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[Gehackte]

Hi guys,

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Been a way for a looong looong time. So I decided to try out some new techniques i saw in different videos. And i came out with this. Giving it away but first editing it and need comment.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

V2:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

plz comment :twss:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

~Gehackte

[Sam]

FX messed up a bit, you need some foreground effects too.

[mister_moocky]

The little text in the corner constrasts too much, it looks out of place. My eye was insictivly drawn too the light, grey path in the top left corner, and I think some text would look good there:

 

 

 

 

 

 

Just a thought, looks great otherwise.

[Ouchy]

Ha! I was using the same Fractal a minute ago! :P

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Anyway, it looks really good, but just looks a teeny weeny bit rushed. Did it take long to make?

[pryomancer]

It had two focal points: the render on the right and the light area on the left. It doesn't work.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

You need to add depth, it looks very flat at the moment.

[Gehackte]

Thanks for all the comments. Adding depth would be a good idea yeah. And it wasn't rushed.

[pryomancer]

Get rid of the grey, and add in some shadows with dodge/burn and adjustment layers, that will help with the depth.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

A nice colour effect, go to Layer>New adjustment layer>gradient map

 

 

 

select two colours, try something like a light blue and a light gold colour, try others too

 

 

 

set the blend mode to 'color' and lower the opacity to what you like

 

 

 

it gives a nice effect if you want to change the colour of an image

[ThruItAll]

2 focals is always best.

[Shiny]

2 Focals is fine, but they try and challenge each other. I don't recommend putting text there as it would be really distracting. The other thing is colour. Listen to pyros words.

[Gehackte]

Thanks for the comments now going to make V2 anyone has any idea on where/or if i even should place text on it?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

EDIT:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

V2 now:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

[Gehackte]

Update need comment plz

[Ouchy]

To be honest, it looks worse...take away some of the blue and lower the intensity on the light ray on the Fractal.