beesafree Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 any good? tried to add some of the tips i got from before.... : http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stilev Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 the left has to much plain black, the sword i dunno its kinna odd not sure what to say otherwise its not half bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 It is looking alright, but the text is barely readable, and the whole thing is quite empty. My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 It is looking alright, but the text is barely readable There's text? :? I can't see any. Sig is alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ouchy Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 Yeah, there is. Like I said, you can barley see it. It is just above the sword, in purple saying "Immortal". My relaxation method involves a bottle of lotion, beautiful women, and partial nudity. Yes I get massages. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beesafree Posted November 7, 2008 Author Share Posted November 7, 2008 yeah.... Ouchy is correct thanks for the tips.... so: Use more space make text more unique http://forums.thegamehomepage.com/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThruItAll Posted November 7, 2008 Share Posted November 7, 2008 Use space wisely. and text is [cabbage] so don't put it danke Schon Sam!^^"Blood runs thicker, oh were thick as thieves you know"-Carl Barât Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jopie211 Posted November 8, 2008 Share Posted November 8, 2008 Everything's pretty blurry too, make sure your effects look clean. pixel avvy by me deviantART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadril Posted November 9, 2008 Share Posted November 9, 2008 Too much black space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stevepole Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 Other then whats been mentioned, I would try and clean up the sword. It just doesn't look right, its kinda like it was just paste onto the guy's hand. Is there anyway you could pull up the image so you can see it a little in his right hand? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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