July 18, 200817 yr Well, there is alot of story behind this one and im not about to tell it so... This was inspired by the song Until the day i die - Story of the Year. Its a WIP as of now, because i would like to make it real nice, so help is welcome, CC is welcome, opinion is welcome. Current version: Done? Yes? No? [hide=Version 1 edit 2][/hide] [hide=Version 2 edit]V2 Edit! *going good or bad* [/hide] [hide=Version One edit][/hide] [hide=Version one][/hide] [hide=Version two][/hide] Which of the two is better, i need to know so that i can continue with the better one Im leaning way towards Version one. so im going to work with that. 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
July 18, 200817 yr I think both look lovely. The first version is certainly more morbid, and the second version is still morbid but reflects the last bits of life the flower has in the color. It seems like the second version still portrays the idea of hope a little bit more. It all depends on which mood you desire more, I guess. Which version sounds more like the portrayal of the song? I'm not sure about the text, though. Maybe it's fine, I don't know.
July 18, 200817 yr I am not a big fan of this, yaff. It seems real morbid, and it isn't "me" I mean, it is alright, but I'm just not a huge fan. The colours looks quite stunning though, and for that reason I prefer version 2. I think the meaning version 2 conveys to me is better. Number 1 seems more dark, more without hope. Keep it up the good work, but these are very "meh" IMO. 6/10
July 18, 200817 yr I'm sorry but I'm not a fan of it at all. It just seems really flat. The coloured one looks better, but this is not your best piece that I've seen from you. 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
July 18, 200817 yr I'm not really a big fan of it either to be honest. I prefer version 2 I think, version 1 looks quite boring and monotone. But the biggest problem for me was the subject itself, it's probably just me but it took me a while to figure out what it actually was. :-? pixel avvy by me deviantART
July 18, 200817 yr I prefer the first one of the two but I think it's quite boring to be honest :|, what kind of effects did you have in mind when your updating it later on? PS, continue your work on "Saw" :@
July 18, 200817 yr Author hmmp. Well, i dont know where to start :P Rush: I have not seen you around for a while :P and the mood i was in was kind of a 'all hope was lost' and that is why i stuck with version 1. as for the text, i also dont know about it. Out off all the text i have downlaoded this one seemed to fit it best. MrShinyredplanet: you dont seem to like anything i made lately :P i may continue with both versions then if people like version 2 so much. littleboy: Thanks for teh impute ill continue with version 2 also Jopie: As said, ill continue with version 2 also, but just wondering how did you have troubles figuring out what it was? what about it made it hard? Vjulius: What can i do to spice it up then? i kind of want to keep the same basic 'dying' effect kind of like all hope has been lost. and i think im done with the saw piece as i dont know what else to add to it :P sorry i didnt reply sooner, i lost my internet last night till this morning 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
July 18, 200817 yr Version two is better by far in my opinion. The flatness was mentioned before. Maybe blur out the rest apart from the focal a little? danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
July 18, 200817 yr I had some type of "glow" effect in mind to make it a bit less boring but still "dead". Well if I didn't miss a version the bullet hole looked a bit weird?
July 18, 200817 yr Author Version two is better by far in my opinion. The flatness was mentioned before. Maybe blur out the rest apart from the focal a little? my only problem with version 2 is that it has to much color for what im looking for, and im afraid if i dim it down to what i would like, it wouldnt look very good. ill try though 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
July 18, 200817 yr The V2 Edit is looking better, doesn't seem as flat as it was. Keep it up :thumbup: For the blood splatter, I say Nay 2257AD.TUMBLR.COM
July 18, 200817 yr Author The V2 Edit is looking better, doesn't seem as flat as it was. Keep it up :thumbup: For the blood splatter, I say Nay I have another version, got some lighting effect so it doesnt seem so dull. but thanks :) 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
July 18, 200817 yr I like the update :thumbup: but I think you could use another tone of green on the leaves (Forgot if this word is correct) as it looks too much "alive" assuming you wanted the "dead" effect?
July 19, 200817 yr Author i like the pedals as they are, the only thing im a bit sketchy on is the background, i would like some more color in there, which i might do, but as for the flower, its pretty much what i want :) 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
July 19, 200817 yr that song! I like it, though, as said before, there is the flatness issue. ~Boo So don't let anyone tell you you're not worth the earth, These streets are your streets, this turf is your turf, Don't let anyone tell you that you've got to give in, Cos you can make a difference, you can change everything, Just let your dreams be your pilot, your imagination your fuel, Tear up the book and write your own damn rules, Use all that heart, hope and soul that you've got, And the love and the rage that you feel in your gut, And realise that the other world that you're always looking for, Lies right here in front of us, just outside this door, And it's up to you to go out there and paint the canvas, After all, you were put on the earth to do this, So shine your light so bright that all can see, Take pride in being whoever the [bleep] you want to be.
July 19, 200817 yr Author well, i could understand the flatness issues before, when it was like, colorless almost but not now, i dont see the flatness... 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
July 19, 200817 yr You covered the flatness issue Yaff. Pretty kickass. danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
July 19, 200817 yr Author thanks : 1980 Berlinetta with a 350, bored, mild cam, intake carb, headers, exhaust
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