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im really getting tired of this sig :P

Well,maybe you could add a skull stuck into the ground.I rate it 9/10 :D could you show me how you draw outlines? im s**t..

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Ooh, And it is FAR from done.

 

 

 

help me please.

 

 

 

there ya go, mother. That's not the mystic hat, but that's what most magers wear anyway. As for the pixel, looking slick! I love the walls! Can't wait to see finished!

Looks good, but for some reason it looks like two differnest styles in shading with the backround and character. the character kinda looks really bright

ya the mystic guy is a bit out of wack but otherwise its great! but i cant figure out what shes holding in her hand.

The sig is really good, I rate it 8/10 since ist finished at all, but is good, and whats she holding, a sword?

Nice character, kinda really bright compared to the rest of the sig but I guess it's a nice way to stand out. Her eyes look kind of weird, are they supposed to be closed or looking somewhere? I think if you drew her eye lids closed down as if "yep my job is done here" kinda feel, it could work well. I'll wait to see final sig to comment more. :)

K... I'm just going to throw this out there.... i don't like how the lines go fully around her breast to make the full breast... and i guess you could have like someone stuck through the wall with an axe or have someone outlined in arrows scared against the wall... and maybe have a great demon hand sticking out or something because that looks like the greater demon hut

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* Added mystic man dude.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* "Fixed" [bleep] ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* added blood

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* adding some crap inside the house

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* added rocks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

** more to come.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The dead guy reminds of subzero. you know the robes and stuff?

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* Added mystic man dude.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* "Fixed" * ;)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* added blood

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* adding some crap inside the house

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

* added rocks

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

** more to come.

 

 

 

where?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

More detail to the ground! Its shouldn't be just a solid plane, make it bumpy and rocky, like real ground.

 

 

 

Hair needs more detail and colours.

 

 

 

Some of the linework on the building needs cleaning. Also, a bit of highlights and shadows on the bricks would be nice, giving it the feeling that each brick is extruded from the wall. Right now it looks more like wallpaper than bricks, sorry!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

At a first glance, it looks like a little kid behind the house is checking out a blonde women in tight pink clothing and a short skirt. :?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyways, its looking great for a start, and as with all wips, it just needs a little touching up :mrgreen:

Bumped!

nice! I don't really like it, but it's good nonetheless :)

Awsome, just awsome :D

thx 8)