The Age Wars

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chapter 1

 

The Tulas War

 

 

 

The world was known for its beauty, and legacy. The war for tulas erupted south of the cani cave. Tulas was a poor city, but it had many resoruces there. Their army was small, and the villagers had no militia experience

 

 

 

"Get'em all!" yelled out general Outane. He wore a strong black platebody and a bear Helmet. His sword was long and sharp, and it had the stains of a fallen warrior. The army of the Republic came in to fight. Massive smoke, and massive explosions erupted. "get all of our troops to move in!" said General outane, as he was getting very angry at his army.

 

 

 

Peace was going away slowly, and armies were moving in to capture the city of tulas. The battle of tulas was becoming big, and nobody wanted to hear about this deadly war.

 

 

 

Back in the palace of shintu. Where the walls were black, and the towers were long. The Domins, a religious group, came in to talk to queen dimitrus. " My queen, I beg of you. Let the tulas people go! They have suffered enough!" said the leader of the domins group. They wore wore black robes, and had their hoods on. They prayed to Zevi, a lord of the War. " Never! They shall pay for their ways, and must be carried out. Now be gone!"

 

 

 

Queen Dimitrus was dressed in a long black gown. She wore a curved crown, and she had necklaces and bracelets that gave her more power. The way she gave orders, was magnificent.

 

 

 

"Queen! we are losing numbers! We must get all of our nearby allies to join in!" Commander Zor. The only soldier in white armour. He was a born leader. He fought in the war of tulas. Back then, this war was for resources. Not like territory as it is now. He was wounded and now... Now he's back to win this war! "No! I shall do no such thing. You need to learn the ways of controlling this army! Now off you go!"

 

 

 

The war was big, and the tulas army was overpowering the republic army. The spears were flying to reach its target. The battle was along the beach. The sun was hitting the nice beach sand. Blood was going into the nice clear blue waters. It was a war, that was about to end. The palm trees were falling down to the ground. due to the cannons hitting them.

 

 

 

People were being crushed by those palm trees. The bodies slamming hard on their body, and their helmets are flying off. the wind passing by every few seconds. The water carrying off the dead soldiers. Crocons ( wild beasts that look like crocodiles, but are much bigger) where walking eating the dead, and eating some of the republic soldiers. These crocons were big and tulan soldiers, were riding these beasts.

 

 

 

The tulas army had weak armour, just chain bodies, spears, and swords. The tulas army slowly advance, and some die by the blood red sea. Crocons were being killed, and people were being trampled by the crocons, due to them falling hard on the ground.

 

 

 

"Retreat Republicans! Retreat!" yelled out general Outane. The battle was over, and the Tulas army had one big siigh of relief. "Yeahhh!" yelled out the soldiers. They faces had smiles, and they danced on that beach battleground.

 

 

 

"WHAAAT!" yelled out Queen Dimitrus. She was furious when she heard the news. "I'm sorry my Queen" as Commander Zor kneeled down to kiss her hand for forgiveness. she reached out and slapped him across the face. That sound echoed across the whole entire palace. "you fool. WE shall get our revenge. We shall rise up and attack when they are not ready" Queen dimitrus, made a fist, and raised her fist up slowly in the air.

 

 

 

Meanwhile, back in tulas. Many villagers were taking the bodies, and started to throw them in the sea... Then one villager yelled out "CELEBRATION!" Turoff, the leader of tulas, smiled and said " Thank our army for our win!" Turoff, a man with purple robes, and a feather hat, went inside his house. He then watched the major celebrationg, as he smiled and went off to bed

 

 

 

Chapter 2

 

Celebration

[Hopius]

The world was known for its beauty, and legacy. The war for tulas erupted south of the cani cave.

 

 

 

That should be Cani cave, its a proper noun.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Back in the palace of shintu.

 

 

 

Back in the palace of Shintu, proper noun :)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Get'em all!" yelled out general Outane. He wore a strong black platebody and a bear Helmet. His sword was long and sharp, and it had the stains of a fallen warrior.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Get'em all!" ordered General Outane who wore a strong black platebody and a bear helmet. His long, sharp sword had stains of a fallen warrior, this would be a better idea.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Its a good story.

[Hawks]

Please use correct capitalization and grammar. It should be Cani Cave, General Outane, etc.

[dragoonson]

Please use correct capitalization and grammar. It should be Cani Cave, General Outane, etc.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The War for Tulas erupted South of the Cani Cave.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looks more official eh?Oh Hawks,shall we begin our project?You start =D

[Zonorhc]

Good lord, where is the plot cohesion?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And the plausibility?

[Harakiri]

Good lord, where is the plot cohesion?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

And the plausibility?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

ALL HAIL LORD ZONORHC! THE ULTIMATE WRITER OF THIS FORUM! LISTEN TO HIS WORDS AND INDULGE IN THEM...BASK IN THEIR GLORY!