November 7, 200817 yr any good? tried to add some of the tips i got from before.... : http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/
November 7, 200817 yr the left has to much plain black, the sword i dunno its kinna odd not sure what to say otherwise its not half bad
November 7, 200817 yr It is looking alright, but the text is barely readable, and the whole thing is quite empty. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
November 7, 200817 yr It is looking alright, but the text is barely readable There's text? :? I can't see any. Sig is alright.
November 7, 200817 yr Yeah, there is. Like I said, you can barley see it. It is just above the sword, in purple saying "Immortal". My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages.
November 7, 200817 yr Author yeah.... Ouchy is correct thanks for the tips.... so: Use more space make text more unique http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/
November 7, 200817 yr Use space wisely. and text is [cabbage] so don't put it danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât
November 8, 200817 yr Everything's pretty blurry too, make sure your effects look clean. pixel avvy by me deviantART
November 13, 200817 yr Other then whats been mentioned, I would try and clean up the sword. It just doesn't look right, its kinda like it was just paste onto the guy's hand. Is there anyway you could pull up the image so you can see it a little in his right hand?
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