Not really happy with it, everything went wrong :|, Decided to post it here anyways for possible C/c or Tips.

 

 

 

What do YOU think about it?

Too much smudging. Smudging isnt your only base blending, you have alot more than that.

 

And if im not wrong, part of your focal area is pretty much exactly the same as your currents part focal area?

I actually tried to follow the rule of thirds on this one, my current one is more in the middle. Yeah it's a lot of bad blending :|. Thanks for the comment.

Nice one julius you are coming on mr schonebeck :) Hmm i think i got your surname right XD

 

 

 

Anywhooo it looks cool with th blending. Maybe add some other colours to complement it like yellows or blues? the colours next to it on the colour wheel.

 

 

 

Hmm you mebe need to make the left side a bit more interesting idk :o

 

 

 

Wubs your sigs matey

Desu Desu Desu! ^.^

 

 

 

..Moving on, methinks this one ain't too good... Thru hit the nail on the head when he said you've got too much smudging... Also, it be nearly the same as your first..All you need to do is change the render and the color..

 

 

 

Maybe switch the render position and add a CD4, or somethink like that.

 

 

 

As for now, it be only seven kitties out of ten.

Thanks for the comments, I usually read a tutorial, experiment with it and then mix it with other styles I know so yeah these are a bit boring.

 

 

 

Also anyone can have this signature if he/she wants just PM me.

Remember that the rule of thirds just dictates good places to put the focus. There is still a lot else to deal with an image such as balance and such.

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, my main crit is it is very flat, try and brush in some more depth.

Ah I see, thanks a lot for the info Nadril.

Something definetly went, wrong...The whole green isn't working, too much smudging, which is putting me off. The rule of thirds placement is quite good. (I know quite aa bit about this because we had a whole lesson in art about it :P )

 

And it really helps bring out the focal point.

 

 

 

So obviously not your best one Julius, you could do better.

 

 

 

6/10

 

 

 

But, lol, it is still better than mine.

Certainly not your best like said before. The left side look really boring, the colour of the background doesn't really go well with the render's colours, and I'm not a big fan of the smudging effects.

 

 

 

This particular sig isn't great, but I know you're a good artist, so don't let it discourage you.

Thanks Jopie, I'm practicing this style so I can "fuse" it with my other style .