u guys like my work?

[gandorf_101]

hey people :) been a while since i last posted :( sry... but anyway.. hey u like my progress on my slightly new sig? i just go back and add to it whenever :P anyways i think its turning out decent :) what u guys think?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

btw... this obviestly aint anywere near done... :wink:

[apinagez]

I like it :)

 

 

 

Just, shouldnt he wear vambraces? :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Joking, it looks good :wink:

[axeraider70]

he has mickey mouse gloves on :lol:

[J_Rod_The_Ti]

I love the action shown in it. Especially the recoil in his arm. It's wonderful so far. Reminds me of Xman's stuff.. but I must say your depiction of action is slightly better than his. He is however the master, and I'm not implying that you are in any way better than him. That would be lying.. because.. his stuff is far more developed and.. well just better. Okay.. I'm done comparing you to Xman. Basically.. your depiction of action is great. Work on linework and coloring though, and you could be up there with the X.

[Zonorhc]

Points to note:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The bowstring is loose. It needs tension.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The bow is too short. Just because it's a shortbow doesn't mean it has to be tiny.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Arrow trajectories don't look like they came from the same bow.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- The archer's fingers on his left hand look like they're stuck together.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Bows are held with your left hand and arrows with your right, unless you're left-handed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- You never shoot a bow while facing your target. Lead with the bow-arm, please.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Archer's muscles are too defined. Try to bring them out using shading instead of lines.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Helmet looks like it has no way of being taken off or put on.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Armour looks like a pullover with shoulder pads. Work on making it look more like plate mail.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Same deal with the leg armour. Pants. Use plates.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

- Feet are a wee bit small.

[Punkage]

he has mickey mouse gloves on :lol:

That's the first thing I noticed rofl

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

1. String is too thin

 

 

 

2. Bow is too thin

 

 

 

3. Change the meleers weapon. Apparently this is a p2p sig, not f2p. No one on p2p pks with r2h's.

 

 

 

4. Don't lazily copy and paste the arrow just to have 2. They're firing over his head, redo them (if you're going to have 2, draw 2 different ones). I have a word for this but Xman wouldn't like me to say it.

 

 

 

5. Try using a little less line tool and more pencil, or practice more with using the line tool, because yours are too "liney".

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You're getting there, looks good other then it looks like he's flashing the warrior and arrows just randomly come out and look exactly the same.

[gandorf_101]

thx guys for the Good feedback and C/C... alot of the time you dont get that on forums...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and thank you J_rod_the_Ti for your kind comments :), but however i do not think i deserve to be compared to Xman (as he is the guru, and as i have no were near as much pixeling experiance...), but thanks anyway :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

and tyvm zonor, you gave some extremely valid points that i will learn from next time i start a sig.. i think next time i will think a bit more about it before i do it :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

punkage! :) i agree with every bit of feedback you gave me 100%.. exept for the p2p and f2p comment... :P as i dont play runscape anymore and have not played for ages... so basicly my sigs arent very factual :P but thanks very much :)

 

 

 

....p.s i think my next sig will be a world of warcraft sig :P as i play world of warcraft :P