I got my computer back yesterday, and immediately went about making my signature for the Render colab board.

 

 

 

Here is the outcome, and I have posted 3 versions.

 

 

 

V1

 

 

I realised I had much too much wireframe over the render.

 

 

 

V2

 

 

Changed text around, and added some other stuff, more colour.

 

 

 

V3

 

 

This is my favourite out of the lot. Need notes on how to change and make better, etc, etc...

 

 

 

Dunno if this helps with depth, made some changes -

 

I actually prefer V1. Just erase some of the wirframes off his face and it's fine. The red stuff in V2 and 3 is distracting IMO, although I do agree it needs something added to it (just not that). And try to create some depth. I'd remove the circle brush on the right too, I don't think it fits.

3 is probably the best the, wire frame, depth, blending, everything works just so well very nice : the text could be a tiny bit better though, i dunno im not much a fan of the text in any of them :|

None of you images are showing up for me :|

To be honest, I don't like it very much... You have three different effect thingies going on in one shot there, none of which blend very well together. (The fog thingy, the splash thingy, and the bubble thingy). The wireframe looks rather odd too- Why would he plow straight into a fence?

 

 

 

Overall, you earn six and a half of ten.

Nice one shiny :D I love v1 tbh The wireframe makes it look nice :) maybe erase it slightly to a lower opacity in places :)

 

 

 

Do you make the wireframes yourself or get them from a site?

 

 

 

Do you make the wireframes yourself or get them from a site?

 

 

 

I got that one in a pack of 94 from da. If I made them i'd go crazy within a week.

 

 

 

I'll try V1 on a lower opacity

I agree with Jopie.It doesn't have that Flash feel though. I would picture flash with a more staticy background if you get what I mean. Still looks cool though. :thumbsup:

The images are showing up for me! I accidentally blocked anything from your PB -.-

 

 

 

 

 

As said before, it should have a more static sort of feel to it - maybe add some a picture of some lightning on screen blending mode, then displace it?