during the down time so i made this

I don't think it's good but I think it's a good attempt, The focal/render that your supposed to look at (middle one?) is too dark and the two others are too visible. The work with the colours/C4DS are pretty good in my opinion but they steal attention (Pointing at top right corner, flow is semi-"meh" as well), I'm also not a big fan of the white lines or the font choice (Too boring, try lowering the fonts opacity as well so it "goes" into the signature".

 

 

 

I really think it's a good attempt, as my friend Sid/Chaz/Charls (Or whatever you call him) "Practice makes perfect" (Not that I'm not good at graphics but I still say what "I" think), Good luck.

thx for the advice, will touch it up later

Me likey the colours :D

 

 

 

I don't particularly like the lines on it and maybe a bit more blending but it looks pretty good imo.

 

 

 

Maybe a border, a simple one and a nice anti aliased font

 

 

 

Hah thanks vince yea practice does make perfect :D

Not a big fan of it TBH. First of all, the white lines are distracting, and the font really doesn't fit. I don't really like the colours either, and the sig could use a border.

 

 

 

Not my favourite work from you. :|

 

 

 

Don't like the new smilies... :uhh:

-well i totally removed the lines since no one seemed to like them, just trying something different o well

 

-fixed up the left so it balanced the right more

 

-reduced the opicity of the second renders

 

-added a boarder (dunno why i forgot that)

 

-i dont know what a good font would be for this so i left it out, i dont have many fonts that i like right now

 

-jopie i can change the colors if you want, but i couldn't think of any

 

 

 

2.0

 

Looks pretty good now :), I think you should lower the opacity of the focals/renders in the background by a little (Just a little more), I think you should take away some of the green and add bit more red and take a away some of that blurring on the hand (just a little here as well). For border, I think this one could use a 3 pixel cinematic border (Might ruin the render as the eyes are pretty close to the top). You could possibly try to sharpen the focal a bit just too see if it looks better (might look a bit worse with it though).

 

 

 

Good job.

Try some blending at the bottom. Like a splatter brushed smudge, if you dont mind, this is my 2 min touch up to what I mean

 

Wow i love the newer one and Thru's improvement is definately and improvement.

 

 

 

I like the c4d's in the bg kind blending in to smudgework and the softness of it all :D

 

 

 

Well done

Thru's "improvement" steals all the attention of the signature as it's so bright (at least for me), the way he brushed it nice though, maybe it would look better in a different colour.

Thru's "improvement" steals all the attention of the signature as it's so bright (at least for me), the way he brushed it nice though, maybe it would look better in a different colour.

 

 

 

Would have done it better but its just a general idea.

I know (>_<), just added my opinion.

 

 

 

tried to do something similar to Thru but a little different, any way, pretty much done with this sig thanks for all the help guys

 

 

 

ps. if anyone wants it fine with me, just pm me and i'll lower the file size and stick your name on there

It's a bit better but I don't like that it's so much brushed on the render itself, I suggest using a soft brush on low opacity to erase a bit of it from the render.

 

 

 

tried to do something similar to Thru but a little different, any way, pretty much done with this sig thanks for all the help guys

 

 

 

ps. if anyone wants it fine with me, just pm me and i'll lower the file size and stick your name on there

 

 

 

A lot nicer IMO, the colours look good too now. :thumbup: